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Badlands – Chapter 10
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I walked out of the house and watched her get into the jeep. “Do you want me to come watch you tonight?” I asked her. Leaning on to the side of her car door. She started the ignition to her car and looked at me.
“If you want to…” She said. She reversed her car roughly and I had to take an immediate step back.
She was gone from sight in seconds. I didn’t know what to do; I had to hear some voice. So then I called my friend.
Less than ten minutes she arrived. Where does she live? She doesn’t tell me and she knows I’m curious about it. I saw her from my window and within seconds I heard the knocking. The first moment I said ‘hello’ to her through the phone; she asked me ‘what’s wrong’. I asked her if she was free and answered me with a snicker.
‘Of course I’m free…’ she said as I recalled back.
‘Can you come over?’ I asked through the phone.
‘I’ll be there in ten…’ She said and hung up on me.
Now she is in my living room; sitting ever so sternly; always guarded with her surroundings. Things that make her… Jenny.
“What is it…” She asked me as I put hand her a glass of water.
I took a seat across her. She looked at me up and down. The way I dress… it’s confusing her. I no longer have the intimidating appearance with the sharp clothing’s that I use to put on. She’s looking at my sober eyes… she can tell I haven’t been taking the white powder for a while. She doesn’t know how to handle this new me. And so she waited for my reply to her question.
“Are you still mad at me…?” I asked her. I waited for a while for an answer; she seems to be thinking about it.
“Does it really matter… you’re still going to be with her; I feel like there’s no point to be angry towards you…” She said neatly.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!