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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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"Tina . ." Bette whispered as her hands slipped around to clutch Tina’s back, her fingers splayed and once again feeling the lace design. The soft music combined with the wine created an intoxicating mix, her head was swimming with thoughts of all the things she wanted to do to Tina. With each sway their hips made to the music, Bette found it harder and harder to contain herself.
With each sway their hips made to the music, Bette found it harder to control herself. She pulled Tina in closer, burying her face in all that silky blonde hair and inhaled the deep scent of wildflowers. The scent of Tina’s shampoo and perfume mixed together proved to be an incredible aphrodisiac.
Bette’s hands slowly caressed Tina’s back, the lace design tickled her palms and fingertips on each passing. She didn’t get the chance to really admire the design before and given current her state, Bette desired nothing more than to see it. She pulled back slightly, one hand confidently on Tina’s hips while the other held onto her hand. As they moved to the soft beat, Bette slowly turned Tina around, her lips parting at the first real glimpse of her lover’s back.
Tina smiled to herself upon hearing the sharp intake of breath from Bette, placing her free hand over the one Bette had on her waist and moved her hips even more seductively than before. She began to really feel the music, closing her eyes to the beat as she swayed left and right.
Bette watched her lover move, still holding one of Tina’s hands over her head as she took a good look at the dress that could make her fall to her knees. Tina obviously wasn’t wearing a bra and she was given a clear view of all that gorgeous creamy skin through the lace.
She bit her lip as the way Tina moved, smirking because she knew the blonde was doing it purposely. With a step forward, Bette pressed her front into Tina’s back and moaned softly into her lover’s ear.
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!