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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 3
JOGGING TRACK
First thing Dana did after leaving her home was run by the pharmacy and pick up Alice’s prescription for anxiety, she planned when they went to Alice’s Doctor later to ask about sleeping medicines for Alice.
Though she herself was having problems sleeping, she did figure out as long as she slept with Alice she could sleep. She wondered if this might be emotionally unhealthy for her and Alice, because even though it was alright for now, one day Alice would probably want to go back to her own home, and she wondered how she would sleep then.
But after running around the track once, Dana had an overwhelming need to get back home, she had done what Bette suggested, even if one time around the track was less then a mile, she didn’t want to be out here, she wanted to be home with Alice. She would workout tomorrow, but right now her chest was starting to feel tight and she was starting to have a sensation like something was going to happen to Alice. She hurried to her car wanting to get home as soon as possible.
DANA’S CONDOMINIUM
After entering her home, Dana went upstairs to check on Alice. She couldn’t even go up the stairs in a normal pace, she was taking the stairs two at a time, just needing to make sure Alice was OK. As she entered the room and saw Alice still laying in bed with Bette in the chair in the corner of the room, she felt unbelievable relieved. Bette looked at Dana still concerned about her unwillingness to leave Alice’s side. “Dana, that was a short workout, you’ve only been gone a little over an hour.”
Dana felt a little embarrassed about not trusting Alice’s care to Bette, but she really didn’t give a damn at that moment all she knew is she had to make sure Alice was alright. “I’m going to go take a shower, do you need anything Alice before I do?” Alice looked at Dana, she too starting to become concerned about her friend. “No I’m OK, Bette can help me if I need anything, go ahead and take your shower.”
After Dana left and Bette could hear the shower running she turned to Alice. “Alice, I suggest as both yours and Dana’s friend, that when you go see your Doctor today, you bring up Dana’s behavior. I think you might be right about how hard this has hit her, and even though your pain is obvious, I think Dana is hurting just as bad, only you can’t see her injuries.”
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(13 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
deb – its a great story, sad, but real and well told.
totally agree with lucia…great story and very well told..can’t wait to see where you take this and the emotions that will be revealed
this is a wonderful story and i think you tell it with such great detail. I love it so much please post soon.
i’m actually looking forward to the drama, and i have complete faith in your ability to write it. Great update too :)
I agree with lucia. I like that your story deals with a real life issue. Thank God for danish writers!
I love it and can’t wait to read the rest great post and very sad please post soon
hey deb- i am surprised by my reactions to this. I’ll admit- i wasnt’ thrilled when you said you were gonna do this storyline- but i love your stuff- and trusted you to do a good job with it. it might be your best yet. thanks for writing.
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. keep it up
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. Jeep it up
Its a great story. And we can see that it will be so dificult for Dana and Alice to take the step for the recovery. I love it even if its sad.Thanks
Lovely story deb,Dana/Alice are my personal favourites,and i can`t wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!x
this is a really good story. sad, but unfortunately it happens. can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters, i know it’ll be intense.
It was sad. Yet we are dealing with real life. I happen eveny day some where. The care giver is in need of help also. They seen it happen and could do little to help. Dana will need help as well as Alice thanks