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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 3
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When Dana picked up the washcloth to wash Alice’s back she once again was struck by all the bruising. Was there not a part of Alice body that wasn’t a big bruise? She knew it probably looked worse on Alice then it would on most, because frankly Alice was the fairest skinned person she knew. She knew Alice swam, and enjoyed outdoor activities, but sometime looking at her skin tones, she wondered if Alice ever saw any real sun. She hated to see Alice’s back like this, because she knew under all the bruising was one of the smoothest backs she had ever seen. Alice’s skin was flawless, other then a few scatterings of freckles on her shoulders and arm, Alice skin was flawless. That was another reason Dana hated what the ***** had done to Alice’s face. Just like her back Alice had perfect skin on her face. A few light freckles on her nose, and a shinny forehead because of her refusal to wear foundation, but Alice had perfect skin. And Dana was looking forward to the day she would see that perfect complexion again.
When she started to wash Alice’s hair, she started to get tickled at Alice’s complete trust in her. As she massaged the shampoo and the conditioner into Alice’s hair, she could tell it was taking all Alice’s energy to stay awake. She made a mental not to herself, ‘massage Alice’s head and she will totally relax for you.’ After finishing with the rinsing she stood up and handed a towel to Alice. She walked out of the bathroom giving Alice some privacy to dry off and put her sweats on.
When Alice walked out of the bathroom, her hair was still dripping and Dana realized it was still probably hard for Alice to dry and comb her hair. Dana took the towel from Alice hand and told her to go sit on her bed. She then towel dried Alice’s hair loving how easy it was to spike it when it was still wet. She then took the comb and started to comb Alice’s hair. She knew Alice had soft hair as much as she had pushed it behind her ear; this was something she was very aware of. But sitting behind Alice and really having the chance to touch Alice’s hair she was struck by how soft and fine her hair really was. No wonder it appeared so unruly at times. It was baby fine and soft, at that moment Dana actually envied Shane’s job.
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deb – its a great story, sad, but real and well told.
totally agree with lucia…great story and very well told..can’t wait to see where you take this and the emotions that will be revealed
this is a wonderful story and i think you tell it with such great detail. I love it so much please post soon.
i’m actually looking forward to the drama, and i have complete faith in your ability to write it. Great update too :)
I agree with lucia. I like that your story deals with a real life issue. Thank God for danish writers!
I love it and can’t wait to read the rest great post and very sad please post soon
hey deb- i am surprised by my reactions to this. I’ll admit- i wasnt’ thrilled when you said you were gonna do this storyline- but i love your stuff- and trusted you to do a good job with it. it might be your best yet. thanks for writing.
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. keep it up
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. Jeep it up
Its a great story. And we can see that it will be so dificult for Dana and Alice to take the step for the recovery. I love it even if its sad.Thanks
Lovely story deb,Dana/Alice are my personal favourites,and i can`t wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!x
this is a really good story. sad, but unfortunately it happens. can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters, i know it’ll be intense.
It was sad. Yet we are dealing with real life. I happen eveny day some where. The care giver is in need of help also. They seen it happen and could do little to help. Dana will need help as well as Alice thanks