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    At first sight

    Story written on February 28, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76987
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    Chapter 20

    Bette looked at the necklace one more time and placed it in a little bundle on top of one of the wooden guard-rail upright.
    Tina and Dana were nearing the spot of the accident. The blonde was reading the content of the small buff folder for the 20th time. She thought that coupled with the scenery they were going through she would remember something. It did not seem to work. Not even the smallest glimpse of a recollection.
    Dana looked over at the file Tina had on her lap.
    "Oh….is that a picture of you? Let me see?" Tina handed the picture over. "You look very business like and look you are wearing the necklace that that woman found and brought back at the hosp….." before Dana knew it the words had come out of her mouth.
    "Woman? What woman? When? What are you talking about?" Tina asked, slightly confused. This was the first time she’d heard of this other person.
    "Oh God……look Tina," Dana breathed in and exhaled loudly, "at the hospital we were all under strict instructions not to mention it ….. but during the two weeks you were out, this woman came to visit everyday. She is the one who found you at the scene of the accident. She is the one who is possibly responsible for you being alive today!…. So when you came round and started talking about this life you had dreamt off…..which included some of us….the docs thought it better not to mention her!  They did not want you to get anymore confused……. Tina …..you have to trust me when I say that we had your best interest at heart……That woman is Bette…your Bette, I heard you mention her! " Dana said almost apologetically. "Just like me she is real!"
    Tina was very quiet. She did not know whether to laugh, to cry or be angry with Dana for hiding this piece of information. But in truth, she did not really care because Bette did exist! She had dreamt about her and she was real. It felt like hope had just been pumped into her body at great speed and her heart was filling up very quickly. It was like a rush. She was staring straight ahead.
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    3. OMG… WHY WHY WHY WHY are you ending this story… like the others have said.. we need a sequel.. please… this was so good… i don’t want to see it end… please pps

    4. This has been a great story even if sometimes confusing but great nevertheless. Hate to see the story end when it is just getting to the point of a possible romance between them. I also understand when an author feels they have reached the end of the story whether the readers like it or not. So in that vein, I hope we get a sequel or epilogue or something that does not leave us hanging. Thanks for posting.

    6. This story was beautifully crafted and imaginative. I looked forward to each new chapter and as everyone else I am sorry to see it end, but you’ve brought it a great conclusion. You’ve done an amazing job. Thank you for sharing your talent.

    10. Beautiful,totally beautiful!..I can’t thanked you enough for this wonderful story..From beginning to end It’s simply …BEAUTIFUL!.. Another story please?…

    12. Noooooo…the end?? Fantastic story that I hate to see ending. Happy though that you’ve promised an epilogue. Thanks for sharing your talent and I’m hoping to see you back posting another tale.

    20. Thanks for this beautiful and touching story! Kudos to you Kins40 :-) just finished re read from the beginning, kinda sad it’s ending – funny that I still feel the same way though I knew it already. :-p yeah, silly me! But would it be possible to write the sequel or epilogue just to clarify what happen next to our favourite girls? Will Bette still in tune with Tina as all what happened between them were only in Tina’s imagination? Is the reality not as beautiful as in the dream so it’s better to end it here to avoid breaking all the readers heart? ;-)

    23. Excellent fic! Not only the storyline is great but it made me more knowledgeable of the blinds world. The ending is awesome but somehow I wanted more. read you soon.

    26. Thanks so much for this story. I’m glad they finally met each other. I hope you write a sequel. I would love to see where their relationship goes.

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