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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 18: THE VAULT
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Two cars are entering the parking garage next to the Manhattan bank, from one of them Bette Porter, wearing an expensive suit, gets off, walks to the passenger side and opens the door for her girlfriend who is wearing a fine dress and a luxury necklace, matching her bracelet and earrings; they both march together toward the exit to enter the bank, leaving Louise in charge of the car.
Inside, the brunette talks to one of the clerks at the table, and this one takes her to a couch in the open hall to wait for the supervisor; Tina comes along with them and seats at her side.
Tina: “I’m going to use my cell phone”
Bette: “of course, baby”
The blonde opens a cell phone case and plays with a device that looks like a cell phone but a close view shows something more like a small tablet, she also puts wireless earplugs on her ears.
After a few minutes, three girls wearing dark glasses and elegantly dressed, walk through the corridor between the cashiers and the offices, arriving at the same station where Bette and Tina are waiting.
Tina begins to work faster on her “cell phone”; Bette observes and tries to stay calm.
The three girls approach to the clerk assistant, the skinny one speaks with him showing a letter, the young man guides them to sit on the chairs and takes the letter to his boss; after a very few minutes he returns with two security workers and tell a few words to the skinny lady they guide the three ladies to a door that gives access to an inner corridor; in the meantime, in his office, the supervisor checks the letter and is ready to make a call to verify the document.
At that moment Tina receives a phone call from Helena.
Helena: “Tina, Sharon just called me and told me that she was in a meeting with Aaron but he received a call from the Main building, he’ll be here in a few minutes, we need to hurry up”
Tina: “I’ll tell them”
Tina tells Bette who decides to improvise something; she noticed that it is her turn to meet the supervisor, so, she approaches the door of the office and enters.
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Sounds like there’s going to be an unscheduled meeting at the bank between Melvin and his crew and Bette and her crew. Except Bette will have prior warning from Helena….. Now the plot thickens! They need to get their business done and get out of there before the bad guys arrive. But how long can it take to get access to the safe deposit boxes and get one opened and leave the bank? The group is already about to enter the vault, so ten minutes at the most? Surely Aaron cannot get across town that quickly. And they have been very careful that Melvin never see Tina throughout the story. Will he see her for the first time? Bette and Tina need to be gone quickly as well.
Good chapter – things are moving along in the mystery and the romance between Bette and Tina. Now to resolved all this intrigue over the company….
Thanks for the chapter… please give us more when you can. Thank you for this update….can’t wait to see what happens next.
Hi Martha:
Thanks, you always write valuable and interesting comments.
Yes, the plot s getting interesting, I don’t know how long it will take to leave the bank for Bette’s team, but for sure there will be some hubbub there.
The question is why the elders don’t want Melvin to see Tina… Why?
I am very sorry I couldn’t update every week as I was thinking, but when chapters are short it is easier when they are long it takes a little more time, but I’ll do what I can to post more frequently.
Thanks for your comment and for following the story.
P
Great chapter proteonomics!
Oh oh, you leave us again with a cliffy!
Will it come to a confrontation between the two groups or will Bette have the luck and time to get the papers and be gone before Melvin and his group arrive at the bank? One thing about Melvin, he seems honestly to care that somebody tried to harm Bette and take action to punish the bastards who did try to hurt her.
Is Tasha going to do anything about the fact she knew Melvin lied and denied to recognize some of the men in the pictures? Did she order to follow Melvin?
The plot thickens and it seems there will be a confrontation! Make sure nothing bad happens to all the girls!
The relationship between Bette and Tina is growing, lot of love and trust, Bette still is insecure about some things, but yes they are trusting each other and will be there for each other.
Great chapter my friend!
Take care of yourself and stay save and healthy ????
Hi Bibi:
Sorry for the cliffy, but I can’t continue because the rest is a lot.
That is a good question will both teams meet at the bank?
Melvin is Bette’s father, and perhaps Bette is the only person in the world that Melvin still has some good feeling, you know, even the worse persons need to love someone, perhaps it is the case of Melvin.
Tasha has her own game here and maybe she is up to something.
I will always try to protect TIBETTE, but certain things may happen, hope they act smart enough.
The love and trust between Bette and Tina is growing, but there is a difference,
while Tina thought Bette was dead, and find her again was a blessing, Bette thought Tina betrayed her and she is still insecure of herself more than of Tina.
Thank you very much, my friend, for your comment and your support.
P
Hola proteonomics que sorpresa cuando ví el capítulo tú sabes que está historia me encanta y el capítulo me gustó y me dejaste intrigada con el final porque no sabemos que va a pasar gracias
Hey Escorpion:
Que bien que te gusto el capitulo, yo estaba un poco en duda si les gustaria o no, yo se que te he dejado intrigada, pero tratare de subir el otro pronto.
Gracias por seguir la historia y por tu comentario.
P
Gosh, I’ve missed this story. You’re one hell of a writer. This chapter has left me too stress to go to bed.
Please post soon.
Hi Deanna:
Wow, I’m sorry for the cliffhanger, but if I would continue the chapter would be too long.
I’m glad, though, you like it.
I’ll try to post soon
Thanks for your comment.
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