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Bette Forgets 11
So what did this mirror do to you, I ask jokingly trying to lighten the mood
It reflected who I truly am, Bette said softly
I look up at her at this statement, You are an amazing, smart and beautiful woman Bette, I spoke looking her in the eyes, That is who you truly are.
She shrugs her shoulders and looks down at her hands as I return to clearing out the glass embedded within them.
Doctor Winters is right, I hear Tina say from off to the side and see her step closer, There is just a lot of stuff going on right now. Things are all still too new for you. Everything will be right. Youll see.
Wow this woman is amazing I marvel. No wonder Bette fell for her. I watch as Bette smiles shyly at this and return to watching her hands.
Shes going to need stitches right, Tina asks
Lots and lots of stitches, I answer
*Bette*
I feel rather stupid for my little tantrum, even though it felt oddly good to smash that mirror, until I felt the pain. The pain really sucked. I am really thinking about what Doctor Winters and Tina said to me. Im still me. Thats quite the concept to think about. So much has changed and yet Im still me. Bette Porter. Im still her even through all of this, shes still me.
I watch as Doctor Winters and one of the nurses get all of the glass out of my hands. Damn I really did a number on them didnt I? I look over at Tina to see her watching me intently. She sees me watching her and smiles at me. Oh lordy. I cant help but smile back at her and this causes her to smile wider. Vicious cycle I tell you.
So uh…Doc how man stitches are we talking about? Lots and lots doesnt really give us a definitive answer.
She smiles at this, Well the cuts on your right hand on more extensive then your left. Im thinking maybe thirty or so in the right and…seventeen in the left.
Thats a lot of stitches, Kit comments from behind and slightly to the left of Winters
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(74 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
I like this. It’s heavy but good. Great job!
pretty f*cking cute. ;)
great story please keep the chapters coming Thank you
I love this story :))
I like this story. Bette is so innocent and cute. Tina has such patience. Thanks
I LOVE this story line. You have a wonderful imagination. I apprecitate you taking the time to read my stories and leave comments. Your opinion means so much to me. Did I say that I LOVE this story? Sorry it is hard to concentrate after reading such a great chapter. Keep them coming. I am hanging on every one of your words.:-)
I really like this story. Just wanted to let you know, since I don’t always leave a comment.
Thanks for another great chapter. Love seeing this side of Bette. Love seeing the interaction between Tina and Bette.
I agree w/ everyone else, I love this story. And I love the ‘softer’ side of Bette. Please let her identify the right guy and I hope that you deliver some good justice to them.
Congratulations on another great chapter. You move the story so well and the dialog is crisp and meaningful. I’ll say it again if I have to: I’m loving this story. Your imagination is wonderful. You’ve swept me right along with you. Thanks.
I love this story. I can’t wait for more.
I love this story. This chapter had a really cute ending. Can’t wait for the next one!!
great story, can’t wait for more..
I LOVE THIS STORY..I WANT MORE PLEASE
This story is so well thought out and well written Bette’s so open and somewhat innocent, it’s refreshing I love this story–thanks for sharing your talents with us!
i like this… bette is so cute!!!
I love the innocence of Bette in this story. I hope seeing the suspect in the lineup doesn’t freak her out too much.
Great chapter again. I like to see this different side of Bette. I will be waiting to see how Bette pieces back her life as she has lost so much time.
The identification of the attacker is just one of the obstacles she has to get through. Will she able to accept what happen between herself and Tina? And how about the baby? Can she accept the way it was being conceived? Well, I will be waiting for all that parts to unravel then. I also liked the way you end this chapter too. It’s lighted just like you said.
Continue on, and I will read wherever you might lead us..:)
this is really good – it is heavy and intense but very well written. but please let Bette go to therapy before she has to identify the rapist please please please.
I loving Bette and Tina…and this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great chapter. I really like this Bette, she is so funny and cute. Hope she be ok in the lineup. Post soon, thank you!
I, Too, like this Bette…she has such a funny attitude…its a great change from the Bette on the show….thanx for this and please continue soon…….
I just caught up reading your story. I love it! great job, please continue, soon.
I love this story.
I continue to enjoy this story. Good story line and nice relationship between B & T
This is just getting better and better as we go along. Now this is one story I would not miss…can´t wait for an update. Post soon
Bette will be able to make it through this with the support of her family.
i dont wanna push u but: WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER???;) i am so addicted to this story and i cant stand to wait too long for the next part. I love this story, tho its pretty sad, but i have to admit that i like Bette very much and shes even funny, who would have thought:p