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Bette Forgets 11
Im sorry about the mirror, Bette remarked softly
Forget the mirror Im worried about you, I remark guiding her out of the bathroom and into the car
I called Doctor Winters and told her that were bringing Bette in, Kit explained peeling out of the driveway, She said shed be waiting in the ER for us.
That was something good at least. On the way the pain of her hands seemed to get to Bette and she started to cry again.
Im sorry, she whispered
You dont have to be sorry Bette. I should have gone in there with you.
Bette just sniffled at this, It would have delayed the inevitable.
What do you mean?
I cant see me anymore.
That didnt explain much.
What do you mean you cant see you anymore?
I dont recognize who I am anymore, Bette tried to explain, All of this is just so much.
All I could do was hold on to Bette as we sped toward the hospital.
*Doctor Winters*
I was anxiously waiting in the ER for Kit to arrive with Bette. I knew we shouldnt have released her from the hospital yet but there had been no physical reason to keep her here. Once she was awake from the coma she no longer needed hospital care. She didnt even really need hospital care while she was in the coma.
Kit said that Bette injured her hands, but not how she injured her hands. She sounded kind of freaked out so Im not really sure what to expect at this point in time.
Looking up I see Tina and Kit guiding Bette into the ER with a bloody towel wrapped around each of her wrists. That doesnt look good. I and a couple of nurses rush over and take Bette into our care with Tina and Kit hovering around us.
Carefully I peel away the towels and see the deep laceration in the sides of Bettes hands, her wrists and her palms. It looks like what appears glass to be embedded in her hands. Quickly I give Bette a shot of morphine and them am handed tweezers. Picking out one of the larger pieces of glass I hold it up and see myself reflected back. Mirror.
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(74 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
I like this. It’s heavy but good. Great job!
pretty f*cking cute. ;)
great story please keep the chapters coming Thank you
I love this story :))
I like this story. Bette is so innocent and cute. Tina has such patience. Thanks
I LOVE this story line. You have a wonderful imagination. I apprecitate you taking the time to read my stories and leave comments. Your opinion means so much to me. Did I say that I LOVE this story? Sorry it is hard to concentrate after reading such a great chapter. Keep them coming. I am hanging on every one of your words.:-)
I really like this story. Just wanted to let you know, since I don’t always leave a comment.
Thanks for another great chapter. Love seeing this side of Bette. Love seeing the interaction between Tina and Bette.
I agree w/ everyone else, I love this story. And I love the ‘softer’ side of Bette. Please let her identify the right guy and I hope that you deliver some good justice to them.
Congratulations on another great chapter. You move the story so well and the dialog is crisp and meaningful. I’ll say it again if I have to: I’m loving this story. Your imagination is wonderful. You’ve swept me right along with you. Thanks.
I love this story. I can’t wait for more.
I love this story. This chapter had a really cute ending. Can’t wait for the next one!!
great story, can’t wait for more..
I LOVE THIS STORY..I WANT MORE PLEASE
This story is so well thought out and well written Bette’s so open and somewhat innocent, it’s refreshing I love this story–thanks for sharing your talents with us!
i like this… bette is so cute!!!
I love the innocence of Bette in this story. I hope seeing the suspect in the lineup doesn’t freak her out too much.
Great chapter again. I like to see this different side of Bette. I will be waiting to see how Bette pieces back her life as she has lost so much time.
The identification of the attacker is just one of the obstacles she has to get through. Will she able to accept what happen between herself and Tina? And how about the baby? Can she accept the way it was being conceived? Well, I will be waiting for all that parts to unravel then. I also liked the way you end this chapter too. It’s lighted just like you said.
Continue on, and I will read wherever you might lead us..:)
this is really good – it is heavy and intense but very well written. but please let Bette go to therapy before she has to identify the rapist please please please.
I loving Bette and Tina…and this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great chapter. I really like this Bette, she is so funny and cute. Hope she be ok in the lineup. Post soon, thank you!
I, Too, like this Bette…she has such a funny attitude…its a great change from the Bette on the show….thanx for this and please continue soon…….
I just caught up reading your story. I love it! great job, please continue, soon.
I love this story.
I continue to enjoy this story. Good story line and nice relationship between B & T
This is just getting better and better as we go along. Now this is one story I would not miss…can´t wait for an update. Post soon
Bette will be able to make it through this with the support of her family.
i dont wanna push u but: WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER???;) i am so addicted to this story and i cant stand to wait too long for the next part. I love this story, tho its pretty sad, but i have to admit that i like Bette very much and shes even funny, who would have thought:p