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Badlands – Chapter 11
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Carmen came in and washed her hands in the sink. She didn’t seem to realize that ma and Alice gotten quiet since she came in. I got up and walked towards her. She turned around and surprised that I was standing so close to her.
“Oh…” She said; as she my face. “Jeez Shane…” She laughed and my face still hasn’t change.
“Hey Carm…” I said. “Alice knows….”I blurted out; I couldn’t hold anything to her anymore. Every single just comes spilling out when I’m near her. Besides do I really want Alice to spill it to her?
“Knows what?” She said; her brows closed together didn’t seem to get where I’m going.
Alice’s face changed as well… She looked nervous for what is about to come.
“Uhm… knows…. about me…” As I said those words; I can see her eyes getting bigger and her mouth moving. She looked… angry.
“What?! Since when??” She screamed and looked between me and Alice. Alice got up and got her bags; she thought she could leave this situation for me to handle.
“Oh no; you not going anywhere Al… get your ass back on that chair!” I demanded. Alice sat back down like a wounded puppy. I can feel the heat aerating from Carmen’s body. I can handle an angry girlfriend; right?
“C… It’s nothing… like she didn’t really tell me… I mean I just googled her…” Alice tired to cover up.
“Al; please… don’t even try okay… I know when you’re lying… tell me; how the hell??” She shrugged with her hands flying in the air. “How did she know first and not me??” She asked. I looked at Alice and she mouthed ‘I told you so’ at me and I couldn’t help but rolled my eyes at her.
“I’ll-I’ll tell you…” I said calmly. “You; know when you invited me to your table at the Planet…” I started. Her face started to soften and my heart beat grew steadier.
“Al… you knew all this time?” She asked. Alice nodded at her friend. I told her the whole drama of it. How Alice saw my daggers first and how threatened her. She wasn’t really happy with it.
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Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!
Oh man, you know it can’t be good if Gabe came all the way to LA. You have to post the next chapter soon!!! I need to know what happens!!! AAAHHHH…
gosh i luv ur story, its so creative and original! plz plz plz! post the next chapter, i just cant wait
oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)
Meh ! I don’t like Gabe and right now, I don’t like Jenny very much either !
aww…i hope gabe won’t cause problems…i want carmen and shane to be happy
amazing! I can’t wait what good old Gabe is going to do…
Oh boy. The next chapter should be really interesting. Love it!
wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!
HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!
great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx