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    Bette Forgets 12

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Bette identifies Gracy and then something weird happens.

    Bette beams the most beautiful smile my way and pulls me into a tight hug. I bring my arms around her and hold her for a moment.

    Okay, I remark clearing my throat after we let each other go, Are you ready for that line up?

    As Ill ever be, Bette says, You should know that my memories not so hot so… she shrugs

    I hadnt known she had amnesia. Why hadnt Stacy told me that?

    How much of your memory are you missing?

    The last eighteen years or so.

    My eyebrow goes up at this. How is she going to do a line up then?

    I remember bits and pieces of those years, she quickly states upon seeing my look, And I remember some of the attack. Not everything but I do remember seeing these guys.

    I inwardly sigh at this, Thats good. Follow me.

    *Bette*

    I follow the detective who keeps looking at me as if Im going to disappear any minute. Im not getting a pervert vibe or anything from this. I think working on my case for so long and seeing pictures of me and maybe seeing me in the hospital had gotten to him. Seeing me in front of him, as he said, is a little much for him at the moment. I think this guy has the hots for Stacy to tell the truth.

    We follow him into a room that has one wall full of glass. There are a few chairs in front of the window but I remain standing. Hallow pushes a button against the wall.

    Show them in, he says into an intercom

    A door on the other side of the glass opens and seven men enter that room and line up under numbers facing me. Stepping closer to the glass I peer at these men, these criminals. I study each man as much as I can and when I get to the fifth guy it triggers a memory.

    ~Opening my eyes I look around. Im shackled to a wall in some dank cell somewhere. My hands are above my head and Im very much naked and cold. My body is positively on fire from the pain that has been inflicted upon it. Im not sure how much time has passed since these three men took me. Hours, days…I dont know. I do now they seem to have no remorse of what they are doing to me. Just then I hear the door creek open and wait for the inevitable.

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    8. I loved every word. It was so moving but hard to describe. Love, hate and forgiveness are the thoughts that come to mind. Thank you ! You are the best writer. Hands down!

    9. You should be so so proud – this was awesome. I work with a lot of survivors of violence and the strength you portray is real as well as the vulnerability. Thanks for doing such a fabulous job.

    11. reba_kathy – wow. This must have taken alot out of you. I was crying and so thankful you saved me with your last line. That was a nice touch.

      Thanks for spending the time and energy for this chapter. I have read about this “bond” between victim and suspect; you captured very well.

      I can’t wait for you to continue this story, hopefully with happier moments?!

    13. You have a lot to be proud of this is excellent story telling thanks for sharing this well written great story. Rest up we are anxiously waiting for more.

    17. If that section was this hard for me to read, I can’t even imagine how you managed to write it. Weird stuff but utterly intriguing. The different points of view weave together so nicely to advance the story. I’m so loving your work! Thank you.

    18. Wonderful! You should be proud. This was a great chapter and I loved that you left on a lite note. This story is just great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    20. Finally an update:D yay *bounces around*
      I do understand Bettes move with Gracey, even tho there is still this tiny thought that says: WTF?..amazing story. i am already addicted, pls more very soon!

    25. well well Raba…you sure know how to give us a smile in the end.
      This is so wonderfull a story – can´t wait for an update. Please let us have some more very soon

    26. Your Bette is so interesting as she has this surreal quality about her. Maybe it’s from her near life experience which allows her a different reality but whatever it is I love it thanks.

    28. Wow, that was some intense moments between Bette and Gracy (that is his name, right? oh well.) It’s good though, no one really understands what someone goes thru something as dramatic as being violated and closed to death. I was happy for the way Bette handled it, though. Great writing, and insight.

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