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Badlands – Chapter 10
“I guess you’re right…” I said.
“So, how have you been…?” She asked, interested suddenly.
“Been well since we last saw each other…. not so well today…” I replied.
“Ah… where’s the girl?” She asked. I got a little mad that she called her ‘girl’. She fixed her seating; leaning towards me not the comfortable sofa behind her. She crossed her legs; very feminine like and put her hands on it, with her fingers intertwined from each hands.
“You mean Carmen…” I said sharply. She knows it pissed me off, but I didn’t do anything about it.
“You know who I’m talking about…” She said resentfully, her hand flying in the air; shrugging it off. God, she’s so bitter.
“She’s off with her family… tonight; she’s DJing at the Planet. You want to come?” I asked; I knew the answer but thought I should give it a shot.
“Oh, you want me to come?” She said in that sarcastic tone that I can’t handle.
“Yeah, I want you to come… I want you to come and see her work; my girlfriend work…” I said rather proudly.
“Well… I don’t know about that… tell me, why aren’t you well today Shane…” She asked. She knows me too well. She knows that I want her here to talk; whatever it may be. Should I tell her that Carmen knows? That Carmen knows something ain’t right about me.
“She…
… Knows?” She finished for me.
“Well, she doesn’t know know… but she knows I have a secret…” I tried to sugar coat it, I saw her expression change. It’s now that ‘I told you so’ and ‘we’re in deep shit now….’ look.
“Right, and what are you gonna do about it? You’re gonna tell her… I don’t think that’s such a good idea…” She said protectively and shaking her head. “So, you’re not in a good state with her… is that it?… is that why your brought me here?” She said in a row. She didn’t wan to help me with this affair. I do understand her but I needed her, to see my friend. Even the things she says to me are not that nice.
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(44 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!