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Apogée 3
"Holy shit she’s been here." The two agents sprung into action rushing down the hall guns drawn.
"Fuck getting a bag, just take me wherever it is your going to take me. I want to get the fuck away from this shit as fast as possible." Carmen hopped in a black Tahoe, that sped off down the street. A pair of steel blue eyes watching the bartender go, once again.
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Alice woke up at nine-thirty sighing, the pillow next to her was empty, which meant Dana was still off at her job. The writer rolled out of the large bed and sleepily dragged her feet toward the kitchen,
"Motherfucker," Dana didn’t lie when she said that everything the blonde would need was in the kitchen. Every fruit, vegetable and condiment was neatly aligned in the expansive steel accented kitchen. Alice gave an impressed whistle as she picked up a small flower and a note Dana had written on the counter.
Alice,
I lied when I said I didn’t have an embarrassing story to tell…Have dinner with me tonight and I’ll be sure to tell you all about it.
-D
P.S. 555-2633 call me after you read this
The writer stared confused as she looked at the small daisy,
"Where the fuck did she get a flower at five in the morning?" Alice realized she said this out loud and got a little embarrassed, having always said the mark of a true nutcase was talking aloud to oneself. The writer scanned the kitchen looking for a phone finding it near the sliding back porch doors and receiving an answer to the question she’d just mused aloud. Behind Dana’s beautiful home was a flower garden with colors so bright and vivid Alice swore the flowers weren’t real, she dialed the number to Dana’s cell phone still in awe of the flower beds that even lined the windowsill. Dana picked up her phone after only one ring,
"Nice to hear you’re up sleepy-head, did you find everything alright?" Dana spoke in a low voice that made Alice’s skin tingle, she smiled into the phone blushing slightly at just the sound of Dana’s voice.
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(54 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
shit, this is a hot story. Im a huge sharmen fan and its killing me to find out what happens next. fuck, carmen’s so hot..lol
I love this story, please continue!!
i’ve never posted but i wanna say that ur story has got me hooked gr8 job :)
Oi, I totally agree about Kit and am glad to be able to catch her in a power role…Shane is still cool and I love the way Dana is so sweet and tough at the same time. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. I hope you post on your other fic too, love that one. Cheers mate!!
Well you do write fast…I’m sure you have big plans for a cliffhanger, can’t wait to read. That was a close call for Carmen.I’m actually looking forward to hearing Dana’s embarrassing story. Love that they got so close so fast, lol. Kinda left me hangin with the accident. You do a great twisted tale, my dear. Update real soon… send me a little something to appease me.
For a sec’ I thought Carmen had a kid, when Shane walked into that pink & blue room. Also cool that Dana is a cop. Every character seems to be important to your story, they’re all linked in this assassination. Great job.
This is like action movie and going to be fun. OK let see whats next, thanks!
Damn girl there is so much drama here that I do not have a clue where to start. First of all, can you just steal the girls away from that mean lady over at Showtime. She has no clue how to make them work. Yes, I am a Tibetter but all the girls should have been treated better than they were last season. I am still trying to figure out why Bette wanted that guy killed. He must have stole more than just money (like maybe her girl). Okay, bad joke sorry. I love this novel and would have a terrible time putting it down. Keep it going.
Cool I’m the first to comment.I love your story ClosetDana, I can’t get enough of it. =)
Wow, you update so fast, I couldn’t even comment on your last chapter (btw, I loved bed head Alice!)! I really like the direction this story is going. :D I wonder what Jenny is up to.
Woo hoo! Danish! Your writing has officialy made me come out of lurking. This is the first time that I’m leaving a comment here. I’m really enjoying you fic and I can’t wait to see where it’s headed.
:O!!! dude! no cliff hangers!!
noooooooooooooooo!!!! u cant stop there!!! i wanna know what happened!!!! plz continue!!!
What’s up with the cliffhanger?! You can’t do that! I want to know what happened!! LoL…Keep up the good work!! Thanks!
Hey this is a great story, really interesting and diffirent, I love your Dana, but not much about B&T yet. I’m looking forward to how you will make Tina fall in love with her husbands real murder!!!! Keep’em coming….