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Archipelago
“Jenny, this is my friend Will. Will this is Jenny,” Shane introduced as she and Will sat down. Jenny shook Will’s outstretched hand.
“The surrogate pen pal, I presume. Shane tells me that you might have a novel out soon?” Will greeted. Jenny turned an intresting shade of pink as Will mentioned her novel.
“Uh yeah, Leonard wants me to write one anyway, and he said he’ll publish it,” Jenny explained apprehensively. Shane looked between her two friends. Will looked, as usual, unphased, but Jenny was starting to bear close resemblance to a tomato.
“What’s it going to be about?” Will asked leaning back on the lounge. Jenny fidgeted uncomfortably as she broke with Will’s eyes and started to stumble into an explanation.
“Well, Leonard asked me to write something about my life, but, uh I don’t, I don’t know about that,” Jenny responded.
“Why not?” Will posed? She tilted her head to one side and studied Jenny. Shane had naturally told her about all her friends at rehab. Will had insisted in her doing so so Shane would have something to focus on during her bouts with the “shakes.” Jenny was only half of what she had imagined her to be. Truthfully Will had thought she would be a bit more eccentric. Shane described her roomate as “a little strange, but she’s a writer so she’s supposed to be.” She did say, however, that she was thoughtful and very bright. Will had pictured a sadistic kindergarten teacher but Jenny appeared more kindergarten teacher than sadistic.
“Well, I’m not sure I really um want to go into all of that,” Jenny explained. Will smiled.
“Too many ghosts to bury?” Will asked. Jenny had an exclaimed look on her face. Can she read my mind, she wondered to herself. Are my demons that obvious? “I’m sorry, that was a bit too presumptuous of me.”
Jenny only half smiled. “No, no. It’s ok. You’re probably right, actually. There are a lot of things from my past I don’t really want to deal with. That’s probably why I’ve been putting this off,” Jenny continued. Shane stared puzzled at her friend.
“Putting what off?” she asked making sure her friend was indeed alright. She remembered all to well the scene in the tub where she had once pulled her room mate out of a bloody wave. Jenny sighed as she once again searched the room for anything to stare at than the two people sitting oppositte from her.
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Yay aussie ur back and i didnt have to wait!! Ok so now i have to read the story I’ll be right back.LOL
God, your good ! I can’t believe this is your first fic. You left us hanging with Shane/Carmen , I can’t wait to read the next one!! 5 stars!!!
great story,your one of the better fanfic writers i’ve came across, you seem to know the characters well. hope to read more soon
oh, and forgot to add, just a suggestion, and this is the only fault i could find, maybe leave a double space when you change scenes, i got a little confused
An Archipelago is a series of small islands surrounded by a huge body of water, luvs_the_l-word. I felt that information I gave were small islands surrounded by a bigger story.
RedFrog I shall put in Double Spaces next time since you believe it would allow the story to flow better. Thank you for the constructive criticism.
and i forgot to mention that your grammar was excellent!!
Okay so i lied, i wasn’t going to come right back but hey at least i came back to tell you how amazing this story is and just out of curiousity how did you come up with the title and what does it mean? i have a feeling that I will be asking that question over and over again. Can’t wait for your next installment please post soon!!!
i was reading it again (cuz i just cant get enough of ur stories) and i noticed something does the mysterious black book in the beginning have anything to do with the black book that jenny’s mom had? just another question and thanx for answering my other one i jus love ur titles!!