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    Bette Forgets 12

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Bette identifies Gracy and then something weird happens.

    Closing my eyes I wait for the slap or the harsh words but nothing comes. Opening one eye I see the younger one, Tom, standing in front of me, just staring. Opening my other eye I stare back. When this starts to get distinctly uncomfortable on so many levels I finally speak.

    What, I finally ask

    He seems slightly caught off guard by me speaking, Why, he asks after a moment

    What the ***** kind of question was that? Why? I was in so much pain that I could barely concentrate at times. How dare he ask me a question like that? Not one to keep a biting remark to myself I speak.

    Why do you have to be an *****, I rasp

    He smiles faintly at this, Fair enough point. Answer my question first.

    Why? Do you mean…hy…Im…*****?

    He nods his head at this and I shrug my shoulders which is such a bad idea. I groan as this sends a wave of dizziness throughout my body. Once my vision clears I see him, Tom, squatting down in front of me so we are eye to eye.

    Who…I…am, I say finally

    Tom contemplates this for a moment and then runs a finger across my jaw sending shivers up my spine.

    So none of this even turns you on?

    You mean violence…and…blood…then no.

    A full out smile brightens his face, I meant having ***** with men.

    No.

    He sighs at this, I am trying to convince the others to let you go.

    That is music to my bleeding ears and I try not to let my excitement at this prospect show. At seeing the sadness in his eyes that glimmer of hope diminishes.

    If they let you go its not likely youll survive.

    But Ill have a chance right?

    He nods, A small one.

    Thats…better…than…here.

    It is at that. Sleep now. Save your strength for when you are really going to need it.

    I nod my head slowly as if not to jangle anything unduly and watch as he walks up the stairs leading out of this prison. I know that man hurt me, did unspeakable things to me and yeta small part of me is grateful to him and always will be~

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    8. I loved every word. It was so moving but hard to describe. Love, hate and forgiveness are the thoughts that come to mind. Thank you ! You are the best writer. Hands down!

    9. You should be so so proud – this was awesome. I work with a lot of survivors of violence and the strength you portray is real as well as the vulnerability. Thanks for doing such a fabulous job.

    11. reba_kathy – wow. This must have taken alot out of you. I was crying and so thankful you saved me with your last line. That was a nice touch.

      Thanks for spending the time and energy for this chapter. I have read about this “bond” between victim and suspect; you captured very well.

      I can’t wait for you to continue this story, hopefully with happier moments?!

    13. You have a lot to be proud of this is excellent story telling thanks for sharing this well written great story. Rest up we are anxiously waiting for more.

    17. If that section was this hard for me to read, I can’t even imagine how you managed to write it. Weird stuff but utterly intriguing. The different points of view weave together so nicely to advance the story. I’m so loving your work! Thank you.

    18. Wonderful! You should be proud. This was a great chapter and I loved that you left on a lite note. This story is just great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    20. Finally an update:D yay *bounces around*
      I do understand Bettes move with Gracey, even tho there is still this tiny thought that says: WTF?..amazing story. i am already addicted, pls more very soon!

    25. well well Raba…you sure know how to give us a smile in the end.
      This is so wonderfull a story – can´t wait for an update. Please let us have some more very soon

    26. Your Bette is so interesting as she has this surreal quality about her. Maybe it’s from her near life experience which allows her a different reality but whatever it is I love it thanks.

    28. Wow, that was some intense moments between Bette and Gracy (that is his name, right? oh well.) It’s good though, no one really understands what someone goes thru something as dramatic as being violated and closed to death. I was happy for the way Bette handled it, though. Great writing, and insight.

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