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    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 23: THE HIDDEN THINGS

    Bette: “Joyce is fine too, indeed, they weren’t in the Limo, according to the security guard of the garage, Franklin almost kicked them out of the car before they could board it, and he demanded to use the vehicle because of his higher rank as a member of the board; so the victim in the car was Franklin”

    Helena: “wow, is he okay?”

    Alice: “no, he was very badly injured in his body and head, the driver has several wounds but only a few bruises in his head, and he was conscious when they took him to the hospital”

    Bette: “yeah, Franklin may die”

    Helena: “and your father knows?”

    Bette: “yes, James said that he went to the hospital too”

    Alice: “they are friends”

    Bette: “that may be the reason or perhaps my father fears he won’t get the majority in the board if Franklin wouldn’t make it”

    Helena: “and where is Joyce?”

    Alice: “according to James, Joyce went along with the police officers to identify the picture of the sniper”

    Helena: “did they catch the criminal?”

    Shane: “no, but the police has videos and pictures from the surveillance cameras, it looks like it was Henry”

    Bette: “and he’s on the run, so we all have to be careful”

    Tina: “but Peggy was his target, right?”

    Helena: “why you think that”

    Tina: “wasn’t it the limousine your mother always uses?”

    There was silence; all the girls looked at each other.

    Helena: (fear on her face) “yes, you’re right, if we hadn’t planned to take her in my car now she would be dead”

    Shane: “and Henry may try to do it again, Peggy needs bodyguards”

    Alice: “who knows which other targets Henry may have?”

    They were talking when Peggy approached.

    Peggy: “I am ordering double protection and bodyguards for all of us”

    Bette: “you’re the one who needs a bodyguard, we’re fine”

    The women took the elevator to go to their offices where they remained working.

    After an hour Louise called Bette to announce that Franklin was in a coma with a diagnosis of permanent brain damage

    In the afternoon Peggy told everybody that Joyce had recognized Henry as the sniper who shot at the limousine, and at the same time, Louise came from the hospital and announced that the chauffeur was in his way of recovery, but Franklin was unresponsive and his diagnosis was very bad.

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    1. This is really good…. you did answer a lot of questions about this story….. but I still believe that Miranda owns the buildings and the transition is to Tina whenever the time is right… In the mean time dear Melvin is chasing a ghost – one he does not know exist. Things are not going well for him.

      It appears to me that the personnel department should have been able to hold up Melvin’s hiring of Adele Channing by not allowing her on the premises until she received a full background and security check. This is a buisness of inventions which depend upon records which are maintained in the computer systems. No person should be allowed access without clearance to show they were not likely to commit corporate espionage. And it should not matter who gives the order for the hire, it should be automatic that security clearance is required or entry into the building and into the computer systems would be denied. No exceptions….

      I find that Maxine’s secrecy to be interesting. The kidnapping charge is an inventive vehicle by the writer to keep Maxine out of the country. However, its strange that an attorney would not have devised a plan, hired a team of attorneys in which to mount a defense to overcome those charges rather than wait decades for a statue of limitations to expire. Melvin had some money he had stolen, and that is the counter charges that should have been brought. There is a shorter statute of limitation on fraud than kidnapping. Oh and there are always the charges of rape which could have been address as as well.

      Had I been Maxine, Melvin would have never know who his daughter was – Bette that is. That is unless she wanted to meet him while he was in prison.

      This is a great drama and it is coming together nicely…… cannot wait to read the next chapter… write and publish as soon as you can.

      • Hi Martha.

        When I had to choose a title for this chapter I thought “all hidden things”. But then I realized not all hidden will be revealed here; so, there are more things that Maxine is hiding, and it’s clear she is hiding them, even Tina knows, because her recollection of the past facts doesn’t match what Maxine is telling them.

        Yes, Melvin has the feeling that someone dangerous to him is around.

        Background checking is necessary for many public offices and some companies, but not in this one, Melvin is hiring Adele as his personal assistant, no as standard personnel of the company. Remember this is a private company with a hierarchy.

        Obviously, Maxine could do nothing when Melvin took the money from the organization they had in South America. She was very busy rescuing her family and friends, and she had to defend herself from the mafia and all the bad guys there; Peggy, as you read, was dealing with her family problems and trying to help Kit and Bette to be out of the reach of Melvin; Mabel was very sick and there was nobody else. But I will give you a clue, Maxine didn’t fight her early way home (New York) for other reasons, we’ll find out in a couple of chapters.

        The synchronism of the time wasn’t in favor of Maxine to hide her daughter from Melvin, Bette was born before the divorce, and at least for 1 year, she was the apple of Melvin’s eyes, and later in New York, she frequented her father, as it was written in the first chapters of this story.

        But I believe that in the Maxine generation lesbians and gays suffered a lot in comparison with Bette and Tina’s generation.

        There are still some nuts to crack here, and hopefully, a wedding if our girls survive in one piece.

        Thank you Martha for your comments, always very valuable. I hope to post soon, but, as I say, sometimes things take us out of our schedule.

        Take care.

        P

    2. Hi proteonomics,

      What a amazing chapter!

      It did answer a few questions but Maxime is still hiding some things and like Martha i wonder why Maxime didn’t hire a legal team. There must be a reason she choose to stay and await the time before she can return to NY.

      I am glad nobody was hurt by Henry but he is on the run and still dangerous, they should be careful all the time. And Melvin hiring Adele and on the search for Bette and catched her before they could remove the programm that hacked in his computer and files. Maybe it’s good that Louise is with her.

      Melvin, god what a incredible despicable man, Abusing his own daughter and trying to sell his own son all for money. And let’s not forget that he also had an eye on Bette. He is a horrible man and needs to be stopped and deserves to spend the rest of his life rotting in jail.

      Despite all the drama, there was also a ray of hope, the conversation between Bette and Tina to take the cold out of the air and that ended with Bette proposing to Tina.

      It was really a joy to read this chapter and i hope you will be able to post soon!

      Take care my friend!

      • Hi, my friend.

        I’m glad you liked the chapter; and you’re right, Maxine is still hiding things and besides the statute of limitations, she had other reasons to wait all this time before coming to NY.

        Now, about Melvin entering Bette’s office, remember the program was almost done when Tina left, and Bette only has to destroy it, but as Melvin was forcing the door to open, Louise unplugged the terminal, for which Bette was grateful, so let’s see what happened with the hacking program.

        Yes, Melvin is one of those evil guys, different than Frank Hart and Wilson Peabody, they married lesbians in the closet but they were good guys caring for their children.

        Yes, the good thing, and I’m glad that you noticed, is Bette proposing to Tina in a very unconventional way with a reel of platinum for their wedding rings (ha-ha-ha).

        As I wrote before, and you know, I wanted to post the last week when I showed you the picture, but life is unpredictable sometimes.

        Thank you very much for your refreshing comments, my friend.

        P

      • Hola, Escorpion,

        Que bien que te agrado el capitulo, y si, tu tienes razon, Maxine no ha dicho toda la verdad, ella todavia esta ocultando cosas que se revelaran en el capitulo 25.

        Pero ya estamos serca de averiguar todos los detalles.

        Muchas gracias por tu comentario y espero subir el siguiente capitulo pronto.

        Cuidate.

        P

      • Hi, Collins.

        Glad to read your comment, yes, lots of action, but the best is yet to come.

        There still are some hidden things that we’ll find out in a couple of chapters, and some new turns and twists are coming very soon.

        Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.

        Take care.

        P

      • Hi SG:

        I’m late, I know, and I can’t post again.
        Yes, in each chapter new things will be discovered; but only at the end, we’ll solve all our doubts.

        I’ll try to find time to post.

        Thank you for reading and commented, my friend.

        P

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