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Before the Fall – Five
“So we’re going to lie to Bette?” Dana repeated again.
““
She watched silently as unannounced a trio of women came into her room and settled themselves around her room.
Her eyes landed on the blonde she knew as Alice.
“Wh—Do I know you all?” Bette asked glancing around at them.
The blonde spoke.
“Well yeah,” Alice, Bette reminded herself, said at last.
“Okay,” Bette muttered glancing down at her covers. She felt completely uncomfortable and out of place. She felt like she was on display at the zoo and these women had come in to stare at her.
“Um…I’m Alice and this is Dana and she’s Shane. We’re your best friends. But I’m your bestest-best friend,” Alice said with a laugh that had Bette wincing.
Bette didn’t know what to say to that so she kept quiet. Knowing that these women were her best friends didn’t make it any easier being in the same room with them. Maybe the longer she stared at her covers they would get the hint and leave her alone, she thought.
“So…how are you feeling?”
A new voice.
She looked up to identify who’d spoken.
The shorthaired brunette with the flat chest had spoken, she realized. Which one was she again?
“Uh…what’s your name again?” Bette finally asked her eyes skirting around the room once more. She’d felt a brief moment of panic looking into the woman’s dark eyes.
“I’m Shane.”
“And I’m Dana Fairbanks,” the other woman announced happily.
“God, Dane. She doesn’t know who your are! Saying your last name won’t help with that,” Alice snapped.
“Well…it’s my name, Alice. What else was I going to say? I am Dana Fairbanks! It’s not like I added star tennis player and semi famous to it. Which by the way I am, Bette. So when we’re out and people stare it’s because of me,” Dana said all in one breath.
Alice snorted and Bette slid her gaze from the wall to her and then to the silent one.
“I…” Bette began beginning to feel impatient.
“You two should both be quiet,” Shane said suddenly. “Remember what we talked about? Let’s just get it over with.”
“Right,” Dana mumbled.
“Okay. Okay. Um…Bette look we need to tell you this and please just be calm about it,” Alice began.
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I got my fix….Now I want more..Now I have more questions than answers. How did Bette respond to Tina? Did Tina know Bette had the hots for Tina?? PPS. Early Christmas present PLEASE ;-)
I am totally enjoying this story!! Thanks!!
And once again… Great chapter, Speed_Racer ! I’m very impressed, you have really set yourself a thrilling but very challenging task here with this amnesia… That was so unexpected, but quite fascinating. Your heroines are truly of a different kind. I like this a lot. I can only say hats off to you as you are pulling it off beautifully ! Please post again soon !
I wondered when you would post again…I love this…
Now that I’ve had a good night sleep and re-read your the story and the prelude I have a better understanding… WOW tons of drama for our heroines…Helena is really stuck between a rock and a hard place on this one… And poor Tina..When is she going to finally have her face to face with Bette? She is really going to be hurt by the new Bette..Hope you are feeling better Speedy. Thanks for the update. As always, this story is awesone…
Awesome chapter! This story’s addictive. Hope you feel better, Speedy. We get out fic-fix, you get your ego-fix… nice relationship. ;)
That’s interesting! You leave me wanting for more! I don’t know how Bette, Helena and Tina are going to resolve this little conundrum of theirs. Anyway, maybe as Bette gets to know herself, Helena can understand Bette better and start up a new relationship. I love your story! Really really do! Please continue! Early Christmas Present please! Happy New Year!
this is great even tho i’m no belena fan….obviously i’m open to being convinced, lmao…fickle eh????? PPS
I love the way you write, it’s so addictive, thanks for posting I can’t wait to see the next chapter!!!
I love the way you write, it’s so addictive, thanks for posting I can’t wait to see the next chapter!!!
I love the way you write, it’s so addictive, thanks for posting I can’t wait to see the next chapter!!!
I love the way you write, it’s so addictive, thanks for posting I can’t wait to see the next chapter!!!
Oops Sorry for the flood, I don’t know what happened here… =(
Still playing catch-up! This is so fascinating, Speedy! You certainly know how to hook your audience!