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    Apogée 3

    Story written on May 10, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=60799
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    Dana interrogates Carmen as Alice waits for her to come home. Shane gets closer to Carmen, and Bette decides to go to the funeral.

        Shane peered in confused, only taking two steps into the cheerful pink and blue baby room. Footsteps where heard behind her as Carmen walked oblivious through the front door of the house, throwing her keys on the table and heading toward the bathroom. Shane ducked quickly behind into her room deciding to take a second to level herself before screwing on the small silencer she’d just purchased for her gun. Carmen sat on the toilet finally relaxing, humming a song and as Shane pointed her gun through the door for a clean shot into the bathroom the doorbell rang. A noise that surprised both of them, sending Carmen running to answer the front door, and Shane running for the back door. This had to be clean, no bullshit and as Shane slipped out of the back door she realized this might be a little harder than she thought.

    Carmen opened the door to two black suits and she had to laugh to herself as they presented their badges.

        "Agent Buchannan and Agent Moldonado do you mind if we come in?" Carmen didn’t care at this point throwing her hands to usher the two men in, she giggled despite the graves situation.

        You know you guys look like something out of that movie ‘Men in Black’, did you see that one Tommy Lee Jones…Will Smith…whatever." Carmen sat down and offered a seat to the two agents who remainded standing.

        "We’ve just received orders to escort you to an FBI safehouse. We have reason to believe that Shane has or will be here and Agent Fairbanks would like to relocate you temporarily for your safety." The small grin that lined Carmen’s face was gone as her eyes shifted around the room,

        "You think she was already here?" The younger agent that introduced himself as Buchannan stepped forward,

    "There is no need to panic Miss Morales, we just need you to pack a bag with some things and come with us." Carmen wiped her forehead disbelieving,

        "This is fucking insane…what the fuck!" Carmen stood up and walked to her bedroom to pack her things, passing the private bedroom, door ajar, on her way down the hall.

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    4. Oi, I totally agree about Kit and am glad to be able to catch her in a power role…Shane is still cool and I love the way Dana is so sweet and tough at the same time. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. I hope you post on your other fic too, love that one. Cheers mate!!

    5. Well you do write fast…I’m sure you have big plans for a cliffhanger, can’t wait to read. That was a close call for Carmen.I’m actually looking forward to hearing Dana’s embarrassing story. Love that they got so close so fast, lol. Kinda left me hangin with the accident. You do a great twisted tale, my dear. Update real soon… send me a little something to appease me.

    6. For a sec’ I thought Carmen had a kid, when Shane walked into that pink & blue room. Also cool that Dana is a cop. Every character seems to be important to your story, they’re all linked in this assassination. Great job.

    8. Damn girl there is so much drama here that I do not have a clue where to start. First of all, can you just steal the girls away from that mean lady over at Showtime. She has no clue how to make them work. Yes, I am a Tibetter but all the girls should have been treated better than they were last season. I am still trying to figure out why Bette wanted that guy killed. He must have stole more than just money (like maybe her girl). Okay, bad joke sorry. I love this novel and would have a terrible time putting it down. Keep it going.

    10. Wow, you update so fast, I couldn’t even comment on your last chapter (btw, I loved bed head Alice!)! I really like the direction this story is going. :D I wonder what Jenny is up to.

    11. Woo hoo! Danish! Your writing has officialy made me come out of lurking. This is the first time that I’m leaving a comment here. I’m really enjoying you fic and I can’t wait to see where it’s headed.

    15. Hey this is a great story, really interesting and diffirent, I love your Dana, but not much about B&T yet. I’m looking forward to how you will make Tina fall in love with her husbands real murder!!!! Keep’em coming….

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