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    Badlands – Chapter 11

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by blox-tox.
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    Questions and Quiries.

     

    “Yeah… and…” Her eyes motioning me to go on.

     

    “Well; I think Helena wasn’t really happy with my impromptu visit to her place…” I said. I left out the part where Helena caught me with her sister and her vengeance was to bring us down.

     

    “They started to spread their business all over New York… and they were doing very well at it too… one night; I was at the fine dine restaurant with Jenny and our people… and I saw Peggy; eating and chatting away with a big drug lord from Columbia and I knew they were making some sort of big coke deal….. I couldn’t stand it Carmen; I couldn’t stand seeing this new family doing the best at what my family does… My dad is the one that’s supposed to be dealing with that Columbian guy; not Peggy fucking Peabody…  So when I left; I ordered Johnny to put two into the drug lord’s and Peggy’s head… Johnny died on the spot; he was shot by Peggy’s bodyguards but Jenny and I made it…” I said coldly.

     

    “Shit…” she let out.

     

    “Yeah… So… after… Helena was going crazy with what I did…. calling the contract killers all over the world to finish me; but I survived three assassinations that she plotted against me over a month. My dad, my brother and I are always driven in bulletproof cars. When we would walk outside they’re at least half a dozen of guys surrounding us. The last hired gun got me good… he missed my head; after the sound of the first sniper shot my bodyguards were pushing me around… trying to cover me… all of us heard the second shot but it got one of my guards and the third one… the third one got me…” I pointed to her my latest wound; the very side of my rib cage. “Didn’t kill me though…” I smile like it’s not a big deal. “So… uh; ever since it’s been a blood bath… at least three or more members of our family is being killed in a week’s time… its bad Carm… I should’ve not made that decision; and so my dad sent me here and he sent my little brother to Vancouver…” I stopped and turned at her. I can’t tell what she’s thinking about; her eyes on are the ceiling now. She’s taking it in… Slowly.

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    1. Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!

    4. oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)

    9. wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!

    10. HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!

    11. great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx

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