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Apogée 14
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“…Bette? Would you like to have dinner? I’d really like to catch up and see you again.” Kit said; the club owner knew she was putting herself out there but she didn’t care, all she wanted was her baby sister back. Bette inhaled slowly, she wasn’t over what had happened between them that was for sure but the brunette decided it was time to start making amends.
“Sure Kit what when do you want to meet?” Bette said slowly, she honestly hoped she wasn’t making a huge mistake by agreeing to see her sister again. Kit’s voice brightened as she spoke, obviously delighted at the chance to see Bette again.
“Tomorrow at six ok? That pier we used to always go to?” Kit said, Bette smiling, she’d already taken Tina early last week.
“I’ll see you there?” Kit said with a sugary-sweetness that almost made the brunette sick as she smiled and confirmed.
“I’ll see you there Kit.”
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Alice sat inside a stall in the bathroom, she wasn’t crying anymore, she’d barely done that, but the writer was still angry and didn’t want to cause any trouble. Dana walked into the bathroom; the writer recognized the agent’s humming and froze not wanting to have to face Dana and seem weak. Dana entered the stall next to Alice and the blonde felt a tickling at her nose. Alice tried to hold back the sneeze but failed miserably, the sound echoing through the bathroom and calling the agents attention. Dana looked at the shoes in the stall next to her and noticed them…no one else is going to wear comfortable slip-ons to work,
“Alice?” Dana called out the writer answering as chipper as she could,
“Yeah,” The writer replied, Dana automatically detecting something different in her voice.
“What’s wrong? You sound different.” The agent stared at the shoes under the stall after flushing the toilet and washing her hands. The agent tapping on Alice’s stall, the writer speaking through the locked door.
“Nope nothing’s wrong I’m fine but you can’t come in…I’m doing number two.” The writer said looking for an adequate lie and realizing that was a bad one, Dana chuckled tapping on the door again.
“Ok Alice if you’re doing number two, why are your pants up?” Dana asked still smiling as Alice cursed to herself looking down at her pants that were in fact on her waist. The writer unlocked the stall and Dana walked in, immediately noticing that she’d been crying, due to the large wad of tissue in one hand and Alice’s slightly red eyes. The agent grabbed the tissue from Alice’s had and closed the stall door behind them, the area where the writer had been sitting barely large enough for both of them. Dana held the blonde by her waist and pulled Alice hips to hers moving them slowly, not to arouse but comfort.
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well i love it as ussual. yes im new to the L word part of this website. i was focussing on the South of Nowhere part, but decided to check things out over here, and instantly fell for your stories! please continue!
Did you tell me whether or not Carmen has a hidden agenda? Did you really??Thinking back…I do have some ideas on what’s going on with the s/l of Sharmen,but I can’t remember that particular part. See, like I said before, I tend to forget those small details which end up to be important for the story. :SShane is going to learn Carmen how to fight?! That’s somehting I would like to see. :) Helena’s hands aren’t all clean, are they? What happened between Kit and Bette? I hope Alice can prove Inspector Dunne wrong. That will show him. He needs to back off for a hile…he can be a threat for her relationship with Dana. And yes, you really need to draw a chart for us, I’m all confused now! ;)
Wow!!! This is just the greatest fic I`ve ever read, really awesome! I love it!! This is so completely different from all the other fics and your fantasy is just amazing! Please continue, I`m kinda addicted to it! ;) By the way, I`m from a small town in Bavaria, Germany ;)
Alice has a whole lot of self-control – that Dunne dude is a real chump. I love how goo goo Bette is for Tina – it’s very sweet. Things are going to go Kaboom when Tina finds out about Bette’s involvement in the murder. Oh and born and still living in Miami.
Damn right I am angry. IC really screwed up a very good show to give us her very pathetic life story. Whoa, Alice is good. Maybe it was Helena and not Bette that ordered Marcus’s death. It looks like Carmen was out to get Helena but got mixed up with Shane instead. I am sure hoping that Bette gets to be involved with Tina and not have it blow up in her face. Florida
I’ve got a question….what does the story’s title mean? unless you answered that already…
I like this story, and from France
This story gets better and better with every post, Baby-girl!!! I love it!! Oh! I’m from Arkansas, down in O-town (Osceola), lame, yeah, I know, but hey it’s home for now. LMFAO!! Anyways, post soon, and I gotta’ have my Sharmen fix 8-) LYLAS ;-p
so what you’re saying is that carmen might also be an assassin? that would be suuhweeeet. and i can’t believe dunne just walked out. what a toolbox.p.s. upstate ny.
Phenomenal update! I loved it. It was Alice and Dana palooza. I love Danish. I was a little skeptical when I saw Alice does number two in the summary. I ended up laughing really hard when Alice actually said that she was doing number two. Everyone always tries to downplay Alice’s chart, but it’s a vital part of who she is. She knows that there is always some kind of connection, and I think that she is intelligent and unique in the way she presents this. Now, Helena is involved. I love how you tie everything together. Everything’s connected.A strong, intelligent, comforting and more confident FBI-Dana totally rocks!Haha! Bette and the infamous drive-by.Keep up the great writting. I can’t wait for more.
