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Apogée 14
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“What’s wrong? Did something happen?” Dana said looking worried into Alice’s eyes, the writer smiling back and thinking about how lucky she was. Alice shook her head slowly relishing in the contact and desperately needing more of Dana. The writer pulled Dana close and laid her head on the agent’s shoulder,
“No, I’m just worried about the presentation is all. I just want it to go well and I’m a little nervous.” Alice lied, the writer wasn’t sure she’d done the right thing by not telling Dana about what Inspector Dunne had said but she wasn’t sure how the agent would react and Alice figured she could always tell her later.
Dana pulled back and kissed Alice on the lips slowly, running her fingers through the writer’s hair and pulling her closer. Alice grabbed on tightly to Dana needing the closeness now more than ever, the agent pulled back after a few minutes placing a kiss on the tip of Alice’s nose and motioning out of the stall.
“Are you feeling better now? The meeting is in ten minutes,” Alice nodded following Dana out of the stall and then out of the bathroom saying.
“When I’m with you I’m ready for anything.”
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Alice entered the conference room with a self-satisfied smile on her face, giving Inspector Dunne a confident smirk that she wasn’t feeling. Dana was already upfront calling attention to the room when the writer took a seat,
“Ok ladies and gentleman, another week has passed. No reports have been turned in so I am assuming…and please don’t make an ass out of me, that more than one of you has a presentation on your theory and or evidence. Please raise your hands and I will call on you to present.” Three agents including Alice raised their hands, Dana decided to go in order of ranking which put the writer last.
The first agent to present was an older man with sandy blonde hair, Alice remembered him from the last conference meeting. His theory was that Shane had a partner; he had very little evidence. Shane had worked with a partner in the past but the partner was always the same and was also now deceased. Alice laughed to herself as he drew diagrams she couldn’t understand, and that didn’t make logical sense.
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well i love it as ussual. yes im new to the L word part of this website. i was focussing on the South of Nowhere part, but decided to check things out over here, and instantly fell for your stories! please continue!
Did you tell me whether or not Carmen has a hidden agenda? Did you really??Thinking back…I do have some ideas on what’s going on with the s/l of Sharmen,but I can’t remember that particular part. See, like I said before, I tend to forget those small details which end up to be important for the story. :SShane is going to learn Carmen how to fight?! That’s somehting I would like to see. :) Helena’s hands aren’t all clean, are they? What happened between Kit and Bette? I hope Alice can prove Inspector Dunne wrong. That will show him. He needs to back off for a hile…he can be a threat for her relationship with Dana. And yes, you really need to draw a chart for us, I’m all confused now! ;)
Wow!!! This is just the greatest fic I`ve ever read, really awesome! I love it!! This is so completely different from all the other fics and your fantasy is just amazing! Please continue, I`m kinda addicted to it! ;) By the way, I`m from a small town in Bavaria, Germany ;)
Alice has a whole lot of self-control – that Dunne dude is a real chump. I love how goo goo Bette is for Tina – it’s very sweet. Things are going to go Kaboom when Tina finds out about Bette’s involvement in the murder. Oh and born and still living in Miami.
Damn right I am angry. IC really screwed up a very good show to give us her very pathetic life story. Whoa, Alice is good. Maybe it was Helena and not Bette that ordered Marcus’s death. It looks like Carmen was out to get Helena but got mixed up with Shane instead. I am sure hoping that Bette gets to be involved with Tina and not have it blow up in her face. Florida
I’ve got a question….what does the story’s title mean? unless you answered that already…
I like this story, and from France
This story gets better and better with every post, Baby-girl!!! I love it!! Oh! I’m from Arkansas, down in O-town (Osceola), lame, yeah, I know, but hey it’s home for now. LMFAO!! Anyways, post soon, and I gotta’ have my Sharmen fix 8-) LYLAS ;-p
so what you’re saying is that carmen might also be an assassin? that would be suuhweeeet. and i can’t believe dunne just walked out. what a toolbox.p.s. upstate ny.
Phenomenal update! I loved it. It was Alice and Dana palooza. I love Danish. I was a little skeptical when I saw Alice does number two in the summary. I ended up laughing really hard when Alice actually said that she was doing number two. Everyone always tries to downplay Alice’s chart, but it’s a vital part of who she is. She knows that there is always some kind of connection, and I think that she is intelligent and unique in the way she presents this. Now, Helena is involved. I love how you tie everything together. Everything’s connected.A strong, intelligent, comforting and more confident FBI-Dana totally rocks!Haha! Bette and the infamous drive-by.Keep up the great writting. I can’t wait for more.
