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Badlands – Chapter 10
“Yes…” I said quietly.
“I can’t help you with this type of stuff…” She said clearly.
“I know…” I replied back foolishly.
“God…” She let out that sigh again and I shut my eyes and could only listen to her let out that frustrated breath. “Is there anything I can do that will change your mind about all this?” She asked, almost pleadingly.
“No…” I shake my head.
“You’re not living here forever… you know that right? Sooner or later you’ll be flying back to New York… leaving this behind…” She said. I put both of my hands on my face; listening to her saying the truth.
“I know Jenny…” I said frustratingly. “I think… I’m gonna tell her… I’ll tell her everything about me… I have to give this a shot…” I said suddenly; looking at her.
“You’re out of your mind… you’re asking for her death if you do that…” She said.
“No, I won’t let anything touch her… I’ll protect her; I’ll do everything I can…” I said foolishly. This is Shane utterly in love talking not the Shane the daughter of a mob talking.
“My, my… listen to your self… I cannot believe the shit you’re saying to me. Okay, if you do tell her… and if she, surprisingly still accepts you. What then?” She asked. Well, haven’t thought of that.
“Uhh…
“Shane… stop this; stop all of this… what are you doing to your self?! You’re weak… your thoughts are clouding your judgment… Where’s the Shane that always has nine millimeter stuck to her waist?? Huh?? Look at you… I know you better than this…” Then she stopped and I was waiting for more. She just stopped but still continued to stare; it was like as if she realized something. It kind of freaked me out; I was ready for her to finishes her tangent. I looked at her surprised and she looked at me in that way I can’t figure it out.
“I know you too damn well… you’re full of innocence but your heart Shane… it’s filled with wrath…” She said; and something kind of popped into my head; like a light bulb. But I shrugged it off; how foul of her to say that to me?
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(44 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!