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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 15: WHO ARE YOU
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Bette started crying out of control again.
Tina: (tenderly) “shush, baby, shush, it’s okay…, I love you with all my heart and I won’t ever let you go without me…, everything is gonna be fine, we need to talk about all this mess”
Lower Manhattan, Broadway and Prince Street- Tuesday evening.
Most of the employees have left the building; Sharon has left around 5:30 pm only Jane and Maura are still in the fifteenth floor fooling around in Maura’s office with the lights off; after a little while, they stopped what they were doing.
Maura: “I’m hungry, can we go to get dinner?”
Jane: “sure, baby, my treat”
It was around 7 pm and as they were leaving their office and walking toward the elevator, they noticed that the lights of the numbers of the floors were changing, indicating that someone was using it.
Maura: “at this time it’s supposed only the cleaning crew and the security people are in the building”
Jane: “and they don’t use these elevators, they usually use the freight elevators and the stairs”
Maura: “do you think that something weird is going on here?”
Jane: “maybe…, do you wanna find out?”
Maura: “hmm, why not”
Jane: “look all the time the elevator stops on the tenth floor”
Maura: “we could use the stairs and check what’s going on there”
Jane: “okay, but we must be careful, someone could see us, it could be Aaron or some robers”
Maura: “what is the difference?”
Jane: (smiling) “you’re right, we better be cautious”
When they arrived at the tenth floor, they found many security guards and the lights of the meeting room were on; sneakily they slipped into the storeroom where they found some cleaning staff clothes, they wore them and pushing a cart and brooms they walked among the security guards to the ladies restroom adjacent to the meeting room, where they hide the cart in a stall and positioned at the back door that connected with the meeting room; through the slit of the door, they could see who was inside and, of course, they could hear the conversation.
Silently Maura and Jane found out that this was a secret reunion, there were present, Aaron, his private lawyer Tom, a woman who they have seen frequently visiting Aaron, which was Faye Buckley and an older guy who they couldn’t recognize, but who indeed was William Halsey; they were discussing their agenda and soon the girls realized that the main topic was related to illicit business using the company and some other criminal act.
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Hi proteonomics, my friend!
You take care of yourself too!
Wow, amazing chapter! Tina does now know who Bette is, Alex and that she didn’t die ten years ago. I am glad that they could talk about it without one of them leaving or having a big fight. And Bette ask Tina to marry her just like she wanted ten years ago ☺️ Together they can fight the evils. I have faith in that!
You disclosed so many things in this chapter, mainly about the family Kennard and Porter. When they are going to talk with Maxine and Kit i hope they react like they did now. Calm and mature. They have to give them the time to explain why they seperated them ten years ago and withold the truth. Looking forward to that talk.
Melvin is a real bastard, i hope he get the punishment he deserve, he is a disgusting man and if he lay one hand on Bette i will personally cut his hands of!
I am so happy you found the time to update! Take care my friend ????
Hi Bibi:
Thank you, I’m doing my best to be careful, we all must take care of ourselves and the others too.
I’m glad you liked the chapter. And yes, now they know some of the truth about 10 years ago, and Bette is still desperate to have Tina with her.
Tina is right, they have many things to find out before to go farther in their relationship, but they love each other very much.
You’re right, now they can fight together against the ruffians.
We’ll see what Melvin Porter has in mind, but definitely, he has a lot to do with what happened to Maxine and Tina’s mom.
Thanks, my friend for reading, commenting and following this story
Take care.
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I forgot to mention about the two pictures. They are very good, love them!!!
Wow, I forgot that there are two pictures in this chapter. ????????????
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hola proteonomics me encanto el capitulo esperando con ansias
el siguiente capitulo me encanta esta historia por fa si puedes subir
el otro en estos dias gracias
Hola Escorpion:
Estoy contenta de que te haya gustado el capitulo, voy a tratar de terminar el siguiente y subirlo pronto.
Gracias por seguir la historia.
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Okay, so Alex and Randy are finally reunited. It did surprise me that Bette is purposing marriage already. They are both going from relationship aversion to purposing marriage, babies and forever within a few hours. Not a very mature approach to a commitment of such major importance in their lives. I can see moving in together given their concern about safety and protection for each other. But since both have been relationship averse for the past ten years (more than 1/3 of their lives), I would think they would take some time to experience a relationship before they started talking about marriage, babies and forever. They barely know each other and have made several false assumptions about the other which have caused a few minor problems. I would think that they would like to know and confirm that they are compatible in attraction, in values, in goals and in temperament before making such a commitment. It just appears that they have not matured much more than they were ten years ago and are still in their dream like mind set.
In this chapter, you have revealed a bit more about the family. Mabel is Tina’s mother and Miranda was the adopted mother and Maxine was the godmother. Now what happened that Mabel gave up her baby? Why is she so fragile? And now that Tina knows Maxine is Bette’s mother, I’m sure that will be an interesting conversation.
I am anxious to see if Melvin is going to reveal any redeeming qualities and protect his daughter Bette from harm from Aaron and William and Faye Buckley. He is scum but he owes a duty to protect his family from harm. Is money really that important to him?
I really like this book….I cannot get enough…. Thank you for this update and I look forward to more…
Hi Martha:
Yes, I agree with you, Bette is too impulsive, she is the one that has gone through a lot looking for Tina’s story and her relation with her and her mom; Bette has been desperate finding the way to understand what happened with Tina, even before she heard from her about Dawn false story; and now she wants to marry her. But you could read that Tina wants to know more about their past and about their families before to take another step forward.
Now, I think they have an appreciable knowledge about the other, they were chatting in BP, which brought their souls close especially for Tina, who didn’t know who she was chatting with. And they fought, they a lot, they hurt each other, and made peace; they reach the point when their hearts couldn’t hold their feelings anymore and they are a little passing that point. Of course, many other things will test their feelings and there are many more things coming and I hope that Bette and Tina could pass the exam.
They will discover in a few chapters, why most of the women that know the past, think that Miranda Kennard is/was a problem, and blame her for many things, but Maxine is right.
About Melvin, well, he is not a good person, but Bette is his daughter, we’ll read how things will develop here.
I’m glad you like the story. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Thank you for posting.
Happy TiBette are together to progress further.
Take care too
SG
Hi SG:
And thank you for reading and commenting.
I’m glad that there wasn’t a cliffhanger here, because you would be mad at me. ????
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This story is fascinating. Please continue the story and I love the long chapters. Phenomenal job.
Hi Deanna:
Long time, thanks for your encouragement, I will continue this story until the end.
Sorry, I wasn’t able to update on time, but these last two months have been very hard and busy for me.
Thanks.
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