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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 12
Story written on July 6, 2012 by Liah x Doll.
"Because sweetie, you have a big mouth" Carmen offered a sympathetic smile to which Alice flipped her off, causing the Latina to laugh.
Shane shook her head with a smirk but it quickly faded when she saw a very familiar yet unwelcome face enter the cafe next.
"Shit"
Carmen turned her head to look at Shane before turning to look in the direction her girlfriend was focused on, her eyes widening at the person angrily walking towards them.
"Where’s Bette? I know she’s here somewhere"
Kit pursed her lips as she sat back in her chair and crossed her arms over her chest, "Well that’s a good way to start a conversation. Hello, Ava. Nice to see you too"
"I’m sorry" Ava sighed frustratingly, "I just need to find her, she’s been dodging me for a week now. Can you help me or not?"
"Now why would I help you? Last time I heard you were trying to bring down my company and harassing my baby sis"
"Come on Kit, that’s such a fucking lie. I didn’t even do anything like that"
"That’s not what I heard" Carmen mumbled and sipped on her coffee.
"Oh shut the fuck up you Hispanic whore" Ava rolled her eyes and Carmen got up immediately with Shane right behind her, holding her arms.
"What the fuck did you just call me?" Ava took a nervous step back even though Shane was holding Carmen from doing anything she would ((probably not)) regret.
"You heard me" Ava said with a hint of anger but also a bit hesitant. Carmen looked pretty scary at the moment, squirming like mad against Shane’s hold on and trying to break free.
"Calm down, Carmen"
"What? How can you tell me to calm down? Did you hear what she just said to me?" Carmen looked over her shoulder at Shane with rage in her eyes. Customers began to watch the situation unfold in silence.
"I did but you’re making a scene baby, calm down" Shane said just as calmly, keeping a firm grip on Carmen. Paparazzi never missed a beat, especially when people such as Ava Snow were involved. They didn’t need the negative publicity, it was bad for business.
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(35 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
And the excitement starts once again… Hopefully Bette will tell Ava with enough force to convince her to back off and leave her alone. And, hopefully she won’t screw things up between Bette and Tina, and neither will Sam. Thanks for posting. Great story.
lol! I’m glad you cleared up the hand question… Tina’s embarrassment was funny, but completely understandable. I hope she and Bette at least get to enjoy the fact that Bette’s surprising her in NY, because the drama train has left the station and seems due to be bringing that a-hole Ava. Ugh. Pity that Shane held Carmen back, Ava is in dire need of a beat down. All things in good time, I suppose. ;P Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Laughed so hard at the comment Alice made to Ada about not being able to count. This was such a cute chapter and not to mention hot! You should have a warning in the description saying “Might need an oxygen tank for love scene” lol. Love this story so much can’t wait for more :D
Ave is a real bitch. Shane should have let Carmen have a piece of her. Loved it.
I hope Ava doesn’t destroy Bette’s chance to get to New York to surprise Tina. PPS
to bad shane stopped carman… would of loved to see ava missing a few teeth… lets hope bette gets out of town before the big wind finds her… great story…pps
Wonderful update. I’m sitting on the edge of my chair waiting for the next update. Love the way you write. thank you.
Ava is danger.I hope the girls can stop her.Thank you for the update.PPS
ava is nothing but trouble with a capital T. Hope she doesn’t find Bette before she leaves. Hope James won’t tell her either.
OMFG!!!!! 😱 Please be gentle!!!!!
ooooohhhhhh nnnnoooo please post soon thank you!!!
Oh damn trouble coming and hope Kit and Bette have a talk first before eva do something to hurt them. Bette and Tina are so hot and cute, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Ahhhh Kit call her! Call her! Now I’m biting my finger nails