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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 25-A: AFTERSHOCK (part 1)
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Tina: “that’s true, I always thought it was Miranda, I still think of her as my actual mother, and Maxine was her replacement, but, still I feel guilty for not feeling any affection for Mabel…”
Bette: “Tina, you can’t force what it’s not coming naturally…, someone told me a long time ago ‘what isn’t born doesn’t grow’; you’d need to know her more, and perhaps you’d start having feelings for her.”
Tina: (glassy eyes) “maybe, but it’s not fair for her, she lost her husband, her lover, her child and was abused, raped, tortured, only because she wanted to help… and I can’t even give her the love of a daughter.”
Bette: (looking sadly to her fiancé) “and it’s not your fault, you are a victim too, it was a miracle mom could rescue you from those gangsters…, did you know how Miranda die?”
There was silence, Tina’s gaze lost in the infinite blue of the sky above the waves of the sea for a few seconds before she reacted to Bette’s words.
Tina: “she didn’t die, she is missing…, well, that’s what I believe; Mamax, never said the contrary…, but you may be right, perhaps, Miranda is dead.”
Now Bette is amazed, could it be possible, after so many years, Miranda may be alive?
Bette: “you mean that you have no idea what happened to her?”
Tina: “yeah, you’re right, nobody knows, not even your mom.”
Both girls stayed in silence hugging each other. Then, Bette took the opportunity to talk about the matter that was worrying her for a few days already.
Bette: “Tina, is there anything you want to talk about?”
Tina: (looking apart) “why do you say that?”
Bette: “these last days, you have been different.”
Tina: “different? How…?”
Bette: “like trying to find something missing and you’re trying to find it… perhaps in me.”
Tina: (sighing) “it has been hard for me since that day in the parking lot. I thought you’ll die; it was so fast, in less than one second I felt that I couldn’t live if you weren’t by my side…, and I decided to die…, I felt the pain of the bullet tearing my skin, the blood leaving my body…, dizziness, sadness…, at a certain moment, I felt your fear and hurt…, your arms holding me…, for a brief moment I had the sensation of emptiness as if my life were gone…, but then, I saw your face, you were terrified, and I wanted to console you…, but I was damaged… I felt that I was almost nothing…”
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Oh, P…. a cliffhanger….
So everyone made it out alive…. Peggy needs to see Faye Buckley and confront her with what she knows. My guess is that Melvin or someone has tied up Buckley’s inheritance to get her to work for him or them. Buckley suspects that Miranda is alive and so she is trying to play both sides – one the get her inheritance and the the other to have another chance with Miranda. But Mabel also is in love with Miranda… so their may be some more drama when and if Miranda shows up. And there is Maxine…. who does Maxine love? And Peggy? Is she attracted to Sharon or does she carry an old torch for Maxine or maybe Faye.
I do want Tina and Bette to get over this trauma. I want Melvin to get trapped and get his just reward for his treachery and horrible acts. I want the buisness to be rescued from those who are slowly tearing it apart. And finally, I want everyone to be reunited with their chosen lovers and family and live happily ever after…
Thanks for the update of this chapter. Keep writing this is coming together nicely…..
Hi Martha:
Yes, this time nobody died. Buckley’s family lost their money in a legal way; though Miranda (if were alive) could change that. and yes she is looking for another chance with Miranda, but again, not sure if she’s alive.
The situation of Mabel is more complicated; yes Miranda was her old flame, I guess not the only one. Now, who Maxine is in love with? Good question that may be answered in chapters 26 or 27,
I didn’t post the whole chapter because it was going to be too long, but the next part is finished, just looking for a picture. Your question is answered in chapter 25-b.
BTW, there was no cliffy.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting.
P.
¡Hola, Proteonomics! Que bueno que estés de vuelta me encantó cuando ví una publicación me sorprendió porque pensé que a ninguna le iba a caer la bala,gracias y esperando el siguiente capítulo con ansias y más pág.
Hola Escorpion
Bueno, hay una poderosa razon en esta historia para que Tina haya sido herida: Mabel.
La continuacion esta escrita, pero me falta la foto, asi que va a demorar unos dias.
Muchas gracias por seguir esta historia.
