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    Bette and Tina take time to process – Chapter 16

    Tina looks at Bette as if she has two heads but Bette plunges on; nothing is going to squash her enthusiasm.

    Bette: “Tee he’s willing to do this so we can have the sperm on ice for when you’re next ovulating. It’ll be there when we want to use it.”

    ***

    Tina opens the door to greet her visitor.

    Tina: “Marcus?”

    Marcus: “Tina Right?”

    Tina: “um … um I have to get something out of the bedroom and um … have a seat … and then we’ll go to the cryobank.”

    Tina walks into the bedroom and sits on the bed. She takes a few deep breaths and runs her fingers through her hair. “FUCK” she says then composes herself gets her things and puts a smile on her face for Marcus. “Ready?”

    Marcus: “Tina did Bette not tell you I was black?”

    Tina: “No no not at all … but I mean she didn’t not tell me because it doesn’t matter either way right?”

    Marcus: “I can’t answer that for you.”

    Tina: “No … um OK … are you ready to go?”

    Marcus: “Let’s do it.”

    ***

    Tina: “Hi I’m Tina Kennard. I’m here with my friend. He’s here to make a deposit.”

    Receptionist: “Marcus right?” looking at the computer screen.

    Marcus: “That’s right.”

    Receptionist: “And it says here you’ve recently been HIV tested.”

    Marcus: “I have all my paperwork.” He hands it over to the receptionist.

    Receptionist: “Then here’s all you need from me.” Handing him a specimen cup. “Bathroom is down the hall on the left and there are magazines in there in case you need any encouragement.”

    Marcus: “I’ll be right back.”

    When Marcus leaves the perky young blonde receptionist turns to Tina.

    Receptionist: “Wow that’s a pretty serious decision to make.”

    Tina: “Isn’t it?”

    Receptionist: “You must have given it a lot of thought because really big men like that tend to make really big babies. You’ll probably be looking at a C-Section.

    Tina jaw almost drops to the floor.

    ***

    Bette finds Tina in a back room at the Planet after closing time reading a book.

    Bette: “What’s going on?”

    Tina: “What are you doing here?”

    Bette: “I got this vague but urgent message from Alice.”

    Tina: “Great!!”

    Comments

    1. BETTE would get TINA warmed up time after time only to pump the brakes when TINA wa ready to make love.DAN was a counselor yet BETTE felt they didn’t need one.BOTH BETTE/TINA was to wrapped up in their own problems to see that this way of thinking was THE PROBLEM .Looking for donors it became what ever the other one wanted not what THEY wanted.BETTE found the donor,BETTE picks the guy to go home with them,BETTE finds the second donor all her choices yet TINA just went along.TINA confides in friends when she should talk to BETTE,TINA inseminates herself ,TINA has a reality check when MARCUS turns out to be black.To share all these hidden truths between them and at the end of the day realizes that there is still enough of a spark to ignite the sexual urges for each other gives them hope that this too can be put in the category of what not to do when planning a baby.Let the love they know is there shine thru.Best quote of this ”ze penis,ze pussy ,ze baby” that was one for the history books.pps thanks

      • dunnthat. Thank you for commenting and providing great insight. The point of rehashing all this history is to understand, forgive, and move on. Most importantly to learn from mistakes, pay attention to the warning signs, and not repeat bad behaviours. They are making good progress emotionally and eventually the physical relationship will resume.

    2. Like what mscully said one step at a time, they already have talked much about a lot of their problems and it was very wise to ask Paul for his insight when they were not able to do that by them selves, but they are making progress.

      The flashback that Bette came home earlier to spend time with Tina, trying to reconnect, and that Tina went to the gym, was for me absolutely heart breaking, it showed how disconnect they were.

      I didn’t like the first few chapters, but Bat, you have defiantly my attention again.
      Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

      • Bibi28 – thank you for sticking with the story. I know it was a rough beginning and I really appreciate that you gave it chance. Bette and Tina are going to progress by leaps and bounds before the end of this retreat.

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