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    Bette Forgets 12

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53118
    Author Notes:

    Bette identifies Gracy and then something weird happens.

    *Bette*

    After a rather embarrassing trip to the bathroom and a delightful lunch Tina and I headed off to the police station. She kept glancing at me as if to make sure I still wanted to do this. I was starting to wonder if this was a good idea myself. What if more of my memories come back when I see this guy? Will I be able to handle it?

    Are you sure about this, I hear Tina ask

    Boy is she a mind reader or what?

    I have to do this now or else I never will, I respond surprising myself in the process

    Tina nodded her head as we pulled into the police station. Nice building. I am kind of learning to live with my seemingly random thoughts. Its very strange sometimes.

    Tina gets out and helps me out of the car as we head inside.

    *Hallow*

    I am hovering over my phone waiting for Bette to call to cancel this visit to the office. Im not honeslty expecting her to come in for a visit today. She just got out of the hospital after all.

    Ben, I hear Teyla remark from my doorway

    What, I ask looking up

    Theyre here.

    Hot damn thats awesome but I give a more sedate, Good. Ill be right out.

    She rolls her eyes at me and leaves my office. Straightening my tie I get to my feet and go outside of my office to see Bette and I presume Tina standing near the front desk.

    Ms. Porter, I comment reaching her

    She turns to me and smiles, Please call me Bette. This is Tina.

    I shake hands with Tina and turn to shake Bettes hand but she holds up her bandaged hands.

    What happened, I hear myself asking, I thought everything had healed by now?

    I had a little accident earlier, is all that Bette supplies

    I smile at this, Can I give you a hug?

    She raises an eyebrow at this.

    I dont mean to sound strange or anything but Ive worked on this case for so long and finally I get to see you alive, awake and standing in front of me. Its a little emotional is all.

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    8. I loved every word. It was so moving but hard to describe. Love, hate and forgiveness are the thoughts that come to mind. Thank you ! You are the best writer. Hands down!

    9. You should be so so proud – this was awesome. I work with a lot of survivors of violence and the strength you portray is real as well as the vulnerability. Thanks for doing such a fabulous job.

    11. reba_kathy – wow. This must have taken alot out of you. I was crying and so thankful you saved me with your last line. That was a nice touch.

      Thanks for spending the time and energy for this chapter. I have read about this “bond” between victim and suspect; you captured very well.

      I can’t wait for you to continue this story, hopefully with happier moments?!

    13. You have a lot to be proud of this is excellent story telling thanks for sharing this well written great story. Rest up we are anxiously waiting for more.

    17. If that section was this hard for me to read, I can’t even imagine how you managed to write it. Weird stuff but utterly intriguing. The different points of view weave together so nicely to advance the story. I’m so loving your work! Thank you.

    18. Wonderful! You should be proud. This was a great chapter and I loved that you left on a lite note. This story is just great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    20. Finally an update:D yay *bounces around*
      I do understand Bettes move with Gracey, even tho there is still this tiny thought that says: WTF?..amazing story. i am already addicted, pls more very soon!

    25. well well Raba…you sure know how to give us a smile in the end.
      This is so wonderfull a story – can´t wait for an update. Please let us have some more very soon

    26. Your Bette is so interesting as she has this surreal quality about her. Maybe it’s from her near life experience which allows her a different reality but whatever it is I love it thanks.

    28. Wow, that was some intense moments between Bette and Gracy (that is his name, right? oh well.) It’s good though, no one really understands what someone goes thru something as dramatic as being violated and closed to death. I was happy for the way Bette handled it, though. Great writing, and insight.

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