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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 7: FALLING FOR HER
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Kit: “hey, baby girl, is Mabel okay?”
Louise: “yes, she’s fine, just had surgery this morning, why?”
Kit: “oh…, nothing just wondering the motive of your visit, what’s going on, Lou”
Louise: “well, I was hoping you were free to have lunch with me”
Kit: (looking at Louise’s eyes intensely) “of course, I have time, but tell me…, this is really important, right?”
Louise: “yes, as a matter of fact, it is… look, I could go directly and talk to Bette, but I don’t think she will take very well what I just found… and besides… I need to understand certain things and you are my only source available”
Kit: (sighing) “hmm…, I see, it’s about the past?”
Louise: “I think so…, the past and my mom’s missing child…, it wasn’t her imagination, right? That baby really exists, doesn’t it? ”
Kit: “well this will be long and perhaps I need additional documents to have this conversation with you…, I already finished all my appointments today, I have the afternoon free, what about you?”
Louise: “I don’t have anything important; I could use the afternoon to talk about this”
The two women went just around the corner to Kit’s house.
Kit: “okay, Lou, tell me what have you found?”
Louise: “weeks ago after I saw Christina Kennard in the Planet, I recognized her, I saw her before that day, it was on December in the clinic, then, I already noticed something very familiar; but after that Friday in the Planet, I checked at home some old pictures and reached the conclusion that she’s related to my family, I told Bette about that, and she was surprised, but she told me something that now is worrying me…., she said that she feels a great attraction for that girl…; well since then I have kept looking for information about Kennard”
Kit: “hmm, let me clarify, you think that Kennard is related to you and Mabel, you mean as a cousin or similar?”
Louise: “well, I thought that too, but the other day, looking in the attic at home, I found several boxes containing documents and pictures, and looking in an old album I found this”
Louise opened her purse and showed a picture to Kit; there was her mother sitting on a chair carrying a newborn baby, another woman, pale brown hair at her side, holding her by her shoulders with one arm and with the other carrying a brunette little girl of around one-year-old, a third girl, a blonde one, was holding Mabel’s hand, and a young Kit was standing behind them.
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Thanks for the chapter and Happy Thanksgiving!
Thanks for reading, Zhenya
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Hola proteonomics que bueno que pudiste subir el capítulo pero me dejaste intrigado como termino el capítulo
Hola Escorpion:
Siento haberte dejado intrigada, pero yo tendría que escribir muchas más páginas para no dejarte en suspenso y la verdad eso me tomaría más tiempo, y yo con las justas puedo subir 20-25 paginas por vez, pero solo falta un capitulo mas para que el sufrimiento se acabe.
Ojala que puedas soportar el siguiente capítulo es un poco agridulce como este.
Gracias por seguir la historia.
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I love your Chapters but they are so frustrating as I leave me desparately wanting more:-)!
Thanks for posting, still loving the story.
Please, please post soon
SG (Sassy Gran not Super Girl!)
Hi SG (Sassy Grant not Super Girl)
That was funny, I didn’t notice SG.
I’m very sorry that these chapters were frustrating for you, I would like to write longer chapters but as you can imagine time is short and I’m still recovering from surgery and new things in my job, so I found the way to post every 2 weeks, but I can’t upload long chapters as in my former story.
Now, the next chapter is the last sweet-bitter one, then the trend changes. Just a little bit of patience.
Anyway, I’m glad you still like my story, and I hope to post it soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Hi proteonomics,
Sweet and a bitter end were you saying?!
Poor Tina, you make it very hard for her to trust Bette. I hope she remembers what Bette told her about in confidence about needing Aaron for the next few weeks. But i do make a guess, that she will remember at this moment.
Poor Bette, trying so hard to earn Tina’s trust and now this.
Louise found out about Tina being her sister, but have to hold the secret in. All those secrets will create so much anger and hurt between Bette and Tina, Maxime and Kit. I know they try to keep Tina safe but this will come out with a loud bang and it will take some time before the dust settle down.
Amazing chapter and i am looking forward for more sweet and less bitter!
Thank you my friend ????
Hi Bibi:
Don’t think I’m cruel with Tina and Bette, they have to know each other, they are new persons for the other and they have many things to figure out.
Yes, Mabel is Tina’s real Mother and her great friend Maxine saved the baby as she promised, and Kit said; all of that will be clarified at the end, for now, I don’t want to make a mess giving too much information that could confuse
yes, you’re right, Tina will know what to do, she is not a naive girl and she knows what she wants and how to proceed, and the same goes for Bette, yes she will keep the secret.
Well, we think it could be hard for them to find the truth, but all those secrets are connected and also connected with Melvin and his friends, don’t worry once our team of superheroes (hahaha I’m joking here) is complete they will discover many things working together.
I’m very sorry for the sweet and bitter, it will last another chapter but then the trend will change, just, I may try to make sweeter the next chapter but I can do nothing for the bitter part.
Thanks, my friend for reading and commenting.
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proteonomics
You have to stop doing that! I’m so happy thay finally, finally these two have sense the strong feeling for both of them and I can see that Bette was trying so hard to gain Tina’s trust, but her signature brought all the things back to the beginning again, ahh!
This was an amazing chapter, you described the complicated of Bette’s situation and how she wanted to help Tina but also needed to care for the others who worked for her. Though I am in team Tina, I have to agree with Bette for not facing Aaron directly, it’s a tough game and very hard to make a choice, I hope that son of a bitch won’t do anything to our Tina.
Please, please, please, let Alice and Randy quickly noticed their true identity, it’s a torture seeing them so close but unable to know each other! This was way more like The Most Distant Course, But I have faith in you, proteonomics, due to the situation of the new show, I trust you that you will sooonvring our favorite couple back together.
