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    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 3: THE JOB

    At the party, Rockaway Beach, Queens, Kit’s beach house

     

    Meanwhile, on the beach, Tina and Brenda were hearing the birthday’s greetings and then Jodi’s singing.

    Brenda: “wow, I think I screwed the birthday cake’s surprise.”

    Tina: “you didn’t have to be there.”

    Brenda: “well, I wouldn’t want to be here now… I’m scared.”

    Tina: “about the birthday girl?”

    Brenda: “no her…, she is nice…, but, you know, Tina, a few days ago her father called me and wanted to talk to me in his office, I didn’t want to go, so I said I was busy, that man is no good, he has a dark aura, and now that someone else was in the cake, and I screwed the plan, he will know, I believe that he has spies that’s why I don’t want to stay here, not because of the birthday girl but because of her father.”

    Tina: “then, why don’t we leave?”

    Brenda: “right…, but would you leave with me, I feel embarrassed and scared about leaving alone.”

    Tina: “of course, I’ll go with you.”

    When leaving the place, they used the back door of the house, Samantha, a friend of Brenda crossed paths with them, and of course, she was perplexed looking at Tina.

    Sam: “hi, Brenda, I thought you were inside.”

    Brenda: “oh…, hi, Sam, no, I’m leaving right now.”

    Sam: “hmm, aren’t you gonna introduce…”

    Brenda: “sorry, Sam, we’re in a hurry.”

    And the two girls left, leaving Sam confused, they walked to the parking lot, then to Brenda’s car.

    Brenda: “Tina, do you wanna come with me?”

    Tina: “sure.”

    Brenda: (already starting the car) “where do we go?”

    Tina: “wherever you want, the night is young.”

    The car departed and soon at high speed, they were far from the party’s house.

    When Alice, Bette, and Helena arrived at the beach, they didn’t find Brenda and the mysterious beautiful blonde, instead, they saw Sam.

    Alice: “hi…, hmm….Sam, right?”

    Sam: “uh-huh, yes, Sam Makavejev.”

    Helena: “by any chance, have you seen Brenda?”

    Sam: “yes, two minutes ago, she was leaving the house.”

    Alice: “what…? She was leaving?”

    Sam: “yes…, with a very beautiful blonde.”

    Helena: “do you know her?”

    Sam: “of course, I know Brenda.”

    Alice: (rolling her eyes) “no Brenda, the blonde.”

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      • proteonomics says

        Hi Martha:

        I’m very glad that you liked this chapter, believe me, I’m not going to wait one month to post the next one, it will be just 2 weeks, I should post around October 11 (one or two days before or after).

        I also hope the Tina and Bette will face each other soon, they almost met in the subway.

        But as you have read, I’m building the scene of what will happen in the next chapters.

        I hope to keep you guys entertained in the rest of the story.

        Thanks again for your comments, those are always very important for us, the writers.

        P

    1. Martha3128 says

      P.
      Length of chapter is fine…..length to me is not a factor. Write the story as you see appropriate and do not worry about length of the chapters. A long chapter helps when you are waiting for the next installment.

      • proteonomics says

        Hi Zhenya:

        I know, barely you find a writer that wants to post a shorter chapter; but, what happens is that I made myself a vow, for this story, of posting chapters no longer of 20 pages, and so far I have failed, all my chapters are a bit longer.

        But I will have to adapt.

        Thank you for following this story, I hope not to disappoint.

        Thanks again.

        P

      • proteonomics says

        Hola Escorpion:

        Me alegra que te siga gustando la historia, a mi tambien me gustan los capitulos largos, ojala que tengas paciencia para esperar el encuentro the Tina y Bette y para gozar de su romance y sus aventuras.

        Muchas gracias por leer y comentar.

        P

    2. Bibi28 says

      Hi proteonomics,

      Never apologize for the lenght of this chapter!!!!

      It was a really intersting chapter, there is always a lot going on in your stories, and i am trying to find and absord all the clues. But i think i am over looking some of the clues or are not able to put them together. Damn my age 😁

      I love the flashbacks both Tina and Bette have, they answer slowly little by little what happened ten years ago.

      So much mysterie that you will slowly reveal to us. Look forward to that!

      So they will finally meet again! They were so close at the subway!

      I look forward to the next chapter!!!

      • proteonomics says

        Hi, my friend.

        Thanks for your encouraging words.

        Well here is also some clues, but perhaps some of them are evident and you already know what is coming.

        Yes, the flashbacks are enlightening about what happened 10 years ago; it’s hard to understand how a meeting, friendship and falling in love of only one day, may change our lives; when sometimes you know people for a while and they barely influence our life.

        And they were so close in the subway as you pointed, but sometimes, things take a little longer than we expect.

        But don’t be disappointed, just one thing, next chapter you will see a picture for the first meeting (well I hope I’ll make a nice picture).

        Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.

        P

    3. AReader says

      Hey P. I dont mind of the long stories. In fact i luv em.

      “and when Louise and Mabel find out about her, please don’t force the encounters, let them find each other slowly” Are Tina n Louise related? And the fact that Tina n Louise have the same looks. So i assume that they r related.

      • proteonomics says

        Hi AReader:

        Great, very smart, you found a very important clue; I thought nobody noticed.

        Yes, they are related but why Louise didn’t recognize Tina in the clinic? (chapter 1 and 2) and why Kit has to keep Tina hidden? (and Why M is asking her that?) and Bette tried to be with Louise because she resembles Randy (for God sake, Louise was smart enough to avoid that catastrophe)

        Of course, there is an answer, you may discover that by my clues or perhaps in a few chapters.

        Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

        P

    4. Crystal J.H says

      proteonomics:

      It’s a very attempted chapter, also very good! The interaction between Alex and Randy was pure love, they seemed so at ease with each other, you do have a great choice of words, please don’t hesitate to write more pages for them.

      As for Bette and Tina in the present, I really do hope that these two people meet soon, it was clear that they are still loving each other but they didn’t know the other are still alive. These must be lots of readers waiting to see them meet in this chapter but well, another cliffhanger and another chapter to wait.

      But I’ll be patient, for me, I think the pace is slow but very focus and full of details, by the talk between Bette and her friends and sisters, we could know how the person she turns into. And how she tries to prove herself. As for Tina, she’s a worrier, she really do fight a lots by herself. I just hope that when they meet, they would not be so shock about the news.

      Will Bette be on time? Hmm…I hope so, but for the chapter and the picture to look like, I don’t think she’ll make it, you always give out surprises and it’s make the story so good and so different than others.

      Please post soon and long chapter is always the best! Thanks for the great story!

      CJ

      • proteonomics says

        Hi CJ:

        Yes, cliffhangers are my skill (😂😂😂).

        We’ll see more of Randy and Alex in the next chapters, but at a certain point, I have to focus more on the new drama, anyway, the romance will continue in current days.

        Yes, you’re right in your second paragraph, but, I’ll make them meet in the next chapter (whatever it takes).

        You descrived Bette and Tina in this story very well, Bette the negotiator (mediation committee) and Tina as you already found, is like a warrior.

        Yes, indeed it will be many surprises in the next chapter (stay tune 🤣🤣🤣).

        Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.

        P

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