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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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She kept one arm wrapped around the blonde’s waist, the other draped over the cushioned seat and smiled into her lover’s hair when Tina cuddled closer into her frame. Bette kissed the top of Tina’s head, her lips lingering and letting out a deep sigh of content.
With a sigh of her own, Tina stared out at the scenery, an arm wrapped around Bette’s waist. She was enjoying the moment between them so much, she didn’t want to ruin it with talking about New York. She almost didn’t know how to begin the conversation.
Just say it Tina, tell her now
After some time, Bette tilted her head to get a better view of the blonde’s face. She noticed that Tina had been rather distracted and she wondered why. She could see Tina fighting with something, giving the blonde some more time to come clean with whatever was on her mind. When another few minutes passed and Tina had yet to say something, Bette decided to give the blonde a little blush.
"Something you wanna tell me?"
Tina froze, her eyes widening as she continued to look out at the scenery. She was afraid to look Bette in the eye, wondering how in the hell Bette knew but there was no point in wondering. Bette could read her like a book.
"Is it that obvious?" Tina smiled sheepishly, sitting up to look her lover in the eye.
Bette just smirked and raised her eyebrow, a silent answer to the blonde’s question. With a deep breath, Tina lowered her gaze and looked at her hands fidgeting on her lap.
Seeing her hesitance, Bette began to worry. Tina looked like she was about to cry.
"T?"
"I have to go to New York" Tina blurted out before she lost her nerve, the statement shocked Bette down to her core.
"What?"
"The tour" Tina whispered, lifting her gaze to look at Bette, "It isn’t over. I . . I have to go back"
"When?"
Bette’s expression was blank, her tone even. Tina couldn’t read her and that bothered her.
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!