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    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 15: WHO ARE YOU

    Story written on March 10, 2020 by proteonomics.
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    Maxine: “oh my God, they are going to hate me, but it doesn’t matter now, one day they would understand that it was for the best” Kit: “do you think Louise would tell Bette?” Maxine: “yes, of course, and Bette may be asking herself why I didn’t tell her ten years ago that Tina was

    Maxine: “oh my God, they are going to hate me, but it doesn’t matter now, one day they would understand that it was for the best”

    Kit: “do you think Louise would tell Bette?”

    Maxine: “yes, of course, and Bette may be asking herself why I didn’t tell her ten years ago that Tina was my goddaughter”

    Kit: “does Tina know that you didn’t adopt her?”

    Maxine: “yes, she knows, but she thinks that Miranda was her birth mother, she doesn’t know she was her adoptive mother”

    Kit: “Maxine, there is something else I never asked you… but I think I must talk about that with you now”

    Maxine: “what is it?”

    Kit: “when Bette was there, the last day, someone told her that Randy was with a man and that she was pregnant?”

    Maxine: “hell about that, I know that, and I would never forgive Dawn Dembo for that lie…, I know that Bette has a picture of Randy, well of young Tina with your brother Marcus with his arm on her shoulder, Tina was very weak and he had to help her to the taxi, I don’t know exactly how it happened, but somehow Dawn managed to send Margarita someplace while she was taking the picture”

    Kit: “why she did that?”

    Maxine: “jealousy, she was jealous of Randy, many of the lesbian girls in the boarding school were after my goddaughter, but my little blondie was very naïve and wasn’t aware of that, I think she was very insecure sexually until she met Bette”

    Kit: “so you didn’t tell Dawn to deceive Bette?”

    Maxine: “Kit, what I needed to do was to get my daughter out of this country, where her life was going to be in danger just by having me as her mother, and I synchronized the leaving of Tina from the town to go to my house in the border and the arriving of Bette looking for her, Dawn was supposed to tell her that Tina had left with a friend, a girl, Margarita, to visit her godmother, but Dawn told Bette something different; unfortunately there was no time for rectifications because at that moment I had already alerted the consulate so they could catch and put Bette in first class in a plane heading to New York…, I didn’t know what else to do, Kit, those were very hard times, so many bad things happening then, and I had to cope with everything, and also with Tina who was almost sixteen and was depressed…, almost suicidal, she needed my help and I had to be strong and ask you and Peggy to look after Bette, who was only seventeen and had already her heart-broken, and in those days I lost all my hopes of finding Miranda alive, I received the news that she was executed…, we were very close, and love each other and even when we had our fights, I loved her, it wasn’t her fault that the woman from who I was in love chose her…”

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    1. Hi proteonomics, my friend!

      You take care of yourself too!

      Wow, amazing chapter! Tina does now know who Bette is, Alex and that she didn’t die ten years ago. I am glad that they could talk about it without one of them leaving or having a big fight. And Bette ask Tina to marry her just like she wanted ten years ago ☺️ Together they can fight the evils. I have faith in that!

      You disclosed so many things in this chapter, mainly about the family Kennard and Porter. When they are going to talk with Maxine and Kit i hope they react like they did now. Calm and mature. They have to give them the time to explain why they seperated them ten years ago and withold the truth. Looking forward to that talk.

      Melvin is a real bastard, i hope he get the punishment he deserve, he is a disgusting man and if he lay one hand on Bette i will personally cut his hands of!

      I am so happy you found the time to update! Take care my friend ????

      • Hi Bibi:

        Thank you, I’m doing my best to be careful, we all must take care of ourselves and the others too.

        I’m glad you liked the chapter. And yes, now they know some of the truth about 10 years ago, and Bette is still desperate to have Tina with her.

        Tina is right, they have many things to find out before to go farther in their relationship, but they love each other very much.

        You’re right, now they can fight together against the ruffians.

        We’ll see what Melvin Porter has in mind, but definitely, he has a lot to do with what happened to Maxine and Tina’s mom.

        Thanks, my friend for reading, commenting and following this story

        Take care.

        P

    3. hola proteonomics me encanto el capitulo esperando con ansias
      el siguiente capitulo me encanta esta historia por fa si puedes subir
      el otro en estos dias gracias

      • Hola Escorpion:

        Estoy contenta de que te haya gustado el capitulo, voy a tratar de terminar el siguiente y subirlo pronto.

        Gracias por seguir la historia.

        P

    4. P

      Okay, so Alex and Randy are finally reunited. It did surprise me that Bette is purposing marriage already. They are both going from relationship aversion to purposing marriage, babies and forever within a few hours. Not a very mature approach to a commitment of such major importance in their lives. I can see moving in together given their concern about safety and protection for each other. But since both have been relationship averse for the past ten years (more than 1/3 of their lives), I would think they would take some time to experience a relationship before they started talking about marriage, babies and forever. They barely know each other and have made several false assumptions about the other which have caused a few minor problems. I would think that they would like to know and confirm that they are compatible in attraction, in values, in goals and in temperament before making such a commitment. It just appears that they have not matured much more than they were ten years ago and are still in their dream like mind set.

      In this chapter, you have revealed a bit more about the family. Mabel is Tina’s mother and Miranda was the adopted mother and Maxine was the godmother. Now what happened that Mabel gave up her baby? Why is she so fragile? And now that Tina knows Maxine is Bette’s mother, I’m sure that will be an interesting conversation.

      I am anxious to see if Melvin is going to reveal any redeeming qualities and protect his daughter Bette from harm from Aaron and William and Faye Buckley. He is scum but he owes a duty to protect his family from harm. Is money really that important to him?

      I really like this book….I cannot get enough…. Thank you for this update and I look forward to more…

      • Hi Martha:

        Yes, I agree with you, Bette is too impulsive, she is the one that has gone through a lot looking for Tina’s story and her relation with her and her mom; Bette has been desperate finding the way to understand what happened with Tina, even before she heard from her about Dawn false story; and now she wants to marry her. But you could read that Tina wants to know more about their past and about their families before to take another step forward.

        Now, I think they have an appreciable knowledge about the other, they were chatting in BP, which brought their souls close especially for Tina, who didn’t know who she was chatting with. And they fought, they a lot, they hurt each other, and made peace; they reach the point when their hearts couldn’t hold their feelings anymore and they are a little passing that point. Of course, many other things will test their feelings and there are many more things coming and I hope that Bette and Tina could pass the exam.

        They will discover in a few chapters, why most of the women that know the past, think that Miranda Kennard is/was a problem, and blame her for many things, but Maxine is right.

        About Melvin, well, he is not a good person, but Bette is his daughter, we’ll read how things will develop here.

        I’m glad you like the story. Thank you for reading and commenting.

        P

      • Hi SG:

        And thank you for reading and commenting.

        I’m glad that there wasn’t a cliffhanger here, because you would be mad at me. ????

        P

      • Hi Deanna:

        Long time, thanks for your encouragement, I will continue this story until the end.
        Sorry, I wasn’t able to update on time, but these last two months have been very hard and busy for me.

        Thanks.

        P

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