I forgot to tell you…and I was telling myself the whole time not to forget to say where I’m from…I tend to be a bit absent minded at times..I’m from Western New York.
Well darling, it appears that you have no trouble writing… how do you do it? I need some lessons.. please teach me, lol. Love Mark and Gomey as usual.. I could almost hear Gomey go splat on the sidewalk,lol. I’m curious as to what Helena has to do with all this.. what is she hiding? Inspector Dunne… what a bastard he is. Alice should’ve given him a piece of her mind. I hope she gets the chance to prove her theory and rub it in his face. I love your one liners.. I don’t know which one was funnier the one where Alice says she’s doing number two or where Dana calls her on it by saying why are your pants up.. LMAO. Alice seems to kick all those other agents asses when it comes to smarts. I do love the way you write this and I hate that you left me hanging. Just like mine.. I see more mystery then clues, lol. I hope you have more soon… till then I’ll be wrapped in this blanket, sweltering in this heat. I’ll be looking for you… where are you ClosetDana? lol
Excellent! My brain is tired to even figure anything out so I’m just going to kick up my feet and relax! NY is in the hause!
I have to say this story rocks. I have not commented in awhile (actually I typically don’t comment…the whole shy thing) because I was actually on vacation in Indiana and I love it there. I have family there. Great state and I am putting some serious thought into moving there. I’m currently in NY. Anyway I love this bette and tina. Any strong bette is a major turn on. Thanks for writing.
Wow Drama and action keep coming!!!!!!!!!!!
This is the best story ever! And I mean it! This is great, the whole mystery and the whole chart-linking! It is such a joy to read every chap and there would be something new and unexpected to turn up at every turn! I love this story and I am going to definitely print it out once it is finish to read thru it completely again! Loving the mystery, loving every point in this FIC!
What can I say? I loved it, just like all your other updates! :-) I wanted to check the site one last time before I went to bed, and I’m really glad that I did! I do have to say how dare you leave us hanging like that though! Ok, I’ve said it! And to answer your question of where everyone is from, I’m from Dallas. Not to exciting. Thanks for the awesome update!
I loved your this chapter as well as the one before it… Well done ClosetDana.
fantastic! is it me or was there a whole lot of danish! yay
lol the mark and gomey stuff was priceless i SO pictured bette taking out her gun.. and doing an actual drive by! Ty for an evil person! that Dunne :growls: for some reason im thinking he had something to do with Lara dying.. dun dun dun!!
waiting as always for the next chap! lol :) oh and i’m from New York but living in Puerto Rico at the moment. ps: had to spread my comment since it didn’t fit all in one :)
of the many! one of the greatest things in ur fic is the suspense! poor alice with her lil connect the dots i..SHE HAD SOMETHING there what was it?.. lol i hope Dana isnt too hard on her, she’s usally really good at connecting things if only they let her finish.
No, a boomwhacker is one pipe-like thing that plays one note when you hit it against something. Like, you hit one on the floor and hear a C. The next one up plays a C#, etc. I suck at explaining things. =/ And no, the writing isn’t what makes me not like Sharmen. I’m just not a big fan of either character. Dunne is still a dick. >:O Can’t really comment on B&T as we only got a taste of them as opposed to a whole dish. Oh, and I’m from West Virginia. Uh, yay?
Didn’t get a chance to comment last time, but I’m a definite TiBetter through and through. The other couples are okayand well written, but the B/T action is what I look forward to. More next time? And from NY, thanks for writing!
Good as always! post soon!
Yeah!!! I am so pumped you updated! You already know I love your stuff. and I love Danish so this chapter rocked :) Keep it up. I’m from Illinois…mostly corn fields.haha
as always another great chapter, bloody marvelous, i could have punched that lil fucker dunnes lights outs as well lol. oh im from hampshire in the UK.
WOW!! I’m in love with this story!! Everything’s starting to come to play!! What’s going to happen between Dana and Alice? Is Shane going to help Carmen shot a ‘rifle’? Tina and Bette are amazing in this story, and is Kit going to be there for her baby sister? So much question, so many that will be answered!! Thanks again, keep up with the good writing!!!
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, but please more B&T–TiBette forever! Thanks for posting, you are amazing. I live in Arizona by way of Califonia, Oregon, and Utah.
WOW! My theory is complete shit. Your chap.threw me in a different direction w/ this story. Why the hell didn’t Dana let Alice finish after Dunne walks out? Can’t wait to see if everyone’s a gun for hire. Great update. I’m from N.Y.C
Hé I just got back from my holiday and trying to catch up asap on my reading. So just a quick comment and still loving this story. PS I’m from Holland.