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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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"Bette? Baby, what’s wrong?" Tina asked softly, concern covering her features as she held the brunette’s face in her hands.
Bette immediately shook her head, trying to hold back the rest of her tears.
"Nothing it’s just . ."
Ava never cared for this kind of stuff.
The statement was unsaid but present all the same, Tina saw it in Bette’s eyes.
"Bette . . Sweetie look at me" Tina said tenderly when the brunette averted her gaze, "This is the most . . amazing thing anyone has ever done for me. Thank you so much"
Bette smiled with complete acceptance, glad that she found someone who truly appreciated the effort she made. The surprise may have been for Tina but Bette felt like the one who was rewarded.
She leaned in and gave Tina the deepest, most sweetest kiss. She silently thanked the blonde for being all she was, Bette couldn’t have been happier. When they broke apart breathless and even more lust driven than before, Tina whispered excitedly to the beautiful brunette.
"Can we . .?"
Bette chuckled and nodded, grabbing Tina’s hand and leading her to the carriage. As they approached, the driver turned from his seat and faced them with a smile.
"Good evening, ladies"
"Good evening, Rob" Bette said with a smile and wrapped an arm around Tina, "I’d like you to meet Tina"
Rob smiled at Tina and gave her a single nod of his head, "Pleasure to meet you, Tina"
"Likewise" Tina smiled sweetly as Bette gestured for her to enter the carriage, holding onto her hand and helping her up. Once the blonde was settled comfortably, Rob tossed Bette an impressed look to which the brunette smiled and winked before climbing onto the carriage beside Tina.
The first few minutes was relatively smooth, both women enjoying the beautiful scenery and basking in the bliss they shared. They exchanged small talk, tender kisses and enjoying the peaceful surroundings. Tina became chilled after sometime, trembling gently under Bette’s touch. With a loving smile, the brunette reached behind them to grab a warm blanket and drape it over their legs as she pulled Tina even closer into her frame.
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!