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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 23: THE HIDDEN THINGS
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Bette: (concerned) “when will she start?”
Alice: “tomorrow”
Bette: “hmm, could you find out about her skills and what exactly she is gonna do here?”
Alice: “that’ll be hard, but I’ll try”
Bette had a bad feeling about Melvin’s new hiring; a computer engineer could be Melvin’s way to hide or find information, and of course to detect the hacking on his cell phone and the spy-drones, no doubt she and Tina have to find the document before his father discovers what they were doing.
Bette: “baby, how long until finish the setting of the hacking program?”
Tina: “almost done, then we can put the terminal to sleep or just lock it and we could check all the progress in my tablet”
Lincoln Square, West Side – Monday – morning – Melvin Porter’s office.
Melvin Porter has been working all weekend to discover Henry and William’s plot, he suspected that those two traitors were not only involved in the attempt against his daughter and in the blackmail note he received a few weeks ago, but also, in the robbery of the forged property titles of the Lower Manhattan branch building, and to confirm that he needs a computer engineer to check the information leakage from his accounts and other sensitive cyber sites of the company.
Today he wrote a memo to the human resources office to hire the person he has selected from his criminal contacts, and, before going to lunch, he’s planning to visit his daughter’s office to check her last activities and of course, to satisfy his curiosity about that girlfriend that Henry mentioned last Wednesday.
Lincoln Square, West Side – Monday – morning – Bette Porter’s office.
It is almost noon and Bette has the foreboding feeling that she and Tina should leave the building as soon as possible, she sensed something was wrong and also feared that Henry may be close or waiting for them around every corner.
Bette: “baby, how long until your program is totally set?”
Tina: “I just finished, and my tablet is finalizing the remote access; I think in 5 to10 minutes it’ll be ready, why?”
Bette: “I want to go out, I mean for the day”
Tina: “I know, I’m nervous too as if something is about to happen”
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This is really good…. you did answer a lot of questions about this story….. but I still believe that Miranda owns the buildings and the transition is to Tina whenever the time is right… In the mean time dear Melvin is chasing a ghost – one he does not know exist. Things are not going well for him.
It appears to me that the personnel department should have been able to hold up Melvin’s hiring of Adele Channing by not allowing her on the premises until she received a full background and security check. This is a buisness of inventions which depend upon records which are maintained in the computer systems. No person should be allowed access without clearance to show they were not likely to commit corporate espionage. And it should not matter who gives the order for the hire, it should be automatic that security clearance is required or entry into the building and into the computer systems would be denied. No exceptions….
I find that Maxine’s secrecy to be interesting. The kidnapping charge is an inventive vehicle by the writer to keep Maxine out of the country. However, its strange that an attorney would not have devised a plan, hired a team of attorneys in which to mount a defense to overcome those charges rather than wait decades for a statue of limitations to expire. Melvin had some money he had stolen, and that is the counter charges that should have been brought. There is a shorter statute of limitation on fraud than kidnapping. Oh and there are always the charges of rape which could have been address as as well.
Had I been Maxine, Melvin would have never know who his daughter was – Bette that is. That is unless she wanted to meet him while he was in prison.
This is a great drama and it is coming together nicely…… cannot wait to read the next chapter… write and publish as soon as you can.
Hi Martha.
When I had to choose a title for this chapter I thought “all hidden things”. But then I realized not all hidden will be revealed here; so, there are more things that Maxine is hiding, and it’s clear she is hiding them, even Tina knows, because her recollection of the past facts doesn’t match what Maxine is telling them.
Yes, Melvin has the feeling that someone dangerous to him is around.
Background checking is necessary for many public offices and some companies, but not in this one, Melvin is hiring Adele as his personal assistant, no as standard personnel of the company. Remember this is a private company with a hierarchy.
