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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 3
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After driving in silence for several minutes, Alice decided to speak up. “Dana, I think the Doctor was right about therapy. It wouldn’t hurt and it might help.” Dana continued to look ahead while she drove. “Al, if you want therapy go for it, I don’t need it. I wasn’t the one beaten, you were.” Alice knew this subject wasn’t over, she just knew know was not the time to force Dana’s hand.
Alice’s cell phone rang before she and Dana had made it home. She knew by the ring tone it was Shane, she still hadn’t thanked Shane for helping out the other night, so she was really looking forward to seeing her. After clearing everything with Dana, they had agreed that Bette, Tina and Shane would be over around 7:00 giving Alice time to bathe and rest up a bit before dinner.
DANA’S BATHROOM
When Alice and Dana returned home all Alice could think about was having a bath. It had been several days since she had a real bath, sponge bathes really wasn’t cutting it anymore. She felt dirty, itchy and she knew her hair looked like it was plastered to her head. She wanted at first to take a shower, but Dana pointed out she had a whirlpool bathtub in her bathroom, and how it always felt great to take a bath in it after a hard workout, so she felt it might do the same for Alice. Plus the Doctor did suggest this as a way to manage pain. So Alice laid back letting the jet streams work their magic on her sore body.
She was startled out her relax mood when Dana suddenly entered the bathroom. “Dana!” Dana sat of the floor by the tub laughing at her friend’s sudden shyness. “Al, I’ve seen you naked, you’ve seen me naked, we’ve all seen each other naked, so relax you don’t have anything I don’t have. Then she moved her eyebrows up and down in a teasing manner. “Maybe a little more, but nothing I haven’t seen before.” Alice flicked some water into her friends face. “Smart *****.” Dana reached over and turned off the jets to the tub as she spoke to Alice. “Al, I figured you might need a little help washing your hair and back, so I decided to sacrifice my eyes and come help you.”
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deb – its a great story, sad, but real and well told.
totally agree with lucia…great story and very well told..can’t wait to see where you take this and the emotions that will be revealed
this is a wonderful story and i think you tell it with such great detail. I love it so much please post soon.
i’m actually looking forward to the drama, and i have complete faith in your ability to write it. Great update too :)
I agree with lucia. I like that your story deals with a real life issue. Thank God for danish writers!
I love it and can’t wait to read the rest great post and very sad please post soon
hey deb- i am surprised by my reactions to this. I’ll admit- i wasnt’ thrilled when you said you were gonna do this storyline- but i love your stuff- and trusted you to do a good job with it. it might be your best yet. thanks for writing.
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. keep it up
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. Jeep it up
Its a great story. And we can see that it will be so dificult for Dana and Alice to take the step for the recovery. I love it even if its sad.Thanks
Lovely story deb,Dana/Alice are my personal favourites,and i can`t wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!x
this is a really good story. sad, but unfortunately it happens. can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters, i know it’ll be intense.
It was sad. Yet we are dealing with real life. I happen eveny day some where. The care giver is in need of help also. They seen it happen and could do little to help. Dana will need help as well as Alice thanks