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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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"You’re such a fucking tease. You know that, don’t you?"
Tina simply lowered her head and smiled shyly as Bette’s hips matched the rhythm she had originally set. They moved together as one, both of them encouraged by alcohol yet driven by desire. Tina tilted her head to the side just as Bette’s lips made their way to devour her neck.
"You’re so beautiful . . God, you smell so good"
Tina bit her lip and placed both arms over Bette’s that were now wrapped around her waist possessively, shivering when Bette’s fingers caressed her belly through her dress. Tina was well aware of where they were but nothing could make her care about that anymore. She needed Bette, she wanted her however and wherever, the desire was too great to deny herself anything.
As Tina began to fall deeper under Bette’s spell, her mind wandered with thoughts of what they would soon be doing. She held onto Bette tighter, smiling at how perfect the night turned out to be. Tina had no idea what she had been so worried about . . that is until she realized she had completely forgot to bring up one very important topic of conversation.
Initially, Tina had wanted to talk about her having to leave to New York in the beginning of the night but one look at Bette and Tina quickly reasoned that she could indulge in the evening just a little. Every so often during their evening, Tina remembered she had to say something but Bette was just being so damn amazing.
Tina found it harder and harder to bring the subject up until the point where she just forgot altogether.
Fuck, fuck! How could you forget?! Ugh you’re such an idiot!
Bette felt Tina stiffen under her touch and though it confused her, Bette was thankful for the distraction. Ending the night there and then wasn’t what she had originally planned so she was glad to have come back to reality. For now at least.
From the start of the night, Bette sensed something had been up with Tina and knew her next surprise would be the perfect opportunity to find out what was bothering the beautiful blonde.
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!