Obviously, Maxine could do nothing when Melvin took the money from the organization they had in South America. She was very busy rescuing her family and friends, and she had to defend herself from the mafia and all the bad guys there; Peggy, as you read, was dealing with her family problems and trying to help Kit and Bette to be out of the reach of Melvin; Mabel was very sick and there was nobody else. But I will give you a clue, Maxine didn’t fight her early way home (New York) for other reasons, we’ll find out in a couple of chapters.
The synchronism of the time wasn’t in favor of Maxine to hide her daughter from Melvin, Bette was born before the divorce, and at least for 1 year, she was the apple of Melvin’s eyes, and later in New York, she frequented her father, as it was written in the first chapters of this story.
But I believe that in the Maxine generation lesbians and gays suffered a lot in comparison with Bette and Tina’s generation.
There are still some nuts to crack here, and hopefully, a wedding if our girls survive in one piece.
Thank you Martha for your comments, always very valuable. I hope to post soon, but, as I say, sometimes things take us out of our schedule.
Take care.
P
Hi proteonomics,
What a amazing chapter!
It did answer a few questions but Maxime is still hiding some things and like Martha i wonder why Maxime didn’t hire a legal team. There must be a reason she choose to stay and await the time before she can return to NY.
I am glad nobody was hurt by Henry but he is on the run and still dangerous, they should be careful all the time. And Melvin hiring Adele and on the search for Bette and catched her before they could remove the programm that hacked in his computer and files. Maybe it’s good that Louise is with her.
Melvin, god what a incredible despicable man, Abusing his own daughter and trying to sell his own son all for money. And let’s not forget that he also had an eye on Bette. He is a horrible man and needs to be stopped and deserves to spend the rest of his life rotting in jail.
Despite all the drama, there was also a ray of hope, the conversation between Bette and Tina to take the cold out of the air and that ended with Bette proposing to Tina.
It was really a joy to read this chapter and i hope you will be able to post soon!
Take care my friend!
Hi, my friend.
I’m glad you liked the chapter; and you’re right, Maxine is still hiding things and besides the statute of limitations, she had other reasons to wait all this time before coming to NY.
Now, about Melvin entering Bette’s office, remember the program was almost done when Tina left, and Bette only has to destroy it, but as Melvin was forcing the door to open, Louise unplugged the terminal, for which Bette was grateful, so let’s see what happened with the hacking program.
Yes, Melvin is one of those evil guys, different than Frank Hart and Wilson Peabody, they married lesbians in the closet but they were good guys caring for their children.
Yes, the good thing, and I’m glad that you noticed, is Bette proposing to Tina in a very unconventional way with a reel of platinum for their wedding rings (ha-ha-ha).
As I wrote before, and you know, I wanted to post the last week when I showed you the picture, but life is unpredictable sometimes.
Thank you very much for your refreshing comments, my friend.
P
¡Hola, Proteonomics! Me encantó el capítulo pero quisiera saber que pasa con los secretos de Maxine que no les dice a las chicas me dejaste intrigada con el final,gracias.
Hola, Escorpion,
Que bien que te agrado el capitulo, y si, tu tienes razon, Maxine no ha dicho toda la verdad, ella todavia esta ocultando cosas que se revelaran en el capitulo 25.
Pero ya estamos serca de averiguar todos los detalles.
Muchas gracias por tu comentario y espero subir el siguiente capitulo pronto.
Cuidate.
P
Hey P,
Thanks for the update.
Again, lots of action & some explanations – but still more to answer & some mysteries to solve.
Looking forward to how it turns out.
Thanks
Hi, Collins.
Glad to read your comment, yes, lots of action, but the best is yet to come.
There still are some hidden things that we’ll find out in a couple of chapters, and some new turns and twists are coming very soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.
Take care.
P
Thanks for posting.
A full chapter with answers but still some questions.
Looking forward to more posts to answer those questions.
Hi SG:
I’m late, I know, and I can’t post again.
Yes, in each chapter new things will be discovered; but only at the end, we’ll solve all our doubts.
I’ll try to find time to post.
Thank you for reading and commented, my friend.
P