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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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"I wanna show you something"
Bette reluctantly pulled back as Tina slowly turned around to face her, lust and for some reason fear swirled in those wild hazel eyes. It nearly broke Bette’s heart to see such a tortured expression on her beautiful lover’s face, she wanted to make it all better. Soon, she promised herself.
Bette held one of Tina’s hands in hers and turned around to lead the blonde toward a different section in the park, following a thin trail lit by small lanterns. The only sounds they heard was the soft chirping of crickets and their unsteady breathing.
As they made their way through the secluded area, Tina’s lust fog began to lift somewhat to the point where she was able to form an actual tease. She welcomed the distraction and hoped it would ease her nerves, her hands were shaking.
"This isn’t the part where you kill me, right?"
Bette didn’t turn around but she did laugh, keeping her wide smile even when she felt a tug on her arm. Tina had stopped walking and Bette knew the blonde must have laid eyes on her surprise.
"Oh my . . Bette . ."
With that same smile, Bette turned around to see Tina spellbound and staring at the beautifully carved wooden carriage only few feet from them. There were two horses attached to the carriage, one was light beige in color and the other was more of a chocolate brown. She didn’t plan on getting the horses in those colors but now that she saw them, Bette appreciated the irony of it all. They were truly a work of art, they went together perfectly.
Bette watched Tina’s expression carefully, admiring each shift from surprised, to disbelief, to happy. Bette was unbelievably happy to have caused such a reaction, Tina was in complete awe.
Suddenly, the blonde’s hands flew to her mouth as tears began to roll down her cheeks and for a moment, Bette cried too. With the corner of her eye, Tina noticed the glimmer of a tear drop slowly roll down Bette’s cheek and it immediately caught her full attention. Tina knew why she was crying but she had no idea why Bette was.
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!