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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 4
She walked over to the couch and sat down on the coffee table in front of her two friends. As she placed her hands on both of their knees, she made sure had both of theirs attention before she spoke. She made sure she spoke softly and without judgment in her voice. “Guys, you know how much I love you right?” Both ladies looked up a Shane and shook their head yes. “I think you two need to get some help. “Al, sorry man, but I just don’t think you’ve accepted what happen. I think you think if you act like it didn’t happen it will go away, why confront when you can avoid right.” Shane then removed her hand from Alice and placed both her hands on Dana’s shoulders, making sure she had eye contact before she spoke. “Dana, honey I know you love Alice.” The way Shane was looking at Dana, Dana knew Shane really did know, even though she doubted Alice comprehended what kind of love Shane was talking about, Dana knew Shane knew. “You have to get a grip on this fear of something happening to Alice. It’s going to drive you crazy, and it’s going to drive Alice away.” Dana didn’t say anything she just nodded her head in agreement. “Well I guess if you two are in agreement then Yoda’s job is through.” Both ladies laughed at Shane’s inside joke, because for all her toughness, and her I don’t believe in relationships I just want to keep it simple, she was the best relationship guru they had ever met.
Alice went over to her box and picked up the card her Doctor had given her and Dana. “Dana, can I call and make us an appointment.” At that moment Dana finely realized this was more then she could handle, no matter how badly she wanted to be the one to take care of Alice. “Go ahead, I’ll go.”
NEXT MORNING BREAKFAST TIME
Last night after Shane left, things had calmed down to a half way normal level. Dana and Alice had both gotten ready for bed, and there was no pretense as to where Dana was going to sleep. Which was fine with Alice, she kind of liked sleeping with Dana. Plus Alice didn’t have any nightmares last night, but she had taken all three medications before she went to bed. She like that numb feeling and it was a pretty good feeling when one is trying to sleep.
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(18 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
i love it and please keep writing you are amazing deb!!
this story hits close to home. Thanks for the update.
This story is very touching in a lot
of ways. It’s horrible to visualize
what was done to Alice but I believe
you have written very well. Not over
the top! I am glad the next chapters
will be happy ones for the Danish!
Jesus Christ! Poor girls:( They better catch those bastards, i cant see them in so much pain. At least they have great friends:) Amazing story Deb…good as always…hopefully ur next chapter will be up in a bit:D
great I can’t wait to read the rest to see how they both deal with this as this is something that i would not wish on anyone but it dose happen and it is good to address the issue please post again very soon I love all your storys to date that I have read
hi there, i agree with you totally about alice’s character, the “im ok and can handle anything syndrome” because its me too. The story is great .. post soon please.
This is a great story. Thank you.
i am in such denial…i found myself focusing on the whole ‘couples’ therapy and their pending relationship, romantic angle rather then looking too close at the pain. so i made myself go back and read it again. as i said after the last chapter, i think this is your best work so far.
Deb, I am luving u man…this is sum deep shit..they r lving in deep shit..but im an optimist & im thinking it’ll get better.i Luv it..please continue soon…thnk you 4 writing this piece..Post s00n..
Deb, this is your best work to date. It’s so painfully real and addressed an important issue that society has turned a blind eye to. Thank you for writing this.
wonderful chapter, and i agree on your view of Alice. I’m glad things will get better for them, keep going, it’s brilliant.