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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 18: THE VAULT
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Tasha: “I understand Mr. Porter”
Melvin: “but I don’t know exactly who they could be”
Tasha: “okay, before we finish I would like you to see some pictures from the parking garage from a video that wasn’t manipulated during the setting of the explosives, we were able to capture the faces of some suspects maybe you could identify some of them”
Now, Melvin was interested, he needs to know who dared to attack her daughter even after he talked with her partners a few hours before the attack.
Melvin: “sure, I want to help, show me the pictures, please”
Tasha showed one by one the picture to Melvin, even though Melvin tried to mislead the captain, the man recognized some of the faces, and Tasha noticed he did it.
Tasha: “any face that you would recognize?”
Melvin: “hmm, no, all of them are unknown for me, but if I could get a copy of those pictures, I could check if any of them have been seen around the buildings of the company”
Tasha: “we could do the same, but if you want a copy of the pictures I could give you one”
Melvin: “thank you very much, Captain, I really appreciate this”
Melvin and his lawyer begin to stand up, but Tasha continues.
Tasha: “one more question, before you leave, how did you know your daughter was attacked and that she was coming here?
Now Mr. Porter didn’t have an answer.
Melvin: “I’m Bette’s father…, I have the obligation to watch over her…, can we leave now?”
Tasha: “yes, of course, you can leave”
Melvin and his lawyer left the police station.
Lincoln Square, West Side – Tuesday – afternoon – Bette Porter’s office.
Tina has fallen asleep on the side of the supercomputer in Bette’s office, the brunette is also tired, and it’s already time to go home, though she still has things to do it’ll be better do it another day with a fresh mind, fortunately for her, the cell phone is clean now, early, her girlfriend took good care of it. Bette already called Peggy using her office phone about what Tina discovered this morning as well as the photographs, and the preparation for the incursion of the Bank vault to retrieve the documents of Lower Manhattan.
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Sounds like there’s going to be an unscheduled meeting at the bank between Melvin and his crew and Bette and her crew. Except Bette will have prior warning from Helena….. Now the plot thickens! They need to get their business done and get out of there before the bad guys arrive. But how long can it take to get access to the safe deposit boxes and get one opened and leave the bank? The group is already about to enter the vault, so ten minutes at the most? Surely Aaron cannot get across town that quickly. And they have been very careful that Melvin never see Tina throughout the story. Will he see her for the first time? Bette and Tina need to be gone quickly as well.
Good chapter – things are moving along in the mystery and the romance between Bette and Tina. Now to resolved all this intrigue over the company….
Thanks for the chapter… please give us more when you can. Thank you for this update….can’t wait to see what happens next.
Hi Martha:
Thanks, you always write valuable and interesting comments.
Yes, the plot s getting interesting, I don’t know how long it will take to leave the bank for Bette’s team, but for sure there will be some hubbub there.
The question is why the elders don’t want Melvin to see Tina… Why?
I am very sorry I couldn’t update every week as I was thinking, but when chapters are short it is easier when they are long it takes a little more time, but I’ll do what I can to post more frequently.
Thanks for your comment and for following the story.
P
Great chapter proteonomics!
Oh oh, you leave us again with a cliffy!
Will it come to a confrontation between the two groups or will Bette have the luck and time to get the papers and be gone before Melvin and his group arrive at the bank? One thing about Melvin, he seems honestly to care that somebody tried to harm Bette and take action to punish the bastards who did try to hurt her.
Is Tasha going to do anything about the fact she knew Melvin lied and denied to recognize some of the men in the pictures? Did she order to follow Melvin?
The plot thickens and it seems there will be a confrontation! Make sure nothing bad happens to all the girls!
The relationship between Bette and Tina is growing, lot of love and trust, Bette still is insecure about some things, but yes they are trusting each other and will be there for each other.
Great chapter my friend!
Take care of yourself and stay save and healthy ????
Hi Bibi:
Sorry for the cliffy, but I can’t continue because the rest is a lot.
That is a good question will both teams meet at the bank?
Melvin is Bette’s father, and perhaps Bette is the only person in the world that Melvin still has some good feeling, you know, even the worse persons need to love someone, perhaps it is the case of Melvin.
Tasha has her own game here and maybe she is up to something.
I will always try to protect TIBETTE, but certain things may happen, hope they act smart enough.
The love and trust between Bette and Tina is growing, but there is a difference,
while Tina thought Bette was dead, and find her again was a blessing, Bette thought Tina betrayed her and she is still insecure of herself more than of Tina.
Thank you very much, my friend, for your comment and your support.
P
Hola proteonomics que sorpresa cuando ví el capítulo tú sabes que está historia me encanta y el capítulo me gustó y me dejaste intrigada con el final porque no sabemos que va a pasar gracias
Hey Escorpion:
Que bien que te gusto el capitulo, yo estaba un poco en duda si les gustaria o no, yo se que te he dejado intrigada, pero tratare de subir el otro pronto.
Gracias por seguir la historia y por tu comentario.
P
Gosh, I’ve missed this story. You’re one hell of a writer. This chapter has left me too stress to go to bed.
Please post soon.
Hi Deanna:
Wow, I’m sorry for the cliffhanger, but if I would continue the chapter would be too long.
I’m glad, though, you like it.
I’ll try to post soon
Thanks for your comment.
P