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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 10: DEADLOCK
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They used the back door to leave because the front door was already closed, the street behind the building was almost lonely, and dark, Tina was walking in the sideway close to the road and Brenda inside; a big black ford Buick lacrosse was parked on the curb and as soon as the girls start walking, the vehicle starts moving slowly following them, initially the girls didn’t realize that they were followed until the car speeded up and entered the pavement toward its objective and to run away at high speed, everything was at the same moment, Brenda heard the car coming and shout and fortunately alerting Tina who jumped on time, otherwise the car may have killed her.
Sharon was leaving the building at that moment and ran toward them.
Sharon: “are you okay”
Tina: (standing from the floor) “I’m fine”
Brenda: (looking a line of blood in Tina’s hand) “no, you are wounded”
Tina: “is just a scratch I cut my hand when I fell down”
Sharon: “we must go to a hospital”
Tina: “no, I’m perfectly fine”
Sharon: “don’t fight with me, young lady”
They went to a close hospital to check Tina’s wound, the cut was very superficial, her hand was bandaged and they left.
For Brenda, it was perhaps a drunk driver, but Sharon and Tina thought different, this was an attempt against Tina’s life, the blonde and Brenda took the Subway, while Sharon left toward home close by.
In her way home, Tina was thinking in the danger she is exposed, and how easy could be for the ruffians to kill her, but she is sure of herself, she could resist, but what about Dr. Porter, that conceited girl probably has never been in the subway, neither walking in dark streets in the evening; no, Porter wouldn’t last, those ruffians probably will end her life if they have to.
When Tina arrived home and checked her emails, she found a suspicious one; the sender was unknown for her as it was the email address, the message said: ‘stop what you are doing or next time it will be much worse’
No, she can’t give the brunette any additional information, they could hurt her and that idea made Tina is sad and angry at the same time, she has already lost Alex, she can’t let anything bad happen to Dr. Porter.
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Oh oh, what a mess!
I truly understand Tina’s reason to protect Bette, but boy the things she said and comparing Bette with her father, ouch!
Dare i to say aloud who Bette is going to choose for the dare?! No, but we all know who it will be.
I really hope Bette will make the right decision and will still protect Tina against that asshole Aaron. And Tina must share the documents she found and give it to Bette, Alice, Sharon or Kit. The future of 100 people is on stake. Tina doesn’t have to fight alone and start trusting others.
Awesome chapter and i hope to read the next chapter soon!!! And please tell me we are leaving the hard parts and moving on to better parts for our girls?!
Hi Bibi:
Happy New Year, sorry answering late, but I had to finish the new chapter.
Yes, Tina’s priority is to protect Bette and the only way is to send her away, too rude, I confess but that’s the way she did.
Yes, Bette has already a name for her “victim” in the dare, and I guess you know who it is.
Well, I hope we are leaving the hard parts for the moment.
And even humiliated and very mad at Dr. Kennard, Bette would still protect her.
But the new chapter is already here.
Thank you very much, my friend, for your comments and support.
P
Ok! Sorry but regardless of what you say in your notes I am not enjoying the way Tina is treating Bette and my Tibette heart is hurting!
Please post soon
SG
Hi SG:
Happy New Year.
I’m very sorry your feelings are hurting, mine are hurting too. It was hard to write that part, especially in these moments, when TIBETTE is hurt by some…, well you know what I mean.
But I tell you something in my opinion, and that I learned for experience when you love, really love someone, your interests are below to the other person’s needs, and that’s the case of Tina, she loves Bette, but Bette’s life could be in danger, Tina has to do anything even sacrifice her feelings for Bette safety, and if she was so rude it’s because Bette was so insistent and Tina found that it was the only way to send her away.
I’m posting right now, the new chapter. I hope you like it.
Thanks for your comment.
P
My reading of the new Chapter will have to be in the morning now.
Of course I will like it!
You keep writing I’ll keep reading!
Happy New Year:-)
SG
Hola proteonomics que buen capítulo me encantó y estoy de acuerdo con las demás bette va a poner a Tina me encanta esta historia siempre quedo con ganas de leer más y esperando que subas el otro
Hola Escorpion:
Feliz Año Nuevo!!!
Asi es, Bette va a poner a Tina como su reto, ella la va a retar en este concurso.
El nuevo capitulo ya lo he subido, y espero que te guste.
Mi tiempo de vacaciones se acabo, estoy subiendo hoy dia my cuarto capitulo en dos semanas, y ahora debo empezar a trabajar, you voy a subir el siguiente en dos semanas, si puedo lo hare antes.
Gracias por tus comentarios.
P
I am trusting in you to make things right between Bette and Tina. I know that Tina wants to protect Bette but she was unnecessarily harsh when she compared Bette with her father. Melvin is a bad dad and a criminal. I am concerned about who is Aaron’s spy, the one who told him that Tibette’s romance was over. I am looking forward to see what will it take for Tina to learn to trust Bette.
Hi JS:
Happy New Year!!!
Thanks for trust in my story, yes, Tina wants to protect Bette, but, as Bette was very persistent Tina had to do something to send her away, now Tina doesn’t know at this point the relationship between Bette and her father, she only knows that the old man is a womanizer and some other few gossips; when she said that, she was desperate to elude Bette questions about the files posted in BP, at the point that she said that Eric was her boyfriend, then that Kate was her girlfriend, so Tina was almost out of her mind trying to protect Bette.
Yes, I would like to know also who is Aaron spy, but we’ll find out in the next chapters.
And Tina will trust Bette pretty soon. The new chapter is already posted.
Thanks for your comments.
P
Please do not let Tina be the dare. Bette choose anyone else but Tina. Volunteer yourself before you choose Tina. Tina has already had her hours and pay cut and Bette is doing nothing….. Bette, you have no idea if Tina knows anything about your Dad. She been with the company only 6 months…
This is a mess…..Tina and Bette are both so stubborn…..please help them get together and trust each other. They need each other!
Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! Love this story.
Hi Martha:
Happy New Year!!!
Too late, Bette already challenged Tina and this one accepted, but it would be good for both of them.
But you’re totally right, Tina knows almost nothing about Bette’s dad, and she didn’t expect that big reaction from Bette.
But those silly girls are in love already even if they try to ignore it, a little suffering is good to help them to realize what they are about to lose. As I say, the higher they go, the deeper they fall, and they are deeply falling in love.
Well, the new chapter is there, and you can see how it went.
Thanks for your comments.
P