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Apogée 7
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“And there are three bedrooms for you to do that in, this is the living room. Where people live, not sleep all day, shuffling to the bathroom, holding the ribs she won’t let me check.” Shane leaned against the armrest looking at the back of the bartender’s head.
“…You said it yourself, they’re broken, there’s nothing you can do.” Carmen’s eyebrows lifted looking at Shane’s midsection, shaking her head and popping a chip in her mouth.
“Doubtful…I lied, you’d barely be able to take in a deep breath if they were broken…if I had to say anything I’d say they were bruised at best…but you probably do have an infection on some of those cuts, you know plain water doesn’t really do much.” The bartender gave a knowing smile that made Shane feel stupid, the assassin frowned,
“I didn’t realize you got your Ph.D. at South California Bartender’s School,” Carmen looked at the assassin surprised, Shane only smirked, wondering how the sexy Latina had lifted her mood so easily.
“Yeah I know a little something too,” The bartender moved closer to Shane directing her to turn around and take off her shirt.
“Whatever, I was an EMT right out of high school,” Carmen looked at the cuts that ran along Shane’s back and up her arms,
“Where did these come from?” The bartender ran her fingers along the angry red slashes on the assassin’s arms and neck. Shane only smiled turning around to catch a glance from Carmen,
“Oh…um sorry about that…” Carmen threw the bloodstained shirt onto the floor, running to the bedroom, and returning with a large first-aid kit.
“You don’t need stitches on any of these, they’re pretty deep but not long.” The bartender took her time cleaning each wound running her fingers along the scratches; secretly a little happy she’d left them. Carmen winced looking at the two final cuts that remained: one that still held a piece of glass and the other ran below the belt.
“You usually sleep on your back, don’t you.” Shane’s head rose slightly looking ahead and closing her eyes as Carmen’s fingers traveled along her spine.
“It’s…easier, and safer.” The assassin mumbled as Carmen grabbed a pair of tweezers placing one hand on Shane’s bare shoulder, the warmth of Carmen’s hand causing the assassin’s belly to warm.
“I can tell because you look really uncomfortable on your side and there’s a piece of glass in your back you had been trying to sleep on, wedged in there good…and I’ve got to pull it out…are you ready?” Shane’s nodded, her pain tolerance was pretty high and—
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Great update. I think Dana needs to do a bit more “apologizing”…for like the entire night. Danish is my favorite, but you have me very interested in Bette and Tina. I can’t wait to see what’s coming.
wow. i’ve been reading since the beginning and i love it. I never thought I could be interested in a story that didn’t follow the show, but you do such an amazing job. i always get excited when i see an update from you. i’m ready for shane and carmen to kick some ass or something in the next chapter. this is seriously great.
I loved the part with Mark and Gomey. I really have to go back and reread the story from the beginning. I have such a one track mind – danish, danish, danish – but the rest of the story is really good too!
Gomey & Mark are such idiots, hope Shane and Carmen take care of them. They make a great reluctant team Really enjoying how you write Bette & Tina (plz don’t let your Tina be a punk). Great update, post soon.
You are so naughty… using Shane’s wounds to give Carmen an excuse to touch her. Guess you don’t need the props. I give you ideas?… what kind?lol. You actually have me going with the Tibette now, wondering if something will happen or not. No matter which story, you continually love to tease me. Tell me if I’m wrong. I won’t be expecting much from Alice/Dana for now…. don’t want to get my hopes up to have you yank good times away from me, lol. Gee… the bug bite, sounds oddly familiar… where ever did you get that idea, hmmmm? Gomey and Mark, what a wonderful team, of jokers that is. Thanks for this latest chapter… sorry if I’m not my usually witty self but there is pain involved.
I am so in love with this story, not just the Shane/Carmen parts but everything! Dana and Alice sounds divine together. And Tina is romancing the enemy~! I smell drama… and would be checking in everyday for an update.
Another well rounded chapter with a cliffhanger no less! Glad to hear you’ve got plans for B/T. Enjoy your weekend and thanks for writing!
So Shane has worked for Bette before. Bette sentenced to prison, interesting. I wonder what she looks like in an orange jump suite or black and white stripes. How did Dana mess up Alice professionally? I know that she hurt Alice personally but not how she hurt her professionally. Bette and Tina are firing on 2 of their 6 cylinders. Post soon, please!
OMG…this was great. I love Gomey and Mark, they are really funny, I could just picture Mark shooting critter off the Gomey’s back.LOL…Carm and Shane, awesome, they are so cute together and I’m glad that Dana saw the light about my girl, she sure doesn’t want to make Al mad…hmmm, now does she? Yep, the cabbage patch to Country music is quite a sight, let me tell ya I get paid for it (okay, to stop). But, I still love it. **Doing my dance for ya** CD…cheers mate.
hooray for dana calling alice, sexyness between tina bette, shane and carmen are so good together, i like their situation the best. fantastic job, can’t wait till the next update. i wonder what’ll happen next?
Good chapter. Let see how Dana gonna apologize to Alice, Bette and Tina are getting some hot coming and can’t wait to see it, Carmen and Shane are in trouble now and hope they are ok. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I hope that Dana has a better apology than she had on the phone!! I’m liking the connection with Sharmen, are they going to be the next bonnie and clyde?? LoL..As for TiBette, good as always…Keep it going!!!
Usually when I read stories where all of the pairings are in, I tend to read only the parts with my favorite one (do I need to say which one…yes, it’s Danish). But you got me interested in all of them, that’s a first! :) I especially like the tension with Sharmen I have to agree with brtyes, very naughty to use Shane’s wounds like that :D ). Dana needs to do a lot of apologizing. I hope Alice will fall for it. Mark and Gomey really are the slapstick-figures of this story (but I don’t think I should underestimate them…I think that they’re more capable then they seem (or am I totally wrong?). Let’s hope my notebook doesn’t fall hard on the floor, otherwise I wouldn’t even be able to PM you for a snippet! ;) (Btw, does the name Papi refer to the character who is being rumored to be in S4?)
I just read the last 3 chapters U posted. I loved them a lot. sorry I didn’t comment on them I got way behind Hun.BTW I will wear the title Maestro the Bad Boy of Fan Fiction in my signature from this day forward. =)