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Badlands – Chapter 11
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“So; you’re saying to me don’t tell her?” I asked.
“Well… I’m not saying anything… do whatever you wanna do…” She shrugged.
“Okay… that’s not really helping me…” I said to her.
“Look; it’s good that if you tell her so we can talk about you… like the real you… and we need to do that… and if you don’t tell her; you’ll avoid being in the shithouse for a while…cause you know I might let it slip…” She said.
“Huh…” I said.
“Hey; you know when we first saw you… who was that girl that you were with? You know the one who stopped you from killing me?” She said non-chalantly.
“Jenny…” I said and smiled. “Her name’s Jenny…” I mentioned.
“Oh… She’s cute… is she single?” I scoffed at her question; nearly spilling out the hot coffee in my mouth.
“What??” She asked.
“You… you don’t want to know Jenny…” I said and managed my laughter.
“Why not??” She pushed me with her questions again.
“Because… she’s a killer… she’s an assassin; my dad’s favorite and number one killer… She’s packing heat even when she goes to the fucking toilet…” I filled her in.
“Really??” She asked.
“Really… Alice…” I nodded.
“She can’t be that bad…” She said. “I mean you’re a killer…” She shrugged.
“First of all… I’m not a fucking killer; I mean I kill people but that’s not my main thing…” I told her.
“Oh; c’mon… she really can’t be that scary…” She pushed again.
“Oh; but she is…. she’s a bad-ass-cold-hearted-on-the-bridge-of-losing-it killer…” I said to her. “and I fucking love her for it…” I said and shrugged it off.
“Okay… I think you’ve scared me enough…” She said and sat up uncomfortably.
“Yeah… besides; you and that tennis chick: Dana… just get it over and done with…” I smiled and winked. She gasped at what I said and slapped my arms. They like to do that to me.
“We’re friends…” She said to me weirdly.
“Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiggghhhttt…….. we’ll have to see about that…” I said; just as the way she said it to me. I saw she was blushing and thought I’d stop.
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Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!
Oh man, you know it can’t be good if Gabe came all the way to LA. You have to post the next chapter soon!!! I need to know what happens!!! AAAHHHH…
gosh i luv ur story, its so creative and original! plz plz plz! post the next chapter, i just cant wait
oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)
Meh ! I don’t like Gabe and right now, I don’t like Jenny very much either !
aww…i hope gabe won’t cause problems…i want carmen and shane to be happy
amazing! I can’t wait what good old Gabe is going to do…
Oh boy. The next chapter should be really interesting. Love it!
wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!
HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!
great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx