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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 16: MEET THE FAMILY
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Bette was chewing her discomfort when she heard the ring on her door, she opened, it was Louise.
Louise: “hey Bette, haven’t seen you in one week…, how’s my sister?”
Bette: (leading Louise to a sofa in the living room) “hi, Lou, I knew you didn’t come for me”
Louise: “I came to visit you…, why are you so cranky?”
Bette: “guess why?”
Louise: “oh no…, what have you done to Tina?”
Bette: “it wasn’t me, it was her”
Louise: (rolling her eyes) “okay…, tell me what happened?”
Bette: “we came today from Long Beach, and she didn’t let me take her to her house”
Louise: “what do you mean she didn’t let you?”
Bette: “just that, we had breakfast and we went to my car, I asked ‘where do we go?’ and she said that she has to go home, then I asked the address and smiling she told me to leave her in the subway station”
Louise: “hmm, and what did you say?”
Bette: “Lou…, I was mad…, but she lured me with her kisses and…”
Louise: “and…?”
Bette: “well…, she knows my soft spots”
Louise: “you made love with her in your car?”
Bette: “it was quick and we were in a dark parking lot”
Louise: “you fucked my sister in a parking lot?”
Bette: “we’re girlfriends; we have been doing much more than that, almost the whole week in my beach house”
Louise: “Bette…! You’re a player and she’s my little sister”
Bette: “I’m not playing with her, and I made a commitment, I want to marry her”
Louise: “okay, what were you expected to accomplish going to her house?”
Bette: “Lou…, I want to know her more; she and I talked, we agree that we want to know each other again”
Louise: “you barely knew her by her middle name, not even her last name”
Bette: “I knew her soul, and she knew me, the formalities weren’t important, we knew enough to love each other”
Louise: (shaking her head) “okay…, if you say so, but one thing is important, you both have changed in ten years and if you plan to have something serious and a future together, you need to know each other this time for real”
Bette: “okay…, you may be right; did you find something else about Miranda Kennard?”
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Hola proteonomics me encantó que estás de vuelta con esta historia me encantó el capítulo pero el final me dejó intrigada gracias y esperando hasta el siguiente capitulo
Hola Escorpion:
Gracias, me agrada mucho que la historia te guste, y que el capitulo haya sido de tu agrado, si cada capítulo busca dejar intrigado al lector.
Voy a estar subiendo el nuevo en uno ratito.
Gracias por leer y comentar.
P
Hi proteonomics,
So good to read a new chapter from you!!!
The girls connected at a few things, but it is important that they continue to talk honesty and open. They are working on a relationship together and try to catch those old nasty bastaards, and trust is important in succeeding in that mission.
Bette is still a little wary about Tina and feels Tina hold back on something and Tina knows that, For example why does Tina need to hide all she discoverd somewhere else before Bette can visit her house. She already said she would share it with the others? She thinks Bette will search her house for it? Strange, but i give her the benefit of doubt. Maybe she tries to protect Bette now that they are after her.
Loved how Bette said to that man the she decided when was asap!!!
Is Melvin the reason Maxime is hurt? And that the hitman failed because she was surrounded by others and now he is trying to find a way to do what about Bette?! He is a pure devil!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
By the way i did read the previous chapter again at your advice!
Stay save and healthy ????????????
Hi Bibi:
Thanks for your kind words my friend, yes Bette and Tina still have a long way to walk together and many bad guys in their way.
Yes, why Tina has to hide things from Bette, well I hope she realizes that the most important thing in a relationship is to trust one to the other.
I like also the way Bette faces her father’s thugs.
New clues in the new chapter and it will come very, very soon.
There may be something, who hurt Maxine, and why?
Thanks, my friend, for reading for your comment and support.
P
Good chapter even though it was almost a cliffhanger at the end:-)
Look forward to more as soon s possible!
Stay safe and well
SG
Hi SG:
I’m very glad that you liked this chapter, and there is nothing wrong with a little cliffhanger, my friend,
Thanks for reading and commenting and please stay safe and well.
Great to see this story back.
This week at the beach has jolted Bette and Tina back to being giggly teennagers. I know this was a long time coming, The spent a considerable amount of time discussing the events of 10 years ago at the meeting. They discussed the incorrect assumptions they had each made about the other and how a single night grew into a fantasy relationship which spoiled them for all others since. They talked about who their family was – Melvin, Maxine, Miranda Kennard, Louise, Kit, and others were. They did not talk about how Maxine became Tina’s godmother, as they do not seem to know how that happened.
Bette and Tina talked about some of the things Tina discovered in her searches through Aaron’s files. But she did not disclose everything? Why was that? What does Bette know that she isn’t disclosing? The bottom line is that Bette and Tina’s relationship does not appear to be taking into account everything that has happened to them in the last 6 month to a year. That is – the business is under siege. People have been killed. Attempts have been made on Tina’s life and now Bette is threatened by Melvin. Bette in particular is not taking anything except having sex with Tina very seriously at all.
And the emergency meeting. For women who have been around Bette for years, why can they not figure out where she is? Also, for people who are in their late twenties and are attending a meeting which is about the security of the business, what is all this sexual references. and questions. Why question the reason for Maura and Jane in the office late if they are giving you info on a late night meeting of big wigs? If this was a lunch table meeting okay, but not at a formal business meeting. The silliness simply detracted from the information being received and from the seriousness of the situation. My confidence level in that group of people riding a company of corporate espionage is not very high. The only person who seems to be taking anything seriously is Tina, and she lack complete knowledge nor the authority to make things happen.
The chapter wraps up with Bette and Tina both being in danger yet not knowing how much. It wraps up with Bette questioning Tina’s living quarters and other relationships .The bottom line is Bette and Tina still do not know each other very well at all. And the level of trust is very low. It is going to take a long time for these two to develop a relationship which looks anything like long term.
I really want to see someone take charge of the good guys, gather the intelligence, formulate a plan and beat the bad guys. I also want to see Bette and Tina fully reveal who they are to the other. The secrets are going to be poison.
Thank you so much for this…. looking forward to more.
Hi Martha:
Nice to read your comments again.
Yeah, Tina and Bette are dedicated to their most urgent need, their relationship, examining what happened, they still don’t know many things, and they are like in a “honeymoon” as two horny teenagers, let’s give them this little break, remember that from chapter 11 to 16 has passed only ten days, and it’s all about them and the ten missing years.
Yes, the business is under siege, but according to what Jane and Maura heard, the bad guys are also in problems, they disagree on the way to sell Lower Manhattan to the Chinese, and Peggy’s people have to counterattack., I know you want everything ready, but our girls will take more time to find themselves.
I think the group of women commanded by Peggy is like a family, because, and that will be shown in the next chapters, there is a common past, you’ll see soon the two main components in that group, and how they interact to face the bud guys, just have a little of patience.
The level of trust has to be earned, and that may take a little time, slowly we’ll see how the pieces of the puzzle fit together to gives a big picture of what is happening.in all aspects, mainly in the quest for the truth and justice.
Thank you very much for your wonderful comments.
P
Wow, just wow! I have been checking on this story for a while and was pleasantly surprised to see this intense, emotional ride.
Way, way too many secrets between Bette and Tina, Main Bureau and the Devil incarnate Melvin Porter with his minions. Even secrets between Kit and Bette then Bette and Louise.
To some degree, I can see protecting those your at all costs. What worries me is your cannot protect everyone.
Well done and please post soon. Reading your author’s note, it appears that maybe you’ve been ill. If so, I wish you a speedy recovery…B.I.T.C.H. needs you!!!
Hi Deanna:
Thank you, I’m glad that you liked the chapter.
Yes, this story has many secrets and some turns, but our girls will discover step by step each of those secrets in the way they both are gaining trust in each other.
Don’t worry, the good guys will be protected.
Thank you for caring. Yes. these last months have been hard for me, I hope I’ll be fine now.
Thank you again for reading and commenting.
P
proteonomics:
Welcome back! It’s so good to see old writers works. Which of course you are always spoiling us. 8000 words, wow! Finally able to catch up with the story.
I believe Bette and Tina still have a long way to go, and most importantly, someone is going to do harm to our favourite couple. I do think Tina should trust Bette more, though consider about Bette’s reputation, she has every right to be insecure. And Bette needs to do more for Tina instead of just making love with her and call her baby. They’ve been through a lot and overcame load of misunderstanding, I do hope when the time comes, Bette will be willing to stand out to protect Tina, even if the man is her father.
Thankfully, Tina has a protective sister, and Bette is willing to listen to Louise and make changes. It’s a huge step for both of them, but I do think they should quickly talk to each other about the issue they have in mind. And of course, the cliff hangers, it makes me more concern about what is going to happen in the later chapter.
Thank you for the story, proteonomics, it’s been a long time and long days due to the virus. Everything changed, even Lesfan. I hope you can soon post another chapter in order to fill in the blanc of what will happen next!
Stay health and safety, my friend, thanks again for the story.
CJ
Hey CJ.
How have you been, my friend,
Yes Bette and Tina have a long way to walk, but they are going to be closer day by day.
Yes, Tina has a protective sister, who loves her and also loves Bette, and our girls are going to talk about their secrets soon.
But we also have the bad guys, that is another front where they both along with Peggy’s people have to fight for justice and the truth.
Yes, I know everybody is concern about the cliffhangers, but I will try to post more frequently, though I can’t avoid the cliff hangers most the time.
Thank you, CJ, I’m also waiting for that wonderful story you are writing and I hope you’ll have the time (though I know you’re very busy right now) to post that here soon.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting, my friend.
P