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    Before the Fall – Five

    Story written on December 8, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    She didn’t really care what they had to say. She’d felt uncomfortable from the start with Alice and then with Dana and Shane. If they thought they were just going to be popping in and out of her room, well that was not going to happen. Nope, she thought. She could control whom she saw and didn’t see. It was the only thing it seemed she could control.

    Where the hell was Helena?

    ““

    “She was so…different,”Alice remarked as they gathered in an empty waiting room once more.

    “No, come on guys this is a big shock. She doesn’t remember us so I mean let’s cut her some slack,” Dana said.

    “She wants Helena,” Shane said shaking her head.

    “Well that’s not something new,” Dana said flinging herself down into a chair.

    Both Alice and Shane shot her disapproving looks.

    “What? It’s true! Just because no one said it doesn’t mean I didn’t notice. I’m blind but not that blind.”

    “There you are! How did it go?” Tina asked as she strode taking off her sunglasses and shoving them into her purse.

    She was met by silence.

    “What happened?” Tina asked worry coloring her voice.

    “Nothing,” Alice said on a sigh.

    “Nothing happened. We didn’t tell her, Tina. She didn’t want to hear anything we had to say. She was impatient and not like herself. She’s different,” Shane added.

    “She can’t be that much different! She’s Bette! Look I’ll go in and tell her myself,” Tina announced and spun on her heel.

    Dana jumped up as it seemed neither Shane or Alice was going to stop Tina.

    “Wait Tina! Dr. Toms and Dr. Davis are right,” Dana said. “I mean Bette’s not the same. She kept saying she didn’t know us and then kept asking for Helena. It would totally put her back if we told her. She doesn’t even seem to like us much so don’t go in there.”

    “She’s acting this way because Helena manipulated her into thinking this way! I can’t believe you’re defending her Dana. Helena’s made this all about her, per usual! I’m sick of her,” Tina snapped.

    “Well so what? At least Bette trusts one of us. Don’t you want her to get better? Pulling the rug out from beneath her is gonna piss her off. I say we get Helena back here as soon as possible and try and help Bette.”

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    1. I got my fix….Now I want more..Now I have more questions than answers. How did Bette respond to Tina? Did Tina know Bette had the hots for Tina?? PPS. Early Christmas present PLEASE ;-)

    3. And once again… Great chapter, Speed_Racer ! I’m very impressed, you have really set yourself a thrilling but very challenging task here with this amnesia… That was so unexpected, but quite fascinating. Your heroines are truly of a different kind. I like this a lot. I can only say hats off to you as you are pulling it off beautifully ! Please post again soon !

    5. Now that I’ve had a good night sleep and re-read your the story and the prelude I have a better understanding… WOW tons of drama for our heroines…Helena is really stuck between a rock and a hard place on this one… And poor Tina..When is she going to finally have her face to face with Bette? She is really going to be hurt by the new Bette..Hope you are feeling better Speedy. Thanks for the update. As always, this story is awesone…

    7. That’s interesting! You leave me wanting for more! I don’t know how Bette, Helena and Tina are going to resolve this little conundrum of theirs. Anyway, maybe as Bette gets to know herself, Helena can understand Bette better and start up a new relationship. I love your story! Really really do! Please continue! Early Christmas Present please! Happy New Year!

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