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Bette Forgets 12
Why wouldnt I be, she asks me in her normal Bette voice
That was a little…
Strange?
Yeah.
She smiles at me, It was wasnt it?
Hallows joins us at this point, We have a team headed out to Deer Lake that should be there by the end of the day.
Thats wonderful, I remark, Do you suppose that they are still there?
Hopefully because we havent announced to the general public that we even caught Gracy. They have no way of knowing.
Detective, Bette asks
Please call me Ben.
Bette smiles, Ben? I dont want Gracy to get the death penalty.
This surprises Hallows and myself once again.
Why the ***** not, I ask Bette
Because he saved my life, is all she says, Ill be in the car.
She slowly walks away from us and I turn to the Detective who is staring after Bette with a peculiar expression.
That was very weird, I comment to him
Ive seen things like this actually.
How could he possibly have seen something like this?
He smiles at seeing my expression, Victim and suspect for some weird bond during the ordeal, whatever it is. This seems to be the case between Bette and Mr. Gracy.
But thats ridiculous. That man in there brutalized her.
Yes he did, Hallows states, But he also saved her.
How so?
Why dont you take the wonderful lady home and we can talk about this some other time.
Nodding my head I hold out my hand to shake his, Thank you for everything Ben.
She is most certainly worth it Tina.
She is at that.
With a last goodbye I head out to the car and get in glancing at Bette who is leaning back with her eyes closed.
I dont know how I knew he was the father or that were having a son, Bette states not opening her eyes, I just do. He is yours and my son now though.
Uh…thats good, I comment not really knowing what to say
Bette smiles at this, Youll see.
I start up the car and on the way home my cell phone starts ringing. Bette opens her eyes and picks up the phone.
*Bette*
Tina Kennards phone, I announce with a smile
Hey Bette this is Kit. How are you doing?
Im doing okay Kit. Were on our way home after visiting the police station.
Why were you at the police station?
I had to identify Gracy, I reply simply
Oh I see. Youre okay though?
Im okay. A little tiredactually Im majorly tired but Ill get to rest soon.
Thats good baby sister. You and that little one need all of the sleep that you can get.
Yes we do. Was there a specific reason you called, I ask her curiously
I just wanted to see if maybe tomorrow you would be up for seeing the girls. They are driving me batty with requests to do just this.
I smile at this, That sounds fine Kit. Ill run it by Tina and well let you know.
Okay. I love you Bette.
I love you too Kit.
I push the end button with one finger and stick it back in Tinas purse.
What did Kit want?
She wanted to know if the girls could come over tomorrow.
Tina glances over at me, Do you think youll be up for it? Today has been a hard day.
Why dont we just wait until tomorrow and see.
I knew there was a reason I married you. So smart, Tina smiles at me
I smile back, T, I hesitantly ask
Yeah, she asks pulling into our driveway
I have to use the bathroom again and its not number one.
TBC…I needed a light note again after the heaviness of this chapter. Woo! I’m proud of it but it took a lot out of me.
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(100 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
Amazing fic, yours always make me so emotional!!!ahh.
Wow! No wonder that was so hard to write…but you did an excellent job! Thank you…
Interesting…and weird…and well done.
Outstanding. You have me sitting on the edge of my seat.
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! i can tell you put a lot of effort into this.. your writing is beautiful! cant wait until the next chapter.. ;o)
Amazing chapter well done,I love how you write keep it up can’t wait for next post…
Bravo!!!
I loved every word. It was so moving but hard to describe. Love, hate and forgiveness are the thoughts that come to mind. Thank you ! You are the best writer. Hands down!
You should be so so proud – this was awesome. I work with a lot of survivors of violence and the strength you portray is real as well as the vulnerability. Thanks for doing such a fabulous job.
Whoa! that was intense. Excellent job. More soon please.
reba_kathy – wow. This must have taken alot out of you. I was crying and so thankful you saved me with your last line. That was a nice touch.
Thanks for spending the time and energy for this chapter. I have read about this “bond” between victim and suspect; you captured very well.
I can’t wait for you to continue this story, hopefully with happier moments?!
SUCH AN AWESOME CHAPTER…….AND WONDERFUL STORY….YOU HAVE A GOOD EYE FOR WRITIN…PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS AND YOUR OTHER ONE SOOON……
You have a lot to be proud of this is excellent story telling thanks for sharing this well written great story. Rest up we are anxiously waiting for more.
Wow, utterly amazing. You have outdone yourself. Please continue soon.
Good chapter. Bette was very strong in this chp. Write more soon.
EXCELLENT EXCELLENT That’s all I can say. Post soon, thank you!
If that section was this hard for me to read, I can’t even imagine how you managed to write it. Weird stuff but utterly intriguing. The different points of view weave together so nicely to advance the story. I’m so loving your work! Thank you.
Wonderful! You should be proud. This was a great chapter and I loved that you left on a lite note. This story is just great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Yeah – all of the above. Thank-you
Finally an update:D yay *bounces around*
I do understand Bettes move with Gracey, even tho there is still this tiny thought that says: WTF?..amazing story. i am already addicted, pls more very soon!
this is so emotional. Bette shows some forgiveness even after all she has been through
reba.. what else can i possibly say when everything’s already been said!!! All of the above and just a thank you from me…
That was…Wow! Fantastic! I can see why it took so much out of you…looks like you put your heart and soul into it.
Thanks.
I know this chapter took a lot out of you, but you should be very proud of the finished product. This was amazing!!!
well well Raba…you sure know how to give us a smile in the end.
This is so wonderfull a story – can´t wait for an update. Please let us have some more very soon
Your Bette is so interesting as she has this surreal quality about her. Maybe it’s from her near life experience which allows her a different reality but whatever it is I love it thanks.
Another great one. Glad that everything turns out fine. Thank you for sharing your time and this story with us..I really appreciate it.
Wow, that was some intense moments between Bette and Gracy (that is his name, right? oh well.) It’s good though, no one really understands what someone goes thru something as dramatic as being violated and closed to death. I was happy for the way Bette handled it, though. Great writing, and insight.