I forgot to tell you…and I was telling myself the whole time not to forget to say where I’m from…I tend to be a bit absent minded at times..I’m from Western New York.
Well darling, it appears that you have no trouble writing… how do you do it? I need some lessons.. please teach me, lol. Love Mark and Gomey as usual.. I could almost hear Gomey go splat on the sidewalk,lol. I’m curious as to what Helena has to do with all this.. what is she hiding? Inspector Dunne… what a bastard he is. Alice should’ve given him a piece of her mind. I hope she gets the chance to prove her theory and rub it in his face. I love your one liners.. I don’t know which one was funnier the one where Alice says she’s doing number two or where Dana calls her on it by saying why are your pants up.. LMAO. Alice seems to kick all those other agents asses when it comes to smarts. I do love the way you write this and I hate that you left me hanging. Just like mine.. I see more mystery then clues, lol. I hope you have more soon… till then I’ll be wrapped in this blanket, sweltering in this heat. I’ll be looking for you… where are you ClosetDana? lol
Excellent! My brain is tired to even figure anything out so I’m just going to kick up my feet and relax! NY is in the hause!
I have to say this story rocks. I have not commented in awhile (actually I typically don’t comment…the whole shy thing) because I was actually on vacation in Indiana and I love it there. I have family there. Great state and I am putting some serious thought into moving there. I’m currently in NY. Anyway I love this bette and tina. Any strong bette is a major turn on. Thanks for writing.
Wow Drama and action keep coming!!!!!!!!!!!
This is the best story ever! And I mean it! This is great, the whole mystery and the whole chart-linking! It is such a joy to read every chap and there would be something new and unexpected to turn up at every turn! I love this story and I am going to definitely print it out once it is finish to read thru it completely again! Loving the mystery, loving every point in this FIC!
What can I say? I loved it, just like all your other updates! :-) I wanted to check the site one last time before I went to bed, and I’m really glad that I did! I do have to say how dare you leave us hanging like that though! Ok, I’ve said it! And to answer your question of where everyone is from, I’m from Dallas. Not to exciting. Thanks for the awesome update!
I loved your this chapter as well as the one before it… Well done ClosetDana.
fantastic! is it me or was there a whole lot of danish! yay
lol the mark and gomey stuff was priceless i SO pictured bette taking out her gun.. and doing an actual drive by! Ty for an evil person! that Dunne :growls: for some reason im thinking he had something to do with Lara dying.. dun dun dun!!
waiting as always for the next chap! lol :) oh and i’m from New York but living in Puerto Rico at the moment. ps: had to spread my comment since it didn’t fit all in one :)
of the many! one of the greatest things in ur fic is the suspense! poor alice with her lil connect the dots i..SHE HAD SOMETHING there what was it?.. lol i hope Dana isnt too hard on her, she’s usally really good at connecting things if only they let her finish.
No, a boomwhacker is one pipe-like thing that plays one note when you hit it against something. Like, you hit one on the floor and hear a C. The next one up plays a C#, etc. I suck at explaining things. =/ And no, the writing isn’t what makes me not like Sharmen. I’m just not a big fan of either character. Dunne is still a dick. >:O Can’t really comment on B&T as we only got a taste of them as opposed to a whole dish. Oh, and I’m from West Virginia. Uh, yay?
Didn’t get a chance to comment last time, but I’m a definite TiBetter through and through. The other couples are okayand well written, but the B/T action is what I look forward to. More next time? And from NY, thanks for writing!
Good as always! post soon!
Yeah!!! I am so pumped you updated! You already know I love your stuff. and I love Danish so this chapter rocked :) Keep it up. I’m from Illinois…mostly corn fields.haha
as always another great chapter, bloody marvelous, i could have punched that lil fucker dunnes lights outs as well lol. oh im from hampshire in the UK.
WOW!! I’m in love with this story!! Everything’s starting to come to play!! What’s going to happen between Dana and Alice? Is Shane going to help Carmen shot a ‘rifle’? Tina and Bette are amazing in this story, and is Kit going to be there for her baby sister? So much question, so many that will be answered!! Thanks again, keep up with the good writing!!!
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, but please more B&T–TiBette forever! Thanks for posting, you are amazing. I live in Arizona by way of Califonia, Oregon, and Utah.
WOW! My theory is complete shit. Your chap.threw me in a different direction w/ this story. Why the hell didn’t Dana let Alice finish after Dunne walks out? Can’t wait to see if everyone’s a gun for hire. Great update. I’m from N.Y.C
Hé I just got back from my holiday and trying to catch up asap on my reading. So just a quick comment and still loving this story. PS I’m from Holland.