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    Bette and Kit

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    Earlier that morning Kit and Melvin had left the Beverly Hills hotel with Melvin driving the beloved Cadillac. The pair didn’t have a destination in mind but the drive took them up the pacific coast and ended in Malibu where Kit suggested they stop at the Malibu Country Mart, California’s premier location for shopping, dining, and relaxing. As they walked the mall Melvin was impressed by the unique upscale boutiques, art galleries, and restaurants, but most impressive was the astoundingly beautiful surroundings. It was the perfect place to spend the day, and he would top it off by attending Tina’s awards dinner. He didn’t know exactly why he wanted to see Tina tonight or what he would say to her but it was important to him. Thankfully Kit had agreed and had gotten them an invite.

    Lately he’d found himself acting on impulse rather than his usual thoughtful process. ‘Live for today, because yesterday is gone and tomorrow is never promised’. That had become his motto when he’d been diagnosed with terminal prostate cancer six months earlier. They’d given him a year to eighteen months if he was willing to undergo vigorous chemo therapy and radiation treatment but he had refused. He didn’t want to spend his final days on this earth in some hospice surrounded by people that were paid to care for him. Instead he had spent the last six months getting his affairs in order and planning the move to Los Angeles to be with his girls. He’d also helped his grand-son to get the internship at USC so he too would close when the time came. Now that he knew Tina was pregnant he hoped that he would live long enough to see his grand-daughter. All he had to do was convince Bette and Tina that he was worthy.

    Melvin hadn’t packed for a formal occasion so the first stop was to get him an evening suit, dress shirt, and tie. Kit was sure she had something in her closet that was appropriate but decided to indulge in a new gown for the occasion, especially since Melvin offered to pay. Melvin didn’t usually buy suits off the rack, but the quality was so exceptional, and the fit so perfect that the tuxedo could have been custom made. Kit too had found a fabulous gown, and was shocked to see that she was two sizes smaller than expected.

    Comments

    1. Enjoyed this post, thanks BAT. I always loved Kit and you bring her alive.

      Looking forward to the ‘Dinner Post’ which I hope will appear soon ! As you say, ‘gone too long’ Still sticking with you though BAT, still sticking.

      Thanks again

    2. Shocked! Thank you Jesus! I woke pissed off cause I have a meeting at 8 am and I had to read this even if it meant being late for the meeting. Amazing! Look at God! Want he do it! Cause after finish reading this amazing story I got a txt saying the meeting was CANCANELLED. Thank you God! I love me some Tina in this story! She sure shocked Bette! I knew Bette would be pissed about Melvin. I knew you was going to leave us in a cliffhanger! Please brighten our day even more by POSTING again today. Please, please, please with sugar plum on top. I had a feeling Melvin was dying:( I hope and pray that we tells them so they can spend time together as one big happy family before he pass! But first let them see he’s making amends out of the goodness of his heart before he tells them he’s dying. I loved that David will meet with Kit. I’m thankful and grateful you finally posted again. PPS like today please!

    3. Yes, i am for sure still sticking with you!

      You are worth the wait, but i would’nt mind if you decide to post asap, like tonight ????

      Miracles do happen Bette, believe in it.

      It is good to see Melvin is trying to make amends with both his daughters and Tina.

      And David reaching out to Kit, wonderful to see that happen. Kit deserve happiness.

      Looking forward to see how Helena is going to react when she will be ditched from Tina’s table and life.

      A fantastic update! Thank you!

    4. Thanks for the update! You’ve selected one of my favorite characters, Kit. I liked your story very much! I’ve got to bring Kit into my next tale so, I am delighted read her as you’ve her in this situation. One that’s critical to her character.

      Personally, I’m fascinated by Helena. I may be the only one, but the broken parts of Helena I look forward to exploring one day.

      Good job!

      Blackbird

    5. Hi BAT:

      Very nice chapter, long time I haven’t read your wonderful writing; I just updated myself with this new story; I like this one very much; very promising, refreshing and hopefulness.
      Here, there is another version of Melvin, as a reasonable man, learning from his mistakes, open-minded and committed to mending fences, Kit is also an inspirational character in this story, she fought her demons and addictions and her not only survived but thrived.
      I like Tina-Bette interaction in this chapter, they both have hurt each other, but their love is still there, the emotional pain have made them more mature and they may want to give their relationship another try, hopefully, is not only because they are waiting for a baby, but mainly for the love they have for each other.

      Thank you for this precious story, I’ll wait for your next post, with a bit of luck, soon.

      P

    6. Great chapter. Have already written a comment but it disappeared for some reason and don’t think I can redo it. The same thing happened a couple wks ago in another story and it was in the trash on your authors page. I had not quite completed a thought when it vanished. Maybe that’s where it is this time. At any rate this was a good chapter, enjoyed it. Thanks for posting.

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