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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 18: THE VAULT
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Melvin was pale; he hasn’t set a foot on a police station to be questioned since those days in his youth when he was nothing more than a gangster of a second level.
Melvin: “do you think that’s necessary, I can tell you what I know here”
Police 1: “I’m afraid that is not possible, my captain wants to talk to you, if you are not willing to come, we can come back with a court order”
Melvin: “excuse me, am I a suspect?”
Police 1: “I can’t give you more information, but my captain could”
Melvin: “fine, I’ll go with you, but I’ll call my lawyer”
When Melvin was leaving his office he saw in the hall watching the ‘show’ Peggy, Phillis, Alice, Helena, and some other employees, he was angry and embarrassed at the same time; Melvin told her secretary to send his lawyer to the police station; but following his embarrassment being seen escorted by the police, Peggy spoke up.
Peggy: (smiling) “is there something wrong, Melvin?”
With bloody dark sight in his eyes, he looked at the woman and said nothing, he went along with the police officers to the elevator to the parking garage to get his car, and the police followed him to the station.
Upper East Side – Manhattan – Lexington St. – Helena Peabody’s apartment – Tuesday afternoon.
Bette has summoned to a meeting to Shane, Carmen and Dana; Tina, Helena, and Alice were also present, they are gathering in Helena’s apartment because the Bette believes her office is not safe at the moment. The brunette is explaining to them a plan to retrieve some documents from a bank vault.
Bette: “this mission is completely safe and legal, first of all, those are documents that belong to the company; second, we have the number of the safe box in the vault; third, the authorization to access the safe box is a password, a complicated one, but we have that password and we’ll have a letter authorizing us to reclaim the documents.
Shane: “then, what do we have to do?”
Bette: “I don’t want anybody to find out that we are retrieving the documents, so, you guys have to go there disguised, and protect each other’
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Sounds like there’s going to be an unscheduled meeting at the bank between Melvin and his crew and Bette and her crew. Except Bette will have prior warning from Helena….. Now the plot thickens! They need to get their business done and get out of there before the bad guys arrive. But how long can it take to get access to the safe deposit boxes and get one opened and leave the bank? The group is already about to enter the vault, so ten minutes at the most? Surely Aaron cannot get across town that quickly. And they have been very careful that Melvin never see Tina throughout the story. Will he see her for the first time? Bette and Tina need to be gone quickly as well.
Good chapter – things are moving along in the mystery and the romance between Bette and Tina. Now to resolved all this intrigue over the company….
Thanks for the chapter… please give us more when you can. Thank you for this update….can’t wait to see what happens next.
Hi Martha:
Thanks, you always write valuable and interesting comments.
Yes, the plot s getting interesting, I don’t know how long it will take to leave the bank for Bette’s team, but for sure there will be some hubbub there.
The question is why the elders don’t want Melvin to see Tina… Why?
I am very sorry I couldn’t update every week as I was thinking, but when chapters are short it is easier when they are long it takes a little more time, but I’ll do what I can to post more frequently.
Thanks for your comment and for following the story.
P
Great chapter proteonomics!
Oh oh, you leave us again with a cliffy!
Will it come to a confrontation between the two groups or will Bette have the luck and time to get the papers and be gone before Melvin and his group arrive at the bank? One thing about Melvin, he seems honestly to care that somebody tried to harm Bette and take action to punish the bastards who did try to hurt her.
Is Tasha going to do anything about the fact she knew Melvin lied and denied to recognize some of the men in the pictures? Did she order to follow Melvin?
The plot thickens and it seems there will be a confrontation! Make sure nothing bad happens to all the girls!
The relationship between Bette and Tina is growing, lot of love and trust, Bette still is insecure about some things, but yes they are trusting each other and will be there for each other.
Great chapter my friend!
Take care of yourself and stay save and healthy ????
Hi Bibi:
Sorry for the cliffy, but I can’t continue because the rest is a lot.
That is a good question will both teams meet at the bank?
Melvin is Bette’s father, and perhaps Bette is the only person in the world that Melvin still has some good feeling, you know, even the worse persons need to love someone, perhaps it is the case of Melvin.
Tasha has her own game here and maybe she is up to something.
I will always try to protect TIBETTE, but certain things may happen, hope they act smart enough.
The love and trust between Bette and Tina is growing, but there is a difference,
while Tina thought Bette was dead, and find her again was a blessing, Bette thought Tina betrayed her and she is still insecure of herself more than of Tina.
Thank you very much, my friend, for your comment and your support.
P
Hola proteonomics que sorpresa cuando ví el capítulo tú sabes que está historia me encanta y el capítulo me gustó y me dejaste intrigada con el final porque no sabemos que va a pasar gracias
Hey Escorpion:
Que bien que te gusto el capitulo, yo estaba un poco en duda si les gustaria o no, yo se que te he dejado intrigada, pero tratare de subir el otro pronto.
Gracias por seguir la historia y por tu comentario.
P
Gosh, I’ve missed this story. You’re one hell of a writer. This chapter has left me too stress to go to bed.
Please post soon.
Hi Deanna:
Wow, I’m sorry for the cliffhanger, but if I would continue the chapter would be too long.
I’m glad, though, you like it.
I’ll try to post soon
Thanks for your comment.
P