What a great chapter! Always long and guaranteed, please post soon, enjoy your story so much.
CJ
Hi CJ:
Yes, I must stop teasing, you’re right, but the general story is already written, I’m just filling the edition and details.
Yes, Tina and Bette are knowing each other, Bette has the advantage that she knows Tina = SG (Super Girl not Sassy Grant) and she is using that to know more about her; Tina, on her side, knows very well how to play this game, she’s not naive, and she will do something soon.
Well, Aaron will do something to Tina, but you’ll see.
And they are together, don’t you see the glow around them (this is a figurative way of speak) they are into each other.
And CJ, don’t mention the new show, don’t ruin my night, I’ll deal with that later.
Thanks, my friend for reading and commenting.
P
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“days later Maxine found where the baby was and bribed the woman that was taking care of her, she rescued Christina and even took her for a DNA test to be sure it was your mom’s daughter…, she raised and adopted her as her own child”
Please tell me that lawyer Maxine did not do a legal adoption of Christina Miranda Kennard!!! If she did then Bette and Tina can never be married in the US! They are legally siblings with the same mother! And legal adoption cannot be reversed once done. If Maxine is just the legal guardian, then they may marry as they are not legally siblings. If it is an adoption without legal registration or court approval, then they can marry.
Tina must get busy and find out what happened to Alex. She must discover that Bette aka Alex aka The Green Lantern is the love of her life and stop this incessant love affair for a ghost. Bette is going with her heart. Let Tina go with hers.
No wonder Bette was attracted to Louise!! Louise is Tina’s sister! Fortunately, Louise did not have similar feelings for Bette.
Aaron is a cockroach! Someone needs to just step on him and put him out of his misery.
I’m still confused as to what is going on with the company. We now have Aaron and his dealings with the Chinese, Melvin and his buddies with some other agenda, and Bette and her family and friends with another agenda. Whew!
This is a great chapter with lots of information. I am hoping that Bette and Tina can get together soon so they can team up and get the company organized and moving forward. Having a bad work environment is not good for anyone, especially the workers. Productivity falls when people are concerned about their job standing, their safety and their relationships with others. Hopefully Bette, Alice, James and Kit can make some improvements at B.I.T.C.H.
Thank you for this story and this chapter look forward to more ….Love this stuff.
Hi Martha:
Oh, I see your concern, look, Maxine, as Kit pointed, needed to protect the baby of her best friend (“?”) but she would never steal that baby from her. And even though the baby was born in Puerto Rico (USA territory) all paperwork of her ‘adoption’ was done in another country and being Maxine, an experimented lawyer, she knew what she was doing. I can’t tell too much about that because it’s part of future chapters, but I will tell you something, Tina doesn’t know about that, Kit knows things but she won’t say a word without Maxine permission and what she told Louise is just to stop her to keep digging.
I know that you and all the others who made comments above want the same Tina-Bette together, however, it will take another chapter of knowing, flirting and fighting with each other, to change the trend in this story, and then, they could do things together.
Now, what Nadia Karella told Bette about her discoveries was that the Chinese group were connected with Melvin and her partners in crime and Aaron was just the pawn who has the signed document from Melvin, Phillips, and William as the owner of the branch, but Aaron knows that he will get nothing or perhaps he may go to Jail if he works with Melvin, so he needed power. Bette and the other girls are using this situation to stop the sale of the branch; they are using Aaron making him believe, he has their trust, and Bette is just holding him until they find the document with Maxine forged signature.
But first, we need these two together; and don’t worry, if things go well, there would be a happy ending.
Thanks for your comments, Martha, they are very interesting and challenging.
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A legal adoptions in any country in the world is recognized by the US governments. That is true of all marriages and divorces and other contracts. Informal adoptions whereby someone does not get governmental or court approval are not. In Bette and Tina’s case, no legal adoption means they can marry. Maxine would have no way of looking into the future and knowing Bette and Tina may fall in love some day. So if legal adoption was the way she was looking out for the safety of Tina, I can see it. The only remedy then would be an adult adoption for Tina for another mother, then she could marry Bette legally. Since her mother is still alive, it could be her birth mother who does the adoption. Almost anyone except Kit, Maxine or Melvin could adopt Tina and there would be no problem with Bette and Tina marrying.
So to make it less complex – make it an informal adoption or a guardianship in your story. That will clear the path forward. I prefer a guardianship. This is where a court appoints a temporarily caretaker for caring for an individual. When the individual comes of age or their disability is remedied, the individual resumes their own care and there is no further obligations.
To marry in the US, you must comply with state law in the state you will solemnize your marriage in. There are specific requirements. 1) You must be of age or have permission from parents or guardian or the courts if you are underage. 2) You must not be legally married to another individual 3) The marriage must be mutually consented to by both parties 4) You cannot marry someone closely related to you – prohibited spouses are your grandparents, your parents, siblings to your parents, your siblings, offspring of your siblings – by blood or by adoption. All of these relationships would be considered incestuous. You may marry your first cousin in 34 states, so that is not much of a problem. Age varies by state – some as young as 16 but most at age 18.
Hi Martha:
That is wonderful information, especially for my records, I like to collect this type of information for future stories. Well, in some places in other countries (not the USA) you may go to a local community center and settle a birth certificate, even if it’s not real, and you can go to an authorized notary and then, send it to the USA claiming its validity, and so many other things could be done.
But that’s not the case in this story; but you have given me an idea, and I will use it to add a little cliffhanger to this story in the future; anyway, I will let leak to you some information I left for finals chapters here, Maxine is Tina’s guardian, she wasn’t the Kennard one who adopted her, but she was signed and authorized as guardian of Tina, which of course Tina doesn’t know.
I hope that clarifies for you some questions, and thank you so much for your various interest in this story.
Thank you for following it.
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