Cuidate.
P.
Hey proteonomics,
So good to see a update and without a cliffhanger! Thank you for that! And i agree 100% with what you said in the author note!
Phew, nobody died and survided it, sadly Henry survived too, i am not sure i trust the FBI fooled again by him so he can finish his job.
Poor Tina, jumping in front of Bette to avoid Bette being killed because she couldn’t Imagine to live without Bette and decided that she should be killed, very sad and brave of her. But i imagine Bette thought the same. Gladly Tina survided and wasn’t that critical injured.
Mabel have found out her daughter is alive and feeling hurt that her family didn’t tell her, given her traumatic past she had to deal with and her relapse several times i can understand that they didn’t say anything about Tina to her, to protect her fragile mind.
Your Bette is a very caring and devoted girlfriend, she doesn’t shy away to ask Tina what she is feeling, she saw that Tina was struggling with something and asked her instead of ignoring it, resulting in both of them going to talk to a professional therapist.
Very slowly the pieces of the puzzle are falling together but we are not there yet.
Thank you my friend for the update. Take care of yourself!
Hi, my friend.
Always waiting for your valuable comment. Yes you like me are on the same side with respect to TIBETTE and GQ.
Even though I don’t like Henry, is good that he survived, because he’s the door to the other criminals.
The reason why Henry failed to kill someone was the diversion: the cry of Buckley, and then the Dembo’s shoot.
So many traumatic experiences, so much sadness from their past. The human mind is so fragile, any little hit may cause terrible effects, triggering a bunch of responses and produce huge damage.
Given their story since 11 years ago, I couldn’t make a different Bette, she loves Tina very much.
Still, there are more pieces to finish the puzzle, but we are very, very close.
Thanks, my friend, thank you for your kind comments.
Take care.
P
Great chapter. Some of my favorite lines:
Peggy: “that’s not true, and you know, we all wanted to go there, to help, we probably underestimate those criminals, and we were victims of our arrogance, but what is done, is done, and we must keep going.” So agree.
The glassy hazel eyes looked deep on the dark ones.“I won’t sleep well if I have to stay far from you.” I melted.
cute and attractive in her butch way; Kennard was a win-win girl. 100% agree
Hi, Westy.
I’m glad you liked the short chapter.
Those lines are how I feel.
A little part of this story is also my own experience.
And that is the way I see Tina with this background.
I don’t know if this makes sense, but it is how it is in the head of this crazy writer.
Thank you for your comment.
Take care.
P
I think you nailed it!
Thank you!
Take care.
P
I think the hidden person is Miranda who doesn’t want her daughter to be with bette and she wants to hurt bette to take revenge on Melvin
Hi, Kittu:
Wow, interesting.
But remember, Maxine took care of Tina when Miranda disappeared, and Bette is Maxine’s daughter
Thank you very much for your comment and for following this story.
Take care, Kittu.
P.
Hi P,
Great chapter – Westy got it right with the fav lines – totally agree.
The shorter chapter seemed to work very well & still left room for some suspense!!!
Great job overall & waiting for those last few pieces!!!
Awesome!!!
Hi, my friend,
Finally, you’re back, I’m waiting for the doctor’s story. No pressures, take your time.
I’m very glad you liked the chapter, a short one. Believe me, it was hard to stop the chapter here; besides the whole 25 was already written. But it’s fine, I like to write short chapters.
Yes, Westy got it nicely. But it wasn’t my intention to put a cliffy, (I couldn’t help it).
Almost ready to post again.
Thank you for your support and comment.
Take care.
P.
I thought you said no Cliffhanger !!!
Thanks for posting look forward to more soon.
Hi, SG.
How are you doing, my friend.
I knew I shouldn’t write the last line, But it was like my hand type an automatic statement. Sorry, there was no cliffhanger intended.
I’m almost ready to post the new one, I’m looking for the picture and I’ll post.
Take care, my friend.
P
Great chapter.
You and Collins with those cliffhangers!!!!
Thanks so much.
Looking forward to more!!
Hi LeighS
I’m glad you liked this chapter,
Sorry if I made you think it was a cliffhanger here, it was a bad habit.
Thank you for reading the story.
Take care.
P