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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 3
After Bette left she picked up her phone to call Tina, letting her know how their two friends were doing. “Tina, I’m really worried about the two of them. I think we all need to make sure we’re there for them, or I can see this eating them alive. Alice still wants to make jokes about it, and I think she is trying to repress what happen. But, Dana has me really scared, it like she has it in her head something is going to happen to Alice unless she is right there beside her. I’m trying to see her side, we both know Dana loves Alice even if the two haven’t realized it yet. And I understand if this happen to you I would be a basket case, babe. But I really feel Dana needs to get a handle on the fact that Alice is alright, and nothing is going to happen to her. Yes, I’m heading into work. Alice said she had a Doctor’s appointment at 2:00, why don’t you call Shane and the three of us can pick up some dinner, so Dana won’t have to cook. While you’re at it, why don’t you get Shane to call and tell them we’re bringing dinner, so Dana won’t think I’m trying to interfere with her care of Alice. I’ll see you tonight at Dana’s, love you too.” Bette hung up her phone and looked once more toward her friend’s home, truly worried.
DOCTOR’S OFFICE 1:50
As Alice sat there she could feel the other patients and visitors looking at her. Most would try not to out and out stare, but still she could feel everyone looking at her. She knew she looked like a train had hit her, but it still made her feel uncomfortable with the attention she was getting. She had to laugh in her own head about the humor of the whole situation, usually she loved to be the center of attention, and she would purposely say and do things to make herself the center of attention. But now that she was the center of attention , she wish everyone would find something else to look at, because at the moment all she wanted to do was find a nice hole and crawl in it.
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(13 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
deb – its a great story, sad, but real and well told.
totally agree with lucia…great story and very well told..can’t wait to see where you take this and the emotions that will be revealed
this is a wonderful story and i think you tell it with such great detail. I love it so much please post soon.
i’m actually looking forward to the drama, and i have complete faith in your ability to write it. Great update too :)
I agree with lucia. I like that your story deals with a real life issue. Thank God for danish writers!
I love it and can’t wait to read the rest great post and very sad please post soon
hey deb- i am surprised by my reactions to this. I’ll admit- i wasnt’ thrilled when you said you were gonna do this storyline- but i love your stuff- and trusted you to do a good job with it. it might be your best yet. thanks for writing.
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. keep it up
Deb, really well done, amazingly detailed. I love it that you wrote it form both pov. Jeep it up
Its a great story. And we can see that it will be so dificult for Dana and Alice to take the step for the recovery. I love it even if its sad.Thanks
Lovely story deb,Dana/Alice are my personal favourites,and i can`t wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!x
this is a really good story. sad, but unfortunately it happens. can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters, i know it’ll be intense.
It was sad. Yet we are dealing with real life. I happen eveny day some where. The care giver is in need of help also. They seen it happen and could do little to help. Dana will need help as well as Alice thanks