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Bette and Tina take time to process – Chapter 16
Bette: “I don’t know.”
She falls into her sister’s arms and cries out of pain.
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Bette recovers for the art talk and looks amazingly beautiful with her hair in natural curls falling on the shoulder of her white power suit. No one wears a power suit better than Bette Porter.
Young man: “She’s awesome … your girlfriend.”
Tina: “She is isn’t she? Sometimes I forget.”
Young man: “You two are a really beautiful couple. I mean that … you’re really beautiful.”
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Dana: “Why is it so depressing?”
Alice: “Because it’s the same faces night after night week after week; floating clubs, floating women.”
Dana: “Oh she’s cute.”
Alice: “She’s been with two of my exes. I’m staying out of that vicious cycle. Oh oh oh … now she’s cute and I haven’t seen her before is it possible?”
Shane: “Fresh meat.”
Alice: “New blood.”
Dana: “Crispy”
Alice: “Uh uh.”
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Young man: “This is vulgar I know, but the two of you are just so fucking sexy. No offense.”
Bette: “It’s hard to take offense at that.”
Young man: I’m going to get a drink. Can I get either of you anything?”
Bette: “I’m good thanks.”
Tina: “No thanks I’m fine.”
The young man walks away to get his drink.
Tina: “See? He’s hitting on us.”
Bette: “He is…”
Tina: “God that hasn’t happened in a while.”
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Bette: “Just look at me OK?”
Bette and Tina are making out while the young man undresses in their bedroom. He gets up shirtless and barefoot and gets behind Tina sandwiching her between him and Bette. He kisses her shoulder and neck then starts to lift her top. Bette breaks the kiss and helps him to remove Tina’s blouse then resumes the kissing, but soon the young man feels left out so he turns Tina towards him and captures Tina’s lips as Bette is forced to release hers.
Young man: “Tina why don’t you make Bette wet.”
Tina kisses Bette and starts to undress her while the young man continues to kiss Tina’s back and removes her trousers. There are three pairs of hands each loosening the others clothing until Bette and Tina are left in their lacy bras and thong underwear while the young man stands naked. Bette and Tina resume their passionate kissing but he won’t be ignored. He’s still trying to take control of the situation but Bette stops him in his tracks.
Young man: “It would be really nice if you made love to Tina while I make love to you.”
Bette: “It’s not going to happen that way.”
Young man: “How is it going to happen?”
Bette: “I think you should make love to Tina while Tina makes love to me.”
Young man: “OK that’s cool. Why don’t you two lie down?”
Bette and Tina lie on the bed and continue kissing each other when Bette notices that the young man has something in his hands. Tina is too busy sucking on Bette’s neck to notice what is going on but as she hears the conversation it grabs her attention.
Bette: “What’s that?”
Young man: “What?”
Bette: “In your hands.”
Young man: “It’s a condom; otherwise known as a rubber.”
Bette: “What are you doing with it?”
Young man: “Well some would say I’m being considerate.”
Bette: “We don’t want you to use it.”
Young man: “Why?”
Tina: “You don’t have to.”
Bette: ”We just don’t want you to OK.”
Young man: “Oh man … that’s great. Why is it whenever dykes want to have sex with a guy it’s only cause they are only trying to steal his sperm? It ain’t happening guys.”
Young man dresses and leaves Bette and Tina looking a little bewildered.
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“I hate to admit that I’m quoting this from Helena “Fucking” Peabody but ‘What starts in chaos ends in chaos.’”
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So glad they are making progress. Thanks, enjoyed it
Thank you wkm. Glad you are enjoying the progress. Lots more to come.
BETTE would get TINA warmed up time after time only to pump the brakes when TINA wa ready to make love.DAN was a counselor yet BETTE felt they didn’t need one.BOTH BETTE/TINA was to wrapped up in their own problems to see that this way of thinking was THE PROBLEM .Looking for donors it became what ever the other one wanted not what THEY wanted.BETTE found the donor,BETTE picks the guy to go home with them,BETTE finds the second donor all her choices yet TINA just went along.TINA confides in friends when she should talk to BETTE,TINA inseminates herself ,TINA has a reality check when MARCUS turns out to be black.To share all these hidden truths between them and at the end of the day realizes that there is still enough of a spark to ignite the sexual urges for each other gives them hope that this too can be put in the category of what not to do when planning a baby.Let the love they know is there shine thru.Best quote of this ”ze penis,ze pussy ,ze baby” that was one for the history books.pps thanks
dunnthat. Thank you for commenting and providing great insight. The point of rehashing all this history is to understand, forgive, and move on. Most importantly to learn from mistakes, pay attention to the warning signs, and not repeat bad behaviours. They are making good progress emotionally and eventually the physical relationship will resume.
Thanks for this great chapter.
One step at a time, they are reconnecting .
the entire constellation.
mscully – thank you for reading, commenting and rating. I love it when you reward my chapters with ‘the entire constellation’ :-)
Like what mscully said one step at a time, they already have talked much about a lot of their problems and it was very wise to ask Paul for his insight when they were not able to do that by them selves, but they are making progress.
The flashback that Bette came home earlier to spend time with Tina, trying to reconnect, and that Tina went to the gym, was for me absolutely heart breaking, it showed how disconnect they were.
I didn’t like the first few chapters, but Bat, you have defiantly my attention again.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Bibi28 – thank you for sticking with the story. I know it was a rough beginning and I really appreciate that you gave it chance. Bette and Tina are going to progress by leaps and bounds before the end of this retreat.