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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 3
7:00 THAT NIGHT
Alice was sitting on the couch when everyone arrived. She told Dana she needed to start walking around, and the four walls in her bedroom were staring to feel like they were closing in on her, she needed to get out of that bedroom, and she sure wasn’t eating dinner in there.
Dana finely agreed as long as Alice didn’t try to do anything when everyone got there, she was to visit but no trying to play hostess at all.
When Shane and Tina walked in it was just like when anyone say Alice for the first time. Alice shrugged her shoulder and told them. “I know, I know like Bette said. I look like beaten *****.” Tina looked over at Bette wondering why Bette would say such a thing. Bette just turned to her. “Long story, and of course our friend loves to take it out of context.”
When Shane walked over to give Alice a hug, Alice clung on to her thankful for her presence. She started crying feeling to a degree that had it not been for Shane, she might not be here today. “Shane, I don’t know how to thank you, if you hadn’t come back, I don’t know what would have happen?” Shane for her part didn’t feel like she did anything special, she just happened to be at the right place at the right time. Plus she knew that anyone in this room would have done the same thing for each other. “Al, you don’t need to thank me, I just glad you’re OK, and you would have done the same. I just happen to come up at the right time. I just wished I could have been there a few minutes earlier.” Alice wiped her eyes before she spoke to Shane. “I’m just glad you came back.”
As the group visited, they all seemed happy in each other company. They joked and laughed about how they all met, and even though their family was starting to expand, as they added new friends, and lovers. These five women felt very much a nuclear family and they were grateful that the five were still intact, knowing how close they had come to losing one of their own.
TBC
Guys, it is about to get rough for our gals. Blame, denial, emotional unstableness, and shame. All the lovely emotions that peak their heads out when a person goes through an emotional trauma.
My vacation is almost over so the updates may not be as quick. This story is a little harder to write, because of the emotions involved. Even though the trauma happened to Alice, right now I’m choosing to focus on Dana, because having been in a situation in my younger days, when I loved someone deeply, who had a lot of trauma in her life, I can still remember how her pain was all consuming for me, and more then I could handle, so that is the way I see Dana handling it in this story. Thanks for reading. Deb
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(13 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
deb – its a great story, sad, but real and well told.
totally agree with lucia…great story and very well told..can’t wait to see where you take this and the emotions that will be revealed
this is a wonderful story and i think you tell it with such great detail. I love it so much please post soon.
i’m actually looking forward to the drama, and i have complete faith in your ability to write it. Great update too :)
I agree with lucia. I like that your story deals with a real life issue. Thank God for danish writers!
I love it and can’t wait to read the rest great post and very sad please post soon
hey deb- i am surprised by my reactions to this. I’ll admit- i wasnt’ thrilled when you said you were gonna do this storyline- but i love your stuff- and trusted you to do a good job with it. it might be your best yet. thanks for writing.
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. keep it up
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. Jeep it up
Its a great story. And we can see that it will be so dificult for Dana and Alice to take the step for the recovery. I love it even if its sad.Thanks
Lovely story deb,Dana/Alice are my personal favourites,and i can`t wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!x
this is a really good story. sad, but unfortunately it happens. can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters, i know it’ll be intense.
It was sad. Yet we are dealing with real life. I happen eveny day some where. The care giver is in need of help also. They seen it happen and could do little to help. Dana will need help as well as Alice thanks