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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 3
While Dana laid there holding Alice in her arms, she was thinking to herself maybe she needed to ask the Doctor for something for herself, because she really didn’t know how much sleep she was going to get either, because just like Alice the scene from the previous night kept playing itself over and over again in her head, and even though Alice thought she was being her personal nightmare slayer, she knew unless she had Alice right beside her she wasn’t going to be sleeping either.
NEXT MORNING DANA’S CONDOMINIUM
BUZZZ BUZZZ. Dana for the life of her couldn’t figure out who in ***** would be waking her up this morning. She gently lifted her arm from around Alice and tried to get up as quietly as possible. When she opened the front door she was greeting by Bette. Bette had a bag of pastries from the Planet, along with three cups of coffee. “Dana I tried to call, but all I got was your voicemail on both lines.” Dana ushered Bette into her home “I turned the ringers off on both of my phones, so they wouldn’t wake Alice. Sorry. So why are you here so early?”
Bette walked pass Dana making her way to the living room, so she could put the coffees down on the coffee table. “Dana it’s not early, it’s after nine, and I figured you might need a break so you could get a little training in.” Dana sat down in a chair next to the coffee table picking up one of the cups of coffees. “Bette I appreciate the coffee and the offer, but I’m not going to workout today.” Bette picking up her own coffee looked at Dana. “Dana I know you want to take care of Alice, but you still need to continue with your life. The rest of us can stay with Alice, while you train. Plus do you really think Alice would want you hang out all day. Dana go run, go to your gym, but go do something, I know you, if you don’t have some type of physical release you’ll be bouncing of the walls by tonight.”
Dana thought about what Bette said for a few minutes before making a decision, “Alright I’ll go workout for a little while, I need to pick up Alice’s other prescription anyway. It might do me good to run a few laps at the track to help clear my head. Thanks Bette.” After changing into a pair of jogging shorts and T-shirt Dana left to both run to the pharmacy and try to get a little bit of exercise.
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(13 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
deb – its a great story, sad, but real and well told.
totally agree with lucia…great story and very well told..can’t wait to see where you take this and the emotions that will be revealed
this is a wonderful story and i think you tell it with such great detail. I love it so much please post soon.
i’m actually looking forward to the drama, and i have complete faith in your ability to write it. Great update too :)
I agree with lucia. I like that your story deals with a real life issue. Thank God for danish writers!
I love it and can’t wait to read the rest great post and very sad please post soon
hey deb- i am surprised by my reactions to this. I’ll admit- i wasnt’ thrilled when you said you were gonna do this storyline- but i love your stuff- and trusted you to do a good job with it. it might be your best yet. thanks for writing.
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. keep it up
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. Jeep it up
Its a great story. And we can see that it will be so dificult for Dana and Alice to take the step for the recovery. I love it even if its sad.Thanks
Lovely story deb,Dana/Alice are my personal favourites,and i can`t wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!x
this is a really good story. sad, but unfortunately it happens. can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters, i know it’ll be intense.
It was sad. Yet we are dealing with real life. I happen eveny day some where. The care giver is in need of help also. They seen it happen and could do little to help. Dana will need help as well as Alice thanks