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    At first sight

    Story written on February 28, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76987
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    Chapter 20

    "Tina….I am really sorry!" Dana was worried about the blonde’s reaction.
    "Where is the necklace?" her voice was not angry but eerily calm.
    "I believe she still has it……she wanted to give it back to you when you woke up…but……oh God, if only you knew how sorry I am!" Dana reiterated. She was really concerned about the effect her little utterance was having on her passenger so she was surprised when Tina spoke again.
    "Dana…..I am not annoyed with you…you were only doing what you were told……..besides now ………. I have a new direction in my life….and I think I should really thank you for it" Tina was smiling broadly and  patted her leg reassuringly. Things had taken an unexpected turn. This trip had been an excellent idea! 
    Dana stopped the car on a lay-by. They had arrived. Tina’s heart was beating a little faster.
    "The spot of the accident is just round the corner, are you sure you are up to it? Do you feel strong enough to walk?" Dana asked worried.
    "Sure!…….but Dana …….. I want to do this alone! Do you think you could wait here in the car?"
    Dana hesitated. She finally nodded, concern was written all over her face.
    Tina noticed. "I’ll be ok…..I’ll be sure to yell really loud if something happens!" she left the car and made her way slowly round the bend. It was not that far. The view was breathtaking. The sun was shining, glistening over the ocean down below. It was very quiet. There was no traffic and the only sounds came from chirping birds and the rhythmic sound made by cicadas.
    As she rounded the bend, she was very surprised to see that she was not alone. There was another person up ahead. A woman, tall with long brown curly hair. Her hand rested on one of the barrier’s upright, her head was down. Tina was struck at how lonely she looked.
    The brunette turned her back to her and started walking away slowly. She had not seen her. As Tina approached the spot where she had been standing she noticed the glint of something shining in the sun. A little necklace.
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    3. OMG… WHY WHY WHY WHY are you ending this story… like the others have said.. we need a sequel.. please… this was so good… i don’t want to see it end… please pps

    4. This has been a great story even if sometimes confusing but great nevertheless. Hate to see the story end when it is just getting to the point of a possible romance between them. I also understand when an author feels they have reached the end of the story whether the readers like it or not. So in that vein, I hope we get a sequel or epilogue or something that does not leave us hanging. Thanks for posting.

    6. This story was beautifully crafted and imaginative. I looked forward to each new chapter and as everyone else I am sorry to see it end, but you’ve brought it a great conclusion. You’ve done an amazing job. Thank you for sharing your talent.

    10. Beautiful,totally beautiful!..I can’t thanked you enough for this wonderful story..From beginning to end It’s simply …BEAUTIFUL!.. Another story please?…

    12. Noooooo…the end?? Fantastic story that I hate to see ending. Happy though that you’ve promised an epilogue. Thanks for sharing your talent and I’m hoping to see you back posting another tale.

    20. Thanks for this beautiful and touching story! Kudos to you Kins40 :-) just finished re read from the beginning, kinda sad it’s ending – funny that I still feel the same way though I knew it already. :-p yeah, silly me! But would it be possible to write the sequel or epilogue just to clarify what happen next to our favourite girls? Will Bette still in tune with Tina as all what happened between them were only in Tina’s imagination? Is the reality not as beautiful as in the dream so it’s better to end it here to avoid breaking all the readers heart? ;-)

    23. Excellent fic! Not only the storyline is great but it made me more knowledgeable of the blinds world. The ending is awesome but somehow I wanted more. read you soon.

    26. Thanks so much for this story. I’m glad they finally met each other. I hope you write a sequel. I would love to see where their relationship